Date: 02/19/10 06:50 pm Title: Tom @ 44
First of all, it's hard to remind myself they're FREAKING OLD now xD And it amuses me that Bill still puts on makeup at 44 years old. I wonder what he'll look like then .__. And no lie, this is making me even more scared to grow up than I normally am. Not because it's badly written or anything. Just as I see them progressing towards older age, it's kind of frightening to think it will happen to me. I want to be seventeen forever ;___;
Second, WHAT IS WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS. Honestly. I can't help but think maybe it's something to do with Tom not being able to read the clock? Or maybe it's something with Bill...I looked up GP and apparently a GP treats everything and is a main doctor. So that didn't give me any clues -___-
Author's Response: LOL. They really aren't that old here, in all honesty. As far as what's coming though - you are right something is coming and GP is a general family doctor type. Answers will come next chapter and the one after. ♥!
Date: 02/19/10 05:51 pm Title: Tom @ 44
Oh my god. This story is going to be incredibly heartbreaking. Poor poor Tomi. Oh god, I want to cry.
Author's Response: I'm sorry ;_;
Date: 02/19/10 04:00 pm Title: Tom @ 7
Yep, gotta review again. You did very well foreshadowing. I knew something was coming, just not this exact something XD
Author's Response: *hugs* I'm sorry!
Date: 02/19/10 03:51 pm Title: Tom @ 44
Even if this it not a total surprise, it's still so tragic! I was already almost afraid to open a new chapter, cause I knew something bad was coming soon and now it's here.
I just read the warning "Major character death" for the first time right now and thought like "Oh...sh*t". I seriously didn't see it before, cause I tend to skip the warnings and now I'm even more anxious about how this is going to continue. I'm so sorry for both of them!
They already had to go through so much, and now another horrible things is going to make them suffer. *sigh*
Still a wonderful story, though! I really wish I could just stop reading now, cause then they'd still be happy, but I can't, cause you're story is too good to not finish it.
Author's Response: Oops, lol. The warning was there from first post so that people would know what would happen. I'm glad you're enjoying it and I hope you continue to be touched by the fic as it carries on. ♥ Thank for you reviewing!
Date: 02/19/10 03:46 pm Title: Tom @ 7
omg i think i get it now. and it's sooo horrible i'm afraid of writing it...but i just KNOW it...tom's gonna get a very bad mortal disease and when he dies bill will kill himself too. am i wrong? please tell me i am. oh my, i think i'll cry a lot while reading the next chapters...*sniff*
Author's Response: You aren't entirely right, no. I'm sorry in advance for being all sad though!
Date: 02/19/10 03:38 pm Title: Tom @ 7
something VERY bad is about to happen, i feel it. i don't want bill to die young...please tell me he won't *pleading voice*
Author's Response: No one's dying in the next couple of chapters, promise.
Date: 02/19/10 03:15 pm Title: Tom @ 44
this story is loving and confusing but im up to date on it. keep updating
Author's Response: Lol, I will do! ♥
Date: 02/19/10 02:40 pm Title: Tom @ 44
;_; the waterworks are starting over here
Author's Response: :( *hugs*
Date: 02/19/10 02:27 pm Title: Tom @ 44
:(
whaaat *hangs*
Author's Response: ;_; I'm sorry!
Date: 02/19/10 01:58 pm Title: Tom @ 44
NO TOM'S NOT ALLOWED TO BE LIKE GRANDMA ROSE! -waves Dollie!Bill frantically-
So, yeah this little twist that's come in in these two chapters, I never saw that one coming, if it's what I think it is
Author's Response: I'm sorry :( There were many efforts to foreshadow!
Date: 02/19/10 11:50 am Title: Tom @ 44
he has Alzheimer's Disease?
so sad =(
Author's Response: :( You'll see soon, but astute.
Date: 02/19/10 11:05 am Title: Tom @ 44
OMG I knew it... Bill knew that at some point Tom was gonna be sick but he wouldn't tell... So sad now...
(I'm in my hotel in Esch checking the internet before going back to camp before the venue lol)
Author's Response: I hope you have fun, lol. Might not want to check the later updates if you check back again!
Date: 02/19/10 08:36 am Title: Tom @ 44
All cred to you that manage to bring tears to my eyes with less than 800 words. I don't think that's ever happened before...
I don't want this to end, but I don't want it to continue either because I KNOW it'll leave me heartbroken... Ah, this is magic, YOU create magic. Thank you.
Author's Response: I did go through a moment of not wanting to post. Thank you so much for this review ♥
Date: 02/19/10 08:30 am Title: Tom @ 44
Oh my gosh!! Is that what happens to Tom?! He gets an illness or something??
Author's Response: >.> ...yes? ;_;
Date: 02/19/10 08:29 am Title: Tom @ 7
oh, this is bad. This is very bad. I love reading this story at the start of my day. I really look forward to it. You've done a really good job.
Author's Response: Thank you ♥ I'm so pleased you're enjoying it and thank you for letting me know!
Date: 02/19/10 08:04 am Title: Tom @ 44
Why do I have an awful feeling after reading this chapter? Why do I get the notion that Tom's little lapse in memory isn't so innocent? That it wasn't just because of him being tired that he couldn't read the clock right at first? I'm not sure I want to know what happens next. I remember in previous chapters the Bill from this time that appeared, and I don't want to see why Bill becomes so sad. Can we go back to the beginning and NOT have anything bad happen with Tom, like I have a strong feeling is going to happen? Please tell me my intuition is just off and that I read this all wrong.
Author's Response: I'd love to tell you your intuition is off, but there's been a lot of foreshadowing for a reason. The story is circular in a way though, because there are links from end to beginning and all throughout. I hope you keep going!
Date: 02/19/10 07:11 am Title: Tom @ 44
Oh god.
It's soon.
The time is coming.
Ah crap.
Please update soon.
Please.
Author's Response: I'm sorry ♥
Date: 02/19/10 06:46 am Title: Tom @ 44
Bill...god, I feel for you. Tomi, you truly are everything he's ever needed, you know? Bill would go through any lengths to make sure you're still together, always. He has and he will. It's just the only way there ever was.
*hugs you three*
Author's Response: :( *clings!!*
Date: 02/19/10 03:19 am Title: Tom @ 44
Okay, this chapter made me cry. Tom constantly forgetting things and now not even able to read the time right; that just got to me. Poor Tom, does he have Alzheimer's?
Author's Response: :( I'm sorry for making you cry. You'll get an answer to that in fic shortly, but very astute.
Date: 02/19/10 01:35 am Title: Tom @ 43
Shizzz something is gunna happen and Im gunna cry and it's gunna be all
T_T
lol
Can't wait for an updattteeee <3
ily!
Author's Response: ♥ You got one already, lol!