Date: 01/24/10 03:32 am Title: Stretched to the limit
Oh, DAMN, that was good! Lol, at the beginning, I was so confused; I was thinking, "...Bill and Tom are having sex????" And my next thought was that he was having a dream. I definitely wasn't expecting for him to only be stretching, haha! Nice job.
I love your writing style so much. It's so short and sweet and to the point, yet at the same time, manages to paint out the entire scene; I can see it all like a movie in my head.
Bill and Tom's interactions are great, and I love how the little things show their friendship, such as Tom flicking Bill's ribs before leaving, and Bill being dramatic. It's really cute, and really makes it realistic.
I'm looking forward to reading more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! This really means a lot to me because I love your stories, and I'm seriously really excited that you liked it. 8D
Date: 01/24/10 03:25 am Title: Prologue: Rocks and Reality
I like this so far! It's well written, and your style is really nice. I'm already hooked and intrigued. I'm tracking this, and I can't wait to see where it goes! :D
Date: 01/20/10 07:48 am Title: Stretched to the limit
This seems to be a good story start :D continue soon ;D
Author's Response: Thank you! :3
Date: 01/18/10 02:19 am Title: Prologue: Rocks and Reality
Nice start :D
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!