Date: 10/15/10 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 8: False Pretense
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Date: 10/09/10 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 8: False Pretense
I really like this story so far PLEASE update soon!
Date: 08/08/10 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 5: You Might Have Noticed
club. definately club
Date: 07/19/10 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 8: False Pretense
Oh LOL Ah luhv it :] Can't wait for the next chapter, babe!
Date: 07/07/10 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 8: False Pretense
that was great... more soon, bitte bitte!!!!!!!!
Date: 06/07/10 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1: The City is at War
Umm... I think I know who made this banner, and if I'm not asking to much, can you please credit her? She doesn't mind at all someone using her banners as long as she gets credit. Thank you :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reminding my blond ass to put the credit!!!!!! Normally, it's the first thing I do, but I was rushing to post stories and school got in the way, so I didn't have the time to fine tune stuff! I put the credit in the story note! -hug-
Date: 06/07/10 05:36 am Title: Chapter 8: False Pretense
Aaah that was awesome =) xxx
Date: 04/18/10 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 7: Kill the Lights
I am totally loving this story! Update soon, k? ;D I was so bummed when the "next" button wasn't there :$ I'll just sit here and wait for the next chapter... ;P
Date: 02/20/10 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 7: Kill the Lights
Eeeeep!!! Loved it!
Out of school...Bill's pretty normal lol xxx
Date: 02/20/10 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Creationist
Wow...what an update...I love it...the story line, the outfits and the little diva bitch that is Bill XD xxx
Date: 02/19/10 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 7: Kill the Lights
oooohhh!!
LOVE IT!!!
CAN YOU PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS AND UPDATE FASTER?
KUDOS!
Date: 02/19/10 11:48 am Title: Chapter 7: Kill the Lights
Arh, forgot to mention how flippin' sweet your banner is! I wanna have its babies!(Is that even possible?) Anwho, update soon, please.
Date: 02/19/10 11:27 am Title: Chapter 3: American Beauty
It's been said before, but I'll say it again: What an awesome concept.
It makes you think quite a bit.
And the namedropping is a cool detail too. Lady Gaga ftw!
Date: 01/29/10 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Creationist
I have Gabrielle's shirt... I feel awesome now xD
Date: 01/28/10 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Creationist
this is amazing like extremly amazing
very creative and different
i completly loved reading your first six chapters and cant wait to read the rest
i could so imagine being in this like really there .
how awesome would that be
this is totally being tracked
i love this
update soon
oh yer btw love the outfits very nice
loves and hugs
xx
^_^
Date: 01/26/10 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Creationist
Just as the rest of it I loved this chapter as well.
The story is really good! The Plot, the characters...everything's just amazing!
Date: 01/26/10 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 5: You Might Have Noticed
CLUBBBBB!!! :D
Date: 01/26/10 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 5: You Might Have Noticed
Classical..please!!, Let it be waltz!
GOOD CHAPTER! I absolutely love this story. Keen on reading more :D
Date: 01/26/10 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 5: You Might Have Noticed
clubbbbb! they can dress all shiny! I like Shiny O_0
Date: 01/26/10 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 5: You Might Have Noticed
Salsa, hands down, hottest dance in the world!