Date: 01/20/10 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
awe(: thats so sweet.
Date: 01/20/10 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
Lol It's 11:30pm, so I'm basically reviewing now and processing later lol
I love the Tom/Bill fluff :)
Date: 01/20/10 10:57 am Title: Chapter 7
I love it ! I'm checking every day for updates, I love the way it's written. It's really interesting and I can't wait for more !! Keep writing :D
Date: 01/19/10 01:24 am Title: Chapter 7
this story makes me feel warm and smiley (:
Date: 01/18/10 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
i really enjoy reading this story. its quite good. the time transfer thing/ the whole acceptance of the transfer is a little far-fetched, but enjoyable none the less.
Date: 01/18/10 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
this makes me happy!
and i love that you update soon.
because i totally hate waiting, even if its for only a week. XD
Date: 01/18/10 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
Me likes :)
Date: 01/18/10 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
:D!!! Awesome!!! Geeky Gustav :D keep writing!!! I love this story!!!
Date: 01/18/10 11:51 am Title: Chapter 7
Laziness: Brilliant! Loved it- and I could totally imagine Tom now coming back to the future with a little more perspective on their life- maybe been a bit more grateful for the things they do have...in a way...
My fav line: used to occasionally force-feeding his twin; Bill never stood a chance.
Would love to read the story about that! Lol! And miniGeorg and Gustav are fab! I want more of them! Though I want BigGustav to be brotherly to BigBill too!
Date: 01/18/10 11:50 am Title: Chapter 6
Laziness once again (though i have been at the hospital all day which is a good reason for it): Tom looking at BigTom's porn stash- nice...Lol!
My favourite line: Bill was sitting on the floor, sobbing into his hands.
Poor Bill- that line alone made me imagine such a scene that only great writers can inspire me to do- though i admit several scenes ended up kinda naughty- or sweet depending on how you lok at it- they featured Bushido coming to comofrt Bill and then having hot slashy man sex with him...Lol!
And the teddy was cute!
Date: 01/18/10 11:49 am Title: Chapter 5
Once again laziness attacks: Brilliant- I love how the Tom's is adapting more than the Bill's...and its true they aren't a matched pair...poor boys...I really want Bill and Tom to come back to this Bill and Tom so that Simone and Gordon can see FutureBill...
I loved Tom hugging his Mom- and this story should totally end with the twins going home in the future to visit her...when i mentionned Bushido I meant mention some of the comments he made- maybe BigTom put one of the interviews on a dvd to tease Bill with and bb!Tom sees it...i wasn't actually hinting at the pairing...http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rEcbwYTw_BU&feature=related here is an interview- though I couldn't find it with eng subs...sorry...so I admit Im not 100% sure that it is the interview...
Date: 01/18/10 11:49 am Title: Chapter 4
Laziness strikes again: Brilliant- I like how Gustav tried to be responsible...maybe you could have Gus comofrt Bill in a brotherly way which makes Tom understand his presence is kinda upsetting Bill...that he needs to be more serious...also you should have Bushido involved...
Date: 01/18/10 11:48 am Title: Chapter 3
This is awsome- you are awesome
Date: 01/18/10 11:48 am Title: Chapter 2
Laziness once again: GREAT! Love this- I kinda want to see this end with both sets of twins seeing each other...maybe make some mention to Bushido making comments about Bill...?
Date: 01/18/10 11:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful- I also think the banner is great- is the one in the back meant to be Big tom and the one coming through the glass little tom or am i reading too much into it...?
Author's Response: No, that's exactly right! It's big Tom behind the glass, morphing into younger Tom with the dreadlocks as he comes through. Isn't it wonderful? Pseudoblu on lj made it :D
Date: 01/18/10 11:46 am Title: Prologue
Its longbca from Lj! Hello- glad you decided to post here! A lovely start to this wonderful story!
Date: 01/18/10 11:45 am Title: Prologue
I didn't really want to read this story because it had no pairings and usually gen bores me so much, but OMG I am so glad I did!
I think you should write "Don't judge this story because lack of pairings" on the summary or something because everyone who is skipping this story because it might be boring is missing out!
I love this concept and your writing style is so good! I am in love.
Date: 01/18/10 08:59 am Title: Chapter 7
Tom force-feeding Bill the apple was so cute! I really love young Bill in this!
Date: 01/18/10 05:23 am Title: Chapter 7
*squeals happily* ^_^
Date: 01/18/10 04:31 am Title: Chapter 7
Awww! I like that he showed them Lass Uns Laufen. x] and the little bit of back story you gave it. It was really... sweet? Yeah that's the right word. x]
And how Tom plays around with the Georg and Gustav. x]
I just really loved this chapter over all. :]
Oh! And Tom forcing Bill to eat the apple was hilarious. XDD
And the In Die Nacht bit was so sweet. I love how Tom said it. x]
This was a really great chapter and I can't wait to read more. :]