Date: 03/04/10 10:56 am Title: Chapter 11: Confessions + Questions = Confusion + Overreactions
Very interesting and original story! Andy is nice character and Bill is very well portrayed. Thanks.
Date: 03/03/10 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 11: Confessions + Questions = Confusion + Overreactions
I LOVE this story! Continue soon :)
Date: 02/28/10 11:05 am Title: Chapter 11: Confessions + Questions = Confusion + Overreactions
your story completes my life(:
Date: 02/26/10 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 11: Confessions + Questions = Confusion + Overreactions
No problem! No problem at all- this is all still absolutely fantastic.
You have to update again soon. Please.
PLEASE.
Date: 02/26/10 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 10: Meeting Medusa
BILL AND LEAH!?
You have GOT to be kidding me!
Must read on, must read on...
Date: 02/26/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 9: Visitors and Surprises
Aw, they're going out! Finally!
Date: 02/26/10 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 8: Sabbaticals and Panic Attacks
Ooh, cliffhanger!
You know, I promised myself I'd only read one chapter tonight, because it's late. But I'm going to end up reading at least three now.
Date: 02/26/10 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 7: Riding Waves and Facing Medusa
O.M.G.
That stupid little manipulative witch! How dare she make Andy quit? How dare she call Bill a fag? How dare she try to make it look like he did Fred?
Argh, she makes me so angry I want to tear my hair out... must read on...
Date: 02/25/10 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 6: Temptations and Vacations
Aw... Bill is so unbeliveably adorable in this chapter.
Andy is very, very blind. She really can't figure out his feelings, can she?
Date: 02/25/10 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
I love this so much.
But at this point, I'm pretty sure Andy's either ignorant or has incredibly low self-esteem.
She cannot see what is right in front of her!
Date: 02/24/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 11: Confessions + Questions = Confusion + Overreactions
Nothing is wrong with this story, probably people just dont like to review stories, pff Well, i think this story is good and this chapt, cant wait for the next stay strong!!! =DDDD
Date: 02/24/10 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 11: Confessions + Questions = Confusion + Overreactions
I just read it all and I think it's just getting better!! Great story. Don't be depressed about this, it's really good :D
Date: 02/24/10 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 4: Love??
This made me laugh. A lot. My sister now thinks I'm crazy.
'Welcome back, depression'.
Classic...
Date: 02/23/10 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 11: Confessions + Questions = Confusion + Overreactions
So short-lived. Longer bitte, longer!
Eh..I am getting so tired of drama, though I'll admit it's part of every new relationship. I kinda wish there was a way to skip over all of that, but otherwise this was great. I'm glad to finally have an explanation on what happened (even if it's not all true). Can't wait to her Bill's side of the story. This should be interesting. ;)
Date: 02/23/10 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 2: Worries
Oh, I love this! I kinda feel like it ended on a cliffhanger, too.
Andy's concern for Bil is touching.
Date: 02/22/10 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Beginnings
Oh, this is so cool! I totally laughed my head off at diva Bill.
I understand Andy, though. It's impossible not to love him.
Date: 02/22/10 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 11: Confessions + Questions = Confusion + Overreactions
I'm still really enjoying this, keep up the good work ;)!
Date: 02/21/10 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 11: Confessions + Questions = Confusion + Overreactions
Awwww...Bill really likes her
Date: 02/21/10 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 11: Confessions + Questions = Confusion + Overreactions
I don't really think there is an issue with your writting.
I think part of the reason your review number has gone down is that your last 2 chapters have been quite short in comparison to the rest.
I get the point that pepele might think Bill and Andy have moved to fast, but I mean at the same time you wrote like 9 chapters with what 20,000 words on how they weren't together, how Andy was in love, Bill was acting funny, Andy finally quit and Bill finally woke up and smelled the roses so to speak. I think you have done well with showing what happened that night through Andy's thought process.
I don't really think you have anything to worry about as far as your writing goes because you clearly are talented in that department.
And as for your depression goes, I don't really know what to tell you with this. If this means your getting writer's block I would't worry. People will still be here to love this and review it when you come back. I think every person who is creative gets this. I paint and sometimes I get a sort of painters block where I produce nothing but absolute shit for months sometimes.
Now I am actually going to review the chapter haha.
On one hand I think Andy might be over reacting just a touch, its not like I have been in a committed relationship for very long. But at the same time I completely understand where she is coming from. If I was here I would be a little upset too. I mean she is just Andy and Leah maybe a complete bitch and a gorgeous model on top of it. If I were Andy I would feel just a little bit insecure about the whole situation.
I think she should talk to Bill about it. But in a non crazy clingy girlfriend way. She should also be giving him the benefit of the doubt, she so far as no reason not to trust him. And maybe his side of things will be completely different then Leahs. I mean this is the clearly a litlle crazy ex girlfriend... So she could be spewing shit. Okay this getting REALLY long.
Overall I thought it was a good chapter even if it was a little on the short side.
I won't tell you to update soon as the might not be possible. So instead update when you feel that you can. Love!
Ps I apologize for any major errors in this. Gotta love blackberry's!
Date: 02/21/10 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 11: Confessions + Questions = Confusion + Overreactions
dont worry, every day that i look for updates ur story is in top 3 that i look mostly for!1 :DDD hh i looovoe zis story ;D