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Reviewer: liulibai Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/25 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.

Reviewer: anastasiadicaprio Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/15 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was absolutely adorable. I loved the detail and the emotion you put into it. It was super super realistic, and I thought the way Tom and Bill treated each other was so so sweet. :3 Good job.

Reviewer: sarahbellesam Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/12 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love this! It's so, so sweet :) in a way it kind of makes me want to go hug my own twin, but that's a bit weird. This is fab though, definitely going in my favorites!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/12 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1

God...beautiful!

Reviewer: Imaginari Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/10 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

I seriously cried halfway through. This was almost too beautiful for the twincest. But i still loved it.

Author's Response: Aww, what made you cry? I'm glad you liked it anyway :3

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/10 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful writing. Their profound love comes across very nicely.
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Maria

Author's Response: Thank you very much! (:

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awe-tear- so cute i loved it. SO realistic.

Author's Response: Ah, thank you (:

Reviewer: Velia Mineantea Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

It was besutiful and homey! It's another point of view of the twins' days off. One that breaks the idea of an overactive Bill.
Great story!

Author's Response: I like to think they spend their days off somewhat like this, without the sex parts of course, but you know. Homey was definitely the feeling I was going for. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: zombiejelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's very loving and cute, and it makes me warm. I like it ^^

Author's Response: Aww, thank you (: I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Falling Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

That's so cute. I'm usually not a fan of one shots but that was so adorable and glad that I read it.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you (: I'm glad you appreciated it, even if you're not too into one shots!

Reviewer: AngelKisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

its nice to read about the twins at home, not doing much. i bet thats what they do in reality...minus the hot sex.

this was amazing!

Author's Response: Ah, I hope they do take time to laze around, they deserve it! I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reviewing! (:

Reviewer: shimmery Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 11:45 am Title: Chapter 1

This is way more than okay. It's great. I love hoe detail you portrayed their feelings for each other. It makes me felt warm and sweet.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it (:

Reviewer: billtom_lover Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 10:48 am Title: Chapter 1

i loved it, completly beautiful XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it! (:

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 09:55 am Title: Chapter 1

Awwww.... So very beautiful and still bittersweet. There was a little tone of sadness through all of this even if their connection was so beautiful and made butterflies flutter in my stomach. I really like the way you portray twins here, because I somehow need it now; their unbroken, everlasting connection, because they just belong that way.

Interesting approach to many current issues hanging around the band and I think you managed to connect them all fluently into this fic without it feeling intentional. Somehow I feel this could be partly true. The day off's and too much time to think. The sensitive topic of Bill's weight and eating habits was handled carefully, but also pretty painfully. I think you did a great job in describing their connection and bittersweetness of their lives in a realistic way.

I liked this very much. Fluff, but still - it wasn't. It was happy - but it wasn't. You know what I mean? This fic made me think again of how many of us are sharing these same fears, concerns and thoughts after their comeback. But before I go on sidetracks... I enjoyed your great fic. Beautiful and sad. And comforting, somehow comforting, because after all they have each other.

Author's Response: Oh my, thank you so much! It wasn't my intention at all to make it sad or bittersweet as I was writing this, but as I was trying to also portray something that could be realistic; I couldn't make it all perfect and adorable and fluffy, so I just went for a happy, cute moment in their crazy life. I'm glad you liked it (:

Reviewer: myself225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 08:25 am Title: Chapter 1

I really liked it!! :) there's just something about them, and i have to say, the whole lazy-sex-thing is really hot.. :) x

Author's Response: I think so, too! I'm glad you liked it (:

Reviewer: DCB Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 04:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Woah, that was really good!

Very few grammatical mistakes, which is awesome because they always snap you right out of a story.

They're dialogue was hot and original, as well as most of your description.

Just overall refreshing to read from a new, decent author :)

Awesome job!

DCB

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to know that my first attempt at this was not horrible and that you enjoyed it (:

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