Date: 01/28/08 04:42 am Title: Chapter 4
Ohohohoho! I love the caterpillar analogy! Nice nice nice!
Date: 01/28/08 01:27 am Title: Chapter 4
I really enjoyed it!! I like where the story is going..keep it up!!!
Date: 01/27/08 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
that, was adorable. Like fuck. I half expected Bill's mom to smack him over the head, but she didn't. And i loved the acid-trip living room. I wish mine was like that... *sigh*
Oh well, i love this story, so more soon okay?
Date: 01/27/08 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
T-T
That was.. simply.. GUH. X3
Continue!!!!!
Date: 01/27/08 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm seriously loving this fic. You always come up with these amazing ideas. and i'm glad you write them down!
great job!
Date: 01/27/08 08:41 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so lucid.
The little thug-wannabe character takes a firm hand to describe, and his twisted anger is so realistic it breaks your heart slowly.
Bill's character is out of the blue, fascinating and irritating at the same time; his need for affection, so desperate he finds pleasure in being abused ,annoys and makes you think.
This is a diamond and you,flower, have just gotten my longest review.
Author's Response: I'm honored :)
Date: 01/26/08 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving this! I'm loving retarded Billy *gg* He's kinda cute. o.O Can't wait to read more of this.
Date: 01/26/08 07:44 am Title: Chapter 3
*chuckle* Hah, I love this... And your writing is hilarious!! Brilliant, can't wait for more. ^_^
Date: 01/26/08 06:02 am Title: Chapter 3
hihihi this is great! I love it :D
Date: 01/26/08 03:42 am Title: Chapter 3
PMS!!!! LOOOOL
that craked me up! ^o^
omg...he did it! he's coming to his house! ahah
Date: 01/26/08 02:54 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh, god, I love their teacher. An bill is suck an adorable 'tard.
Date: 01/26/08 02:29 am Title: Chapter 3
heheheheh
so gd XP
i LOVED it! =0
ur great and i can't wait for more of this =D
oh how i love the way bill is so freakishly optimistic *sighs and flutters her eyelashes*
Date: 01/26/08 02:21 am Title: Chapter 3
poor bill, he seems without brains gaahd.
Date: 01/25/08 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ack! You really need to stop this whole 'end of chapter' thing. I don't like it. D:
STORY MUST GO ON, NOW. :D
Date: 01/25/08 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Bill is so strange in this fic XD it's pretty funny. I mean he's ready to under go beatings just so he can have touch him, that's love XD
I can't help but feel that there's something more to him though.
like a secret of some sort.
Any way great job!
Date: 01/25/08 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
I just LOVE this Bill!!! He's just INSANE!! XD
Date: 01/24/08 06:44 am Title: Chapter 2
hhahhhahhhahaa, tom is sooo bad .
Date: 01/23/08 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
please, go on, go on, go on! feel like dying from impatience))
Date: 01/23/08 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
wow...this is all so realistic( ok. not bill lol but he's funny andd cute)
you made me understand the teacher and Tom's mind and even if tey're wrong I can see them as real people