Date: 03/09/11 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Beginnings
Lucky me - the magic number has already been passed, and I can safely review without having to feel guilty ^^
Sooo, first off, Bill. Wow, the way you've made his personality in this story is so different from the original one... and I love it! ^^
I also really, really like how perfectly you describe the perfection that is Bill :D
- Speaking of which, the title's perfect as well, everything about this story is just so... perfect XD
Also, Andy is a really lovable OFC with an excellent, dry sense of humor.
I don't usually get along well with OFC's - most of the time, I start hating them at some (early) point in the story for their weird / illogical / annoying thoughts and decisions XD
But Andy is great. I liked her from the beginning, and I only grew more fond of her throughout the story. She's a human being with both weaknesses and strengths, a consistent personality... and a brain - which makes her refreshingly different to most other OFC's I've come across so far XD
Actually, you manage to make pretty much all of the characters in the story so lifelike, and somehow also likable, each in their own unique way, it's amazing :)
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story, IceWolf, you are a very good author ^^
I have to admit I'm a little scared of reading the sequel now, because I really like how compact and, well, complete the story feels at this point.
BUT, I'm weak, and I really like your style, so I probably won't be able to resist for very long XD
Author's Response: Reviews like this one make it worth writing. Thank you so much. I'm glad you like Bill in my story, I tried very hard to make him unlike his usual self, because divas are so much fun to work with XD Andy's an OFC I'm personally quite fond of, because she was nothing like I wanted her to be. She built herself, which worked well, fortunately. I'm glad you liked my story, my writing, my work, and I appreciate you taking the time to tell me so. Also, I would not recommend the sequel XD Which is odd, since I wrote it, but its on hiatus, and I wouldn't want you to be disappointed. So, once again, thank you, and I'm glad you liked Assisting Perfection.
Date: 12/15/10 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue
I also, at one point, thought there was going to be some Andy/Gustav. I enjoyed this story a lot! Hate to review it and change the number from "483" to "484" hehehe.
Author's Response: Lol, no problem. Your opinion matters more XD And thank you! Also, I was kind of heading towards Andy/Gustav, but someone said they couldn't see it happening, which disappointed me a bit. I love Gusti love XD
Date: 11/19/10 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Beginnings
Ooooh, this is like the Devil Wears Prada Tokio Hotel style! Lol awesome!!!
Date: 10/09/10 10:39 am Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue
hey, I just read it all and I'm like OMG, it was perfect!! =)
it was such a good story, I don't know what else to say, really xD
oh and I want to ask you, that little thing you wrote before the epilogue, is it from some kind of song, or you wrote it by yourself??
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ And the song's an original, I wrote it for this story.
Date: 09/26/10 06:29 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
love it, love it, LOVE IT
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 09/26/10 04:36 am Title: Chapter 4: Love??
awesome story^^
Date: 07/19/10 08:06 am Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue
Awww cute ending!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/19/10 07:59 am Title: Chapter 17: Fred's Andy and Funny Tingles
XD epic. thats all i can say. epic!
Date: 07/19/10 07:47 am Title: Chapter 16: Georg's Explanation and Dangerous Driving
Once again GO Andy go!!
Date: 07/19/10 07:40 am Title: Chapter 15: Wedding Shit and Mysterious Flowers
I hate her right now she is so stupid!!!!!!!!!!!! :(
Date: 07/19/10 06:50 am Title: Chapter 13: Getting Romantic and Getting Mad
:{ Man those two stubborn idiots >.
Date: 07/19/10 06:29 am Title: Chapter 12: Vanilla and Getting On The Way
-pout- i wanna move in with bill >.>
Date: 07/19/10 06:16 am Title: Chapter 11: Confessions + Questions = Confusion + Overreactions
man ;(
Date: 07/19/10 06:16 am Title: Chapter 11: Confessions + Questions = Confusion + Overreactions
man ;(
Date: 07/19/10 06:10 am Title: Chapter 10: Meeting Medusa
Oh shit Bill's screwed!
Date: 07/19/10 06:05 am Title: Chapter 9: Visitors and Surprises
XD Those two perverts XD
Date: 07/19/10 05:56 am Title: Chapter 8: Sabbaticals and Panic Attacks
God you had me laughing so hard at that Jesus line XD I love that movie! Now I wanna know what Bill has to say D=
Date: 07/19/10 05:45 am Title: Chapter 7: Riding Waves and Facing Medusa
God I found this to be a hysterical chapter! But oh damn she quit o/.0
Date: 07/19/10 05:26 am Title: Chapter 6: Temptations and Vacations
God that makes me think of the guy I like (ironically he looks like Bill has a twin that looks like Tom was born on September 1st '89 in Germany). 'cept he isn't bitchy XD He is a nice guy but so doesn't notice me like I want him to =P
Date: 07/19/10 05:12 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Be Nice To Andy' Week
Damn Andi should have gone for it. But really what is it with everyone suddenly being so nice, minus bill of course.