Date: 01/25/10 10:13 pm Title: Cookie Flavored Kisses on the Couch
oooo lame when you don't have any headphones, i got two pair....wellone cause my boyfriend took my other pair today >.>
Author's Response: Isn't he nice. I know man no headphones=no life
Date: 01/24/10 08:14 pm Title: Cookie Flavored Kisses on the Couch
I'll have my fingers crossed :]
Author's Response: Yep. I'm gonna try really hard to get one up today when I ge hme. If I can get some new headphones I definitely will. Soooo we just gotta wait and see then :)))
Date: 01/24/10 05:25 pm Title: New Kids and a Quick Clique Overview
Just wanted to point out a little mistake in the first sentence: Staring at the red numbers of his clock Bill lay in Bill wishing he’d been able to sleep the previous night because he had school, which was terrible.
I think the second Bill should be bed.
For the rest, it seems like a really nice story.
Author's Response: Hahahahah. I'm so awesome like that. Thanks tons dear!! :))
Date: 01/23/10 06:19 pm Title: Cookie Flavored Kisses on the Couch
lol heck yeah!!!!!!! XD
Author's Response: too bad i hardly have time until like ten an then...tomorrow before three. Let's hope your work has paid off :)
Date: 01/23/10 01:13 pm Title: Cookie Flavored Kisses on the Couch
haha heck yeah, im that awesome :] XD
Author's Response: yes, yes you are xD
Date: 01/22/10 11:10 pm Title: Cookie Flavored Kisses on the Couch
lol i have nooooo idea what imma even do, knowing me i'll bug you like twice and then go ADHD and forget lol
Author's Response: well your work is paying off alreay. i just started working on the story :))
Date: 01/22/10 09:57 pm Title: Cookie Flavored Kisses on the Couch
haha thats funny, so what should i leave a review everyday to bug you XDDD
Author's Response: do whatever you think you should :)
Date: 01/21/10 11:59 pm Title: Cookie Flavored Kisses on the Couch
lol in know how stressful finals canb e so i wont bug you TOO much XD
Author's Response: Haha. Thanks, no one really considers me but like I said if you want it up before I start back up just bug me. Yes, I'm actually giving you permission :))
Date: 01/21/10 10:50 pm Title: Cookie Flavored Kisses on the Couch
lol i can't wait then :]
Author's Response: I'm glad. I'll try to get it up before I have to start finals because I don't know how my schedule will be then :( so I mean...if you really want it feel free to just bug me xD hehe
Date: 01/21/10 06:02 pm Title: Simone's Soft Touch
Oh oh oh I want to know what Tom did sooo bad x_X
Author's Response: Haha. I would hope so :)
Date: 01/21/10 11:30 am Title: Simone's Soft Touch
NEIN! DUN KILL ZEE POOPYYY!!! *that was meant to soun like a french accent... it failed Dx*
I wanna know what Tom did >=D
Poooooooor Thoma too!!
Author's Response: Haha, you said. Poopy :)) Youll find out as soon as I have the energy(life is pretty tiring) to post :)
Date: 01/20/10 11:04 pm Title: Simone's Soft Touch
awww what the heck! im dying to figure out what happened! I have ideas but im not sure! ARg post soon!
Author's Response: I'm dying to le you guys know! haha I'm glad you have ideas :))
Date: 01/20/10 10:42 pm Title: Simone's Soft Touch
plz plz plz post(srry im being pushy) but still its so good so far
Author's Response: Haha. It's okay if you're pushy. Maybe if you are I'll update sooner :))
Date: 01/20/10 10:35 pm Title: Simone's Soft Touch
OMG WE'RE GONNA KNOW WE'RE GONNA KNOW WE'RE GONNA KNOW :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Author's Response: YES! YOU'RE FINALLY GONNA KNOW!!!!!
Date: 01/20/10 10:30 pm Title: Simone's Soft Touch
omfg no puppy..i love them gurly..=]=] i cant wait 4 more=]
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad :)
Date: 01/20/10 01:24 pm Title: Why? ...because I love you.
ahhh it soooo beautiful!!!
but u knowwhat.pleaseee dont get offended! i want to make ur story even grater... so here is a tip- try writing in a slower tempo, and more describing of a moment...like this chapter chould be writtenin at least 3 more chpters...try to describe what whas he/she doing and how he/she felt and what was going on at the same time i that place..lik..umm hh try to maake a moment last:DD
again very nice story!
Author's Response: thanks for liking the story and the input. Haha, don't worry I'm not offended. :))
Date: 01/18/10 04:44 pm Title: Why? ...because I love you.
You like reviews... I like your updates. (but I am NOT rushing you)
Author's Response: Aww, thanks kid!
Date: 01/17/10 10:30 pm Title: Why? ...because I love you.
Aw, finally! This is great!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 01/17/10 06:39 am Title: Why? ...because I love you.
ok, so i'm back xD
and i must say u seem to have improved =D i'm glad ^^ (not meaning u sucked before, but some of the things that weren't so good, have gotten better ;D)
i'm still thinking ur going a bit fast though =S and.. i mean... i just have one idea for smg u can do while writing, to kind of make it more realistic for the reader: put urself, or someone u know very well in the position that ur characters and see how they would act. would u really reach into the pants of someone while in a classroom? would u really start fucking someone to get back at ur ex, while there's a 3rd person in the room? if u know someone who's loose, ask them, get into their minds and use the info for ur characters ;)
research is everything! =D
like my teacher likes to say: if u write a story about grass, u don't think of the memory of grass, or of what u've read about grass or heard about it, u go to the field and smell it, feel it and listen to the sounds around it.
it really helps =D
Author's Response: Thanks again. I appreciate your input. I understand and I will most definitely take your review to heart :)))
Date: 01/17/10 02:56 am Title: Why? ...because I love you.
I hope Tom wont leave Bill again because I think Bill would just die from the hurt.
I know...I know...
I should be like "Poor Thoma" but I cant because Tom and Bill belong together.
Update soon!
Author's Response: when do we ever do what we're supposed to really? :) But I understand what you mean completely and I'll try!