Date: 09/30/10 05:59 am Title: Toms' rule
Wow! It was so funny and hot :)
I liked it!
Date: 02/04/10 04:04 pm Title: Toms' rule
Pretty short, pretty predictable... but a little cute too :)
Date: 04/13/09 11:57 am Title: Toms' rule
Bill hated being told what to do, and especially by Tom. His brother would always come up with these crazy rules like “don’t talk during movies” or “don’t touch my Gibson” or “don’t use my toothbrush”, well Bill could understand that last one. - lol
He could either knock and risk waking up Simone, he could turn around and go back to his own bed and wait for the nightmare to hit in again, or he could brake Toms rule and just walk inside and snuggle up against his sleeping brother. – all dangerous choices.
“Oh Bill…yeah” Toms voice was more a breath then a whisper, but Bill heard and it made him freeze to the spot. What on earth was Tom doing moaning his name in the middle of the night? Well actually the movement beneath the covers spoke for itself. – O_O oh my!
As carefully as he could Bill started to make his way over to the bed. So this was why Tom wanted him to knock, to get time to cover up the evidence. Bill grinned a little and almost snickered when his twin let out a somewhat feral growl. – evil, evil boy! Leave your brother alone or let him know you are there!
“Just tell me what you want Tomi” Bill whispered in the same breathless, lust filled way Tom did – *gasps* oh my Bill!
Tom still looked horrified as Bill wriggled out of his boxers and went onto the bed on all fours. All the time he held Toms gaze and Bill unconsciously nibbled his lip in a very sexy manner - *giggles* naughty Bill!
Their lines are AWESOME!
It kind of lost momentum at the end but in general it was a great oneshot!
Date: 11/01/08 11:07 am Title: Toms' rule
I love this :D Especialy the last line xP “I guess I could brake a rule now or then…tomorrow maybe” Just great >3
xx Chii ^^
Author's Response: hihi, I hoped people would like that line ,) so happy you did! thank you so much for reviewing, it really means the world to me !!!
Date: 08/08/08 09:47 am Title: Toms' rule
*drools*
(not a serious review, but hey! what can you expect me to say after hot twins doing hot stuff!? è_é LOL XD)
It was great! ^^
Author's Response: lol, sorry Paris, what can I say, love to make your brain mush ,)
Date: 06/30/08 05:03 pm Title: Toms' rule
Aww...Very funny and sweet!
Poor Bill... having nightmares and needs his twin to comfort him. How sweet... :)
Like the sneaking up on Tom when Bill discovers his secret! And of course how fast Tom cott on...
Way many thanks to You!
Author's Response: hihi thanksies, I really love to write them as young (however perverted that might make me seem) it's like they seem more innocent then (not that I think Bill and Tom has ever been close to innocent) thank you so much, loves <3
Date: 06/20/08 05:15 pm Title: Toms' rule
This way, breaking rules is kinda fun, and hot!!
Short, but very good fic!
Author's Response: rules were made to be broken love, that's just the way it is ,p thanks <3
Date: 06/06/08 07:23 pm Title: Toms' rule
Woah! Now that was very hot hehe. Cute that Bill so badly needed his brother too lol. Another very awesome story dear =D.
I love the last line too, very good ending haha.
Author's Response: hey stars ,) I'm glad you liked this one (honestly I had forgotten I wrote it) I had to check what on earth this story was before I could answer xD hihi, I have a thing for endings, like them to mean something ,) kisses
Date: 02/23/08 12:39 pm Title: Toms' rule
Ahaha.. I liked this. XD
Author's Response: happy you did !!!
Date: 02/14/08 04:10 pm Title: Toms' rule
I read that a long time ago...I don't know why I didn't review...sorry U.U...so to the thing...
Bill hated being told what to do, and especially by Tom --- Yeah, right!! We know he loves to be bossed around by Tom!!!!
“don’t use my toothbrush”, well Bill could understand that last one. -- Thank God!!!
he knew that knocking would have her up in seconds. -- Simone is in the middle even when she's sleeping...that woman is seriously something else ^^
What on earth was Tom doing moaning his name in the middle of the night? -- Does he really need to ask?? O.O
“You did?…oh yes, you did” -- And here I thought Bill was the slow twin...^^
Tom was good at being in control -- He SURE is!!! ^^
Author's Response: ok so I'm guessing you have a thing for using someone elses toothbrush (like you seriously HATE it) and I think I have a thing for putting Simone into everything althoug I managed not to put her in the kitchen in this one *proud* thanksies for review :D
Date: 01/21/08 08:30 am Title: Toms' rule
yey!
Bill as a rulebreaking criminal haha^^
as always, I love your fics :)
Author's Response: a rulebreaking sexy criminal (and I wouldn't mind breaking that particular rule either) thanks for reviewing sweetheart
Date: 01/20/08 08:47 pm Title: Toms' rule
Oh man..this was tres 'Sexy Sexy' I luv your style. I wish this wasnt a one-shot DD;
Danke
Author's Response: awww you love my "style" that is so sweet of you thanks darling (:
Date: 01/20/08 02:42 pm Title: Toms' rule
i really like your fics....you just write them so well!!! and i loved the story.... too bad you had to end it on the best bit!!!
Author's Response: what he got his orgasm didn't he ;)
Date: 01/20/08 02:36 pm Title: Toms' rule
oh deus eu odeio-te tanto!!!! - oh god I hate you so much!
... why?! why god, WHY?! why did she have to end in the best part?!?!?! (pulls my hair)
it was getting soooooooo hot!!!! I was smiling like an idiot and then.......the end.... O_O .............=_=..............O_O .... the....end?
how could it be the end...? ....how could it...mommy..I want my...mommy.. Its..everything...like...blank and...I...
(faints)
Author's Response: sorry sorry sorry !!! oh sweety I never ment to make you faint (you remind me of Georg *grins*) BIEJOS to make it all better :)
Date: 01/20/08 01:32 pm Title: Toms' rule
awwwww i wanted to be longer
i like the idea
maybe u'll write more
Author's Response: haha not of thise one I think I've got way to many plotbunnies and way to little time, but then again don't we all ;)
Date: 01/20/08 01:24 pm Title: Toms' rule
*curses* damn you only answer the serious ones...that rules out mine..
hehe..naughty bill for breaking the rule..tsk tsk *waves finger* very naughty of him... but luckely tom didn't mind...hell i wouldn't mind if any of them did this to me..*dreams happily*
you adore reviewers...well guess what i adore you..and your fics!!
::gives big cookie::
Author's Response: oh but sweety yours are always serious...I mean they're like life saving !!! how can anyone survive without cookies ? I don't know ;)