Date: 01/28/10 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Beginnings
I love this story so much! I am sure that Bill is in love with Andy, but she doesnīt know about it...:) I think it would be very interesting to see jealous Bill, Andy should have a date with someone... Please update soon... (and sorry for my bad english :-)
Author's Response: Your English is perfectly fine :) Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 01/28/10 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
ok ew one hea!- liebe!!!!
i mean..this os THE 1 het ive read on this ite! aand i DO NOT REGRET IT! purly amaizing!!! keep on please...dont be hesitated!! :DDD
Author's Response: You have no idea how happy I feel when people say that mine is a het they didn't mind reading. Thank you for giving it a chance!
Date: 01/28/10 10:33 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
Ohh very good! I'm starting to think Bill is in love with Andy, or is that too easy? Hehe
Author's Response: It is easy, but getting there isn't! :D
Date: 01/28/10 08:11 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
idk, my only issue is that things seem to be moving too fast. i guess its possible that he fell in love with her over 6 month period of time. but us as readers havent seen the gradual process of it. first chapter he was a dick. this is the fifth chapter and im getting the feeling bill is in love with her. i dont know. its just moving really fast. you should have tom take interest in her. ohh bill's own brother :D
Author's Response: Hmm..I didn't want to put the Tom/OFC/Bill angle in actually, its way too common in het. And I think if you read carefully, he's nicer after he 'falls in love' which is after the third chapter. Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/28/10 07:40 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
I have no idea why the number of reviews is decreasing, but I have a suspicion: readers are so much into the story, that they devour it without blinking, forgetting to write their impressions. I know I do so. There is nothing you do wrong, you do it perfectly (you're assisting perfection after all). Just check the number of readers and you'll see I'm right. Anyway, I love that you're updating fast, because I'm totally curious after every chapter and I hate long time between posts. Go on, girl, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Well, when you put it that way, I just feel flattered.:)But the reason I like reviews are because I have an idea of what the readers think, which helps me write. And thanks, anyway. Update up tomorrow!
Date: 01/28/10 07:36 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
I love this story! I look forward to the updates!
Date: 01/28/10 05:36 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
Make Bill and Andy screw alreadly. lol
Great story, you're an awesome writer. You have me totally hooked.
Ps. Maybe Andy could change her mind and accept Simone's offer. Then Bill would miss her like like mad and he would go and confess his undying love for her and then they'd Fuck, or something like that. Just an idea I'd thought I'd throw in there. You're welcome to tell me u hate it.
Update soooooooon.
Love Jezzabella (my real name)
Date: 01/28/10 03:48 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
Nope I like it :D but I'm waiting some atrraction to the next chapter something diffrent... well today is a good day there's lots of snow everywhere all of my favorite fictions have new chapters including this and I'm gonna meet my old school friends :D :D it's a really good day thanks you add a brick to made my day stuff :D
Date: 01/28/10 03:43 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
Keep going, I'm starting to really love this story!
Date: 01/28/10 03:31 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
Ok, I just read through this whole thing and I have to say that this is great!!!You got a good story, it's different from outher's, and you are an awesome writer!!! And I'm sorry for my bad english :)
Date: 01/28/10 03:23 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
Ah i haven't any complaints I love this! Aw their both inlove with eachother and don't even realize it. Update soon.
Date: 01/28/10 03:05 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
Soooooooo goooooood!!!!!!! :D
Andy is soooooo in love with Bill... hahaa.. :D
I bet Billīs in love with Andy, too, but heīs just too...e....stupid, proud(?) to tell her n_n
Am i genius or what.... n_n
Okay, okay... Got a bit carried away.. :D Anyways.... Looove the chapter.
Thanks.
Date: 01/28/10 02:40 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
No, this chapters are great :) Make them litle longer and then their perfect ;)
Date: 01/28/10 02:02 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
It's perfect
Andy has poor self esteem and so she can't see the signs
Date: 01/28/10 12:21 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
Oh snap! Hahaha I'm guessing that Bill loves Andy... But it's just a suspicion... And Tom and Simone are so sweet to Andy, it's cute :)
I totally love the story, I swear, I check for updates on a daily basis! It's practically an addiction XD
Date: 01/28/10 12:13 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
You're doing nothing wrong! We're just a bunch of lazy bitches. ;) I really, really like this story. I think you are doing a great job, and I look forward to it - every time I see an update I get excited! I can't wait to see the future development of this situation....very nice. Bill might be human after all!
Date: 01/28/10 12:00 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
You're doing everything perfectly - keep up the good work! :) ooh and im pretty sure i know exactly who Bill is in love with ;) oh and i kept on meaning to say, I love that you named the main character Andy (b/c that's my nickname too, although w/ an 'ie') hehe :D
Date: 01/27/10 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
"but if you want to go then go, then go and leave me ere with all my pain and suffering..." oh! sorry i was singing mentally hah =D good good, Oh why'd she shut the computer off tom could have told her hat bill likes her, i mean thats just my prediction =DDD awesome!!!!
Date: 01/27/10 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 4: Love??
*grumbles nonesense* pff Bianca? Oh ym gosh so close tot he tears!! ahh! I love this story =DDDD
Date: 01/27/10 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 3: Damage Control
awww =D Geil!