Date: 10/06/11 09:25 am Title: Rockstars Can Always Sleep Tomorrow
nice story
Date: 06/06/10 03:46 pm Title: Rockstars Can Always Sleep Tomorrow
OMG KRYS! THAT WAS HOT!!! mmmmmm *moans* I WANT MORE! please?
Love,
Ashley
Author's Response: Well, thank you, Ashley, dearest. I'll work on it. Thanks for reviewing, hon. It means a lot to me.
Date: 05/15/10 07:36 pm Title: Rockstars Can Always Sleep Tomorrow
How lovely to read Bill time. This is probably how it goes on in real life, you know? of course, I'm taking him for his words here, but I sure hope he finds the time to take care of his needs himself, seeing as he won't let others do it.
Nice writing, it flows quite naturally ;)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I appreciate your review.
Date: 01/06/10 06:45 am Title: Rockstars Can Always Sleep Tomorrow
This was good for a first timer. I encourage you to write more.>.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: 01/05/10 07:23 am Title: Rockstars Can Always Sleep Tomorrow
That was really good. Clever and original, and very realistic. I like the way you phrase things...i can't really explain it, but the writing style is really catchy.
I hope you continue to write here, you're really good.
oh, but one of your paragraphs is spaced wrong.
where it says "He is in no hurry as he wraps..."
you indented half way through the word "wraps", just so you know.
But great job. Looking forward to seeing more from you.
Author's Response: Thank you, I am grateful you took the time to review- and you're my first ;) so that's special. rnrnAnd thanks for letting me know about the spacing, I fixed it. rnrnThank you :)