Date: 08/16/14 11:45 pm Title: Royal Rejection
Will George fall in love with her?? But it's a great start. Like an actual book.a86;a039;a86;a039;
Date: 03/28/10 07:14 pm Title: Royal Rejection
Sounds interesting... update soon :)
Date: 01/26/10 04:09 am Title: Royal Rejection
Ahhhh!! I must know!!!!!
I really like Bill's character!
UPDATE!!!
Date: 01/25/10 11:37 pm Title: Royal Rejection
This is very good! I love everything about it! I especially love your use of indirect presenation. Instead of telling me everything about the characters you show it to me thru their actions and dialouge. Update soon!
Date: 01/25/10 09:53 pm Title: Royal Rejection
So Bill is the one she has dreamt of for as long as she can remember and yet he rejects her because she is an ugly human to him. This is interesting however, i don't know what his reasons for starving himself except that there must be some compassion left in him or he would have feed from her or form someone els long ago. He seem arrogant but I'm not sure about him yet. More soon please.
Date: 01/18/10 03:13 pm Title: Unpaid
i absolutely love this story already!!
it has a very good plot idea...i think you could really make this work...and the detail you use just adds to the story amazingly.
update as soon as you can hun..this story is friggin' worth it!!
=D
Date: 01/18/10 03:45 am Title: Unpaid
I'm totally excited about this story! It seems like it will be a great one! Seriously can't wait for your next post! :)
Date: 01/17/10 11:42 pm Title: Unpaid
Interesting... I'm curious and what to know more. Please keep going the story is well done so far.
Date: 01/17/10 04:05 am Title: Unpaid
I'm veerry intrested.
Cannot wait to see what happens in the next few chapters. Update soon!
Date: 01/17/10 02:08 am Title: Unpaid
This is so good! Those men were evil and Im glad someone came to her rescue. Keep up the brilliant work!