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Reviewer: bubbles47 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Poor Georg.

 

 

This seems like such a cool story! LoL---Though I think you should add "Est. Relationship" "Alternate Universe" just so not to confuse people....Cause it did kind of confuse me at first...

 

But I like it! Lol! Keep it up!



Author's Response: Oh sorry!! I didn't mean to confuse you. I'll change it right now so that noone else gets confused XD Thank you dear :D

Reviewer: CandelightChaos Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The First Concert

I'm gonna go with Gustav.

Author's Response: It was Georg AND Vanessa. I decided to go with two people XD

Reviewer: AngelKisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Caught

yay! it was my Georgie Poo!! haha he's awesome!

i liked that he talked with her before she did anything crazy. he's such an awesome friend.

Vanessa is such a bitch but she works well into the story. maybe she can bring Tom and Scar together.

no offense to Bill or anything but i think Tom and Scar would be better together. Tom respects her and isn't as crazy as Bill seems to be.

Scar's outfit was freaking AWESOME! you have amazing taste

thanks for dedicating a great chapter to me! i feel so special

Author's Response: I'm glad you feel special! :) I tried to show their friendship more because all I was really showing was how much they rag on each other. And she will bring them together.. Tom has a trick up his sleeve. I feel bad making Bill the jerk because he's my favorite. But I make Tom stories for my readers like you! And thank you about my taste! I absolutely love that shirt XD

Reviewer: AlanaFacee Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Caught

scar needs to stick her foot up vanessas ass and then run her over with the tour bus?
open my coke? really.
i would have opened it and then thrown it on her.

Author's Response: But then her and Bill would be done. And then the story would go caput. You know this best friend of mine.

Reviewer: mr_ious Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/10 09:47 am Title: Chapter 5 - The First Concert

WOW!!! I LOVE THE CHAPTER!!!! WHEN WILL BE THE NEXT ONE??? PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT ONE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!! ADDICTED TO IT!!!

Author's Response: Soon, I promise! Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: head_over_heels_8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/10 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The First Concert

Oooohhhh!!!! Tom and Scar had a moment, lalalalalala *sings* hehehe.

I bet a million it was Bill that caught them! Busted! Hahaha but it almost seems so painfully obvious that it wouldn't actually be him. It would be funny if it was Gustav or Georg or something, that would give her a good scare.

And that Vanessa girl sounds like a total beeyotch! Scar shoulda put her in her place! Dang Bill for holding her back!

Love the story! Can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Mostly everyone thinks that it's Bill haha. Don't worry about Vanessa, Scar will get her piece in later ;D

Reviewer: Shay_09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/10 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The First Concert

Outfit equals the hawtness. And I say it's Alex. :D

Author's Response: That's a random ass guess Shaina lmao. I still love you though :D

Reviewer: Shay_09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/10 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Europe

Ooooo, betrayal of the mind. I am kind of rooting for Tom and Scar. HEHE.

Reviewer: Shay_09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/10 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Deja Vu

Buwahahahaha! His apron is soooo priceless. SCcar's outfit is straight sexy. I love it. This chapter was so good, Tom is a hottie. ; ]

Author's Response: Georg is a hottie with that apron lol! Thank you dear :D

Reviewer: Shay_09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/10 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 2 - You're Hired

OMFG, lol. Scar is hilarious.
And I need more Tom. Yeahhhh, next chapter!

Author's Response: I tried making her funny and sarcastic lol. Everyone wants more Tom. Where's the love for Bill!!! Lmao Love you girlie

Reviewer: AngelKisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/10 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The First Concert

Vanessa seems like a bitch. Bill should have let her beat her ass.

Tom is so right, she keeps making excuses for when Bill pushes her or something.

i don't think Bill caught them. it was probably Georg, i hope it was Georg

Author's Response: Vanessa is a bitch lol! And you are the first person to think its not Bill! But I guess we'll see who it was! ;D

Reviewer: AlanaFacee Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/10 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The First Concert

WHOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOO THEY KISSED!!!!!
Bill caught them of course.
AHH it was so good.
I love her outfit. i want it lol.

Author's Response: Yes they did :) And I wouldn't be so sure about that missy ;)

Reviewer: Shay_09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/10 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Poor Georg.

Ahh, this chapter is so cute!

Author's Response: Thank you dear :D

Reviewer: mr_ious Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/10 11:51 am Title: Chapter 4 - Europe

What is going to happen next?? Can't wiat!!! Please write some more!!! Addicted to it!!!

Author's Response: I'll write a new chapter today (hopefully XD) Thank you so much!! :D

Reviewer: AngelKisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/10 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Europe

aww so i guess Tom can't sleep on the bus with the band? that sucks! Bill should have to sleep with the roadies instead of Tom.

this was a great chapter, especially at the end when she wished she was kissing Tom instead of Bill.

Bill is too crazy at times for me and I think she noticed it too. She'd be better off with Tom

Author's Response: Aw thank you :) Scar is scary as hell too. I just haven't shown it yet. Both of their personalities will come out more within the next chapters.

Reviewer: mr_ious Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/10 10:24 am Title: Chapter 4 - Europe

i really like the story!! when will be th enext chapter??? so excited!!! please more!!

Author's Response: Either today or tomorrow. I promise to have it up before the weekend is over. Thank you so much!!!! :D

Reviewer: AlanaFacee Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/10 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Europe

DUDE!
It was perfect. =]]]
Love Love Love.
Especially the last line.

Author's Response: I thought of youuuuuuuu when I wrote that. :D

Reviewer: AngelKisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/10 01:45 am Title: Chapter 3 - Deja Vu

Scarlett knows she wants a piece of Tom. Bill may wanna watch out for him.

great chapter

Author's Response: Bill's not a happy camper right now XD Thank you :)

Reviewer: AlanaFacee Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/10 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Deja Vu

this did not suck. it was just a little sloww. I just have 3 words for you: LICKA LICKA VAFFLE!!

Author's Response: lmfaooooooo! :D

Reviewer: GeekChic Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/10 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 2 - You're Hired

Oooh me likes it! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'll try write a new chapter tonight. If not, I'll post one up tomorrow. I promise :) -hands cookie with picture of the twins- enjoy :D

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