Date: 03/22/10 06:30 am Title: Chapter 8
interesting, as usual. i look forward to more!
Date: 03/22/10 01:40 am Title: Chapter 8
awwwww~ i loved this~ more please? i hope this isnt ending yet~~~
Date: 03/20/10 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 8
yay!!! of course i shall review your awesomest story :D
Date: 03/19/10 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
NO HEY NOW.
I want more of this story.
Date: 03/18/10 04:36 am Title: Chapter 7
wow, i wonder if the twins are going to start messing around on their own, since that asshole isnt making them do it anymore...
Date: 03/18/10 01:00 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh my god xD
The twins are going to be found out. But of course they were forced to do those things, so it's not like Simone and Gordon can get them in trouble...right? I mean, they'd have to understand and they'd have to realize that it wasn't their fault, that Gabriel forced them to do those things.
Still I'm glad that Gabriel was caught :D
And poor Bill. He does like to do things to Tom but he doesn't know how to say it right ;___;
Date: 03/16/10 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
wow, this was really crazy... good, but crazy... i liked it tho~
Date: 03/15/10 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 6
thanks for the update on this, keep up the good work! I'm very interested to see what happens to the twins now that they are left to themselves again.
Date: 03/14/10 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 6
This is s good please update soon. Also can Tom top from now on? BotTom is kinda a turnoff foor some
Date: 03/14/10 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh oh oh ;____;
I absolutely adore how the twins don't want to be fucking each other but at the same time they're so confused because of the feelings inside of them. And it made me want to cry when Tom was so rough with Bill even though Bill didn't really mean to be rough with Tom. Poor Bill ;___;
"How ya like me now, bitch?!" < That made me laugh, though xD
Date: 03/05/10 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
ahhh! awsum story keep on writing!!
Date: 02/11/10 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh wow... update soon, im so curious that i feel sick to my stomach. i need to know! i hope Tom returns Bills feelings~
Date: 02/11/10 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow, huge clifhanger there!
Poor kids. *pouts*
Date: 02/09/10 05:16 am Title: Chapter 4
wow, this is very dark. but well written so i look forward to seeing where it goes. keep up the good work.
Date: 02/06/10 07:01 am Title: Chapter 4
awwwww...poor twins
Date: 02/06/10 12:57 am Title: Chapter 4
oh wow! i hope that things get better between the twins soon, even if it is mostly for comfort at first. when do you think youre gonna post again? love you!
Date: 01/14/10 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow.
This was stunning.
Most stories with pedophiles are written really choppy and they don't seem like they're real at all. But when I was reading this, I could picture everything. The room, Bill giving Tom a BJ, even Gabriel. I could practically smell it. And you managed to make me fucking terrified of pedophiles [not like I was going to hang out with one before, but now they're absolutely horrifying to me] and they just...ew. Gabriel sends shivers up my spine and I start kind of breathing hard when I read your writing of him.
Wow. This is some great writing right here.
Date: 01/14/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
:O
Bill, that was a stupid thing to do. Telling the guy where you lived. And now you guys are going to get hurt ;-;
But the way Tom followed his brother into the car was really touching. Like, it really portrayed how close they were. Instead of trying to persuade Bill to come out, still, he followed him into the car to be with him. It was really sweet in a trivial way.