Date: 01/09/10 11:43 am Title: Shots and Please Forgive Me
Aww.. :/ hopfully they be happy soon..., together :)
Author's Response: Kind of sad when they're both hurting huh??
Date: 01/09/10 11:35 am Title: Shots and Please Forgive Me
ahhh I wanna know what happened sooooooooooooooooo bad :( lol. I'm like in love with this. Update soon?
Author's Response: I think a few people do. I'll update as soon as I can :)) you love it????
Date: 01/09/10 11:07 am Title: Shots and Please Forgive Me
ah... no give him another chance!!! make-up sex is awesome lol
Author's Response: Make up sex is awesome! :)
Date: 01/08/10 07:53 pm Title: Stupid Comments and Good Moms
i wont lie to you...im confused??? i wanna no what tomi did nd weren't billa and tomi living togetha...who is linda now??? and the time frames between chapters and events are confusing me
yep i'm confused but im hoping in the next update that things will be cleared and i wont b as confused XDDD
Author's Response: Yep, I know it's quite confusing but the explanation comes soon I promise :))
Date: 01/08/10 05:12 pm Title: Cookie Flavored Kisses on the Couch
They are!!! Thank you so much for that!! :D
Author's Response: No problem dearie you deserved it :))
Date: 01/08/10 05:08 pm Title: New Kids and a Quick Clique Overview
ok, so i know i haven't read the last chapter yet, but i will (if u'll let me). i just felt that i had to comment here, before i forgot what i wanted to say =P then after u read this review, u can tell me if u still want me to read the rest....
so i really like the general plot idea, and think that it has great potential. the thing u should watch out for here is that ur characters seem to be developing into mary sues and gary stues. think of their personalities and remember to give them some flaws. before posting, read through it one more time, make sure ur clishés are at a minimum
and that there's a bit more flow in the storyline (such as that andreas fallowed bill into the music room, but vanished before bill left without us ever finding out how or why). if u did that, u'd have an awsome fic!! =D
Author's Response: Thanks lots I think it takes guts to actually give feedback and not just go "OH I LOVE IT!" Go ahead and read and I'll watch myself for this, thanks :))
Date: 01/08/10 12:49 am Title: Stupid Comments and Good Moms
xD
so dramatic, dearie :)
I heart it
WootWoot
Author's Response: yeppp. DRAMA is ALL I know....I started writing a different story and somehow...you pushed your little way into it ;)) I'm glad you like it I have the next chappir done but I'm going to wait to upload it until I can get the um...fifth one finished and it got kinda................stuck???? GRR annoying as hell but I'm getting it. Beating it with a doll that looks like Bill :)) WootWootWootWootWoot. BEAT THAT! xD
Date: 01/07/10 05:46 pm Title: Stupid Comments and Good Moms
>.< ahhhhhh!!! i love it!! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll try :))
Date: 01/07/10 04:21 pm Title: Stupid Comments and Good Moms
Wow, that was intense. I'm dying to know what Tom did that hurt Bill so much!
Author's Response: Oddly...you're not the only one wondering. Aren't dedications freaking sweet???
Author's Response: Oddly...you're not the only one wondering. Aren't dedications freaking sweet???
Date: 01/07/10 10:51 am Title: Stupid Comments and Good Moms
Plz hurry with more...and i will be the official mascot of this story!!!
Date: 01/07/10 09:06 am Title: Stupid Comments and Good Moms
YAY another chapter!!! I'm still here and i'm staying here-love love this story...
I wondering if Adriane invited Thoma to their table just to get closer to him, and at the same time, cause more conflict with Bill and Tom...interesting. Curious also to see if Thoma will have a big part of Bill's life in this story. THANK YOU for the update, looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks and you should thank yourself
Date: 01/07/10 07:15 am Title: Stupid Comments and Good Moms
Nice story start :)
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 01/07/10 02:24 am Title: Stupid Comments and Good Moms
oh i love it can't wait for more
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 01/07/10 02:07 am Title: Stupid Comments and Good Moms
Plz hurry with more...and i will be the official mascot of this story!!!
Author's Response: Ooooo, official mascots are the shit dearie :))
Date: 01/07/10 01:29 am Title: Stupid Comments and Good Moms
wht id tom do wht did tome do omg u have 2 tell plz
Author's Response: Awww, sorry I can't say just yet but here's a hint...it has to do with girls :))
Date: 01/06/10 10:31 pm Title: New Kids and a Quick Clique Overview
GAHHHHHH *is running in circle's*...just can't wat to see what happen's-if anything, with Bill and Thoma and to find out what happened between Bill and Tom--thank's for posting quickly and anxiously waiting for the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: I felt I had to...look out for the next chappie I'm getting it up now :))
Date: 01/06/10 05:44 pm Title: Cookie Flavored Kisses on the Couch
this is adorable...the innocence of children is refreshing...
Author's Response: After some of the stories I've done, I owed it to the boys to make them innocent :)
Date: 01/06/10 01:18 pm Title: Cookie Flavored Kisses on the Couch
I liked this very much :D Come on and write more :D
Author's Response: Another chappie is coming....it's gonna get ya....so...close :))
Date: 01/06/10 11:39 am Title: Cookie Flavored Kisses on the Couch
ah i really like it the end was tre cute if u have to post more soon *favorites*
Date: 01/06/10 11:38 am Title: Cookie Flavored Kisses on the Couch
ah i really like it the end was tre cute if u have to post more soon *favorites*
Author's Response: Aww, thanks for letting me know :))
