Date: 06/03/10 08:53 am Title: Chapter 2
Things are getting darker... =(
Date: 06/03/10 08:05 am Title: Chapter 2
OMG this is so intense!!!
Date: 06/03/10 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1
It's a pretty dark beginning but I'm curious
Date: 06/03/10 07:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like the start of this fic :) It seems like its going to be really good!!
Date: 06/03/10 01:51 am Title: Chapter 10
aww this is killing the boys. let them be together
Date: 05/30/10 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 9
WOW! Gabriel is such a sick sick horrifing person!
I was shaking through out the whole stroy and crying!
keep up the story!
Date: 05/29/10 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh my freaking gosh! *crying*
it has me all shaky and stuff D:
but it's a good story.
Date: 05/28/10 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 9
I started reading this fic today and I have to say I really liked it. I love your writing styles!
I don't usually read this dark fics but this one have something addicting in it.
I just can't stop reading this over and over again which is a good thing I guess?
This chapter made me sad once again
Poor little children... :(
I'm so happy that Gapriel got caught!
ps. I honestly think this deserves more attention and reviewes than it's now getting!
pss. sorry for my crappy english:D
Date: 05/19/10 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg!!! plz write more!! i am in love wit this story!
Date: 05/16/10 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
i think gordon was an ass and hope his behaviors shapes up. the poor boys. good update, thank you!
Date: 05/15/10 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
Very good writing thus far, i was scared for the boys, and the night they did things of their own will, that was interesting... im waiting to read more so update as soon as you can.
Date: 05/15/10 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
As far as i can tell its written well so far, im going to have too see a bit more before i can share how i feel.
Date: 05/15/10 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 9
PLEASE continue this, this is like AWSOME
Date: 05/15/10 06:06 am Title: Chapter 9
Thank you guys for updating! Wow this chapter just took a serious dramatic twist!! I love how you guys always have Tom trying to be the strong one...oh god Simone is gonna flip now that twins are actually having sex out of love
Date: 05/15/10 01:59 am Title: Chapter 9
i find addiction way worse than this. it had Major character death i hated it,... Lol this is way easier for me.
Date: 05/15/10 01:21 am Title: Chapter 9
wow, this is getting intense. i hope the twins get over their fear but stay together~
Date: 05/14/10 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 9
:D
:')
This gets better with every chapter.
Date: 05/12/10 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
Aww where did you guys go? I was a huge follower on Addiction and when you guys first starting writing this I was so excited. If you're out of ideas or just need a little inspiration just email me and I'd be more than happy help. I just can't stand that this story hasn't been updated in so long and that it is so good.
You guys have managed to touch on all of the taboo subjects in the fanfic TH fandom in your stories and I love it! Addiction was brilliant and I love this story as well. It's sort of like the typical peophilia story with a twist since you've managed to connect to real-life situations like manipulation and kidnapping (to some extent). I always cringe at Tom's reactions you both have managed to write him so well.
So I hope you guys update soon! This story is too good to postpone!
Author's Response: aww thank you for the kind words! we've just been really busy with end of the year school things, we will pick up very soon! :) we're glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 03/30/10 11:35 am Title: Chapter 8
omg so hot!!!!!!!! awsum story keep on writting!!