Date: 01/18/10 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 3-Fall Again
Now that's what I like to see! ^_^ Aah, Tom. :) Yeaa, he just made it better lol. I guess to kind of balance the drama out. I'm surprised Bill didn't tie her to a chair so she would have to watch him sleep. *-*
I wonder if Chris will actually get record deal and Tom won't "forget" like Bill does. =9
Author's Response: lol yeah I like to balacne it out. Tom is such a sweetheart in this compared to Bill. :)rnI'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 01/18/10 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 2-The Cell Phone Incident
Oh, don't stop there! I feel kind of bad now for not letting my one story like this continue. It just stopped right after the OFC is worn down by the bandmember. Waah. :( But actually no, I'd rather see yours and read what happens next. This side of Bill is so ugly that it's funny. lol She should go while the officer is in the shower. ;)
Continue, please. :)
Author's Response: Lol, it'd be cool if you did continue! Yeah, this controlling side of Bill is horrible,but he won't always be like that. :)
Date: 01/18/10 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 2-The Cell Phone Incident
I really like this story so far...Especially the way the emotion you're releasing through the protagonist and her oppressor....But b/c it's in a way that may be predictable in a relationship with a paranoid and controlling person...
Really good job! Keep it up! Lol!
Author's Response: Exactly! Thanks for understanding that! And thanks for taking time to r+r! I'll update soon!
Date: 01/18/10 06:39 am Title: Chapter 1
OOps! Happy to see your lovely story here! I'll keep checking it with the same pleasure!
Author's Response: Hey! I didn't know u were on here. Haha thanks! :-)
Date: 01/18/10 01:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, that's sad! I wrote a story like this a while ago (Tom/OFC) and it never ceases to amaze me how well and believable they are! Of course the girl always surrenders to the needs of the bandmember. Wow. It was an overall job well done. I liked it. :) By the way, this came up as my "Random Story" and not only that, I love Foolish by Ashanti. :D Good job once again!
Author's Response: Yeah they are! Thanks so much for your comment.haha really?! That's so cool. And yeah that's my song. There will be more on the way I assure you. :)