Date: 01/31/08 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
omgosh!!!!!! keep writing this story!!! i love it!!!!
Date: 01/31/08 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
hehe sweet and sad at the same time
Date: 01/31/08 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Poor Billa. I love him so much, and I feel for him so.
But Tom does have one thing right...Bill is just so...so Bill. ^.^
Byw, congrats on being featured! XD You definatly deserved it! .::Glomps::.
Date: 01/31/08 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
NOOOO!!! I WAS ALL READY TO CLICK THE DAMN "NEXT" BUTTON, AND IT AINT THERE! DAMMNIT!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!! I WANT MOOOORE!!! THIS IS GENIUS!!!
Date: 01/31/08 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
dam dis story waz fly
Date: 01/31/08 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
Good job at the FF so far.... Can't wait to read the next chapter and the rest of the story....
Date: 01/31/08 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
Well when I was reading I could actually picture Bill like that... It kind of made me like Bill even more then I already do...
Date: 01/31/08 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awww.... Love the retard Bill... Just so ADORABLE.....
Date: 01/31/08 11:01 am Title: Chapter 5
awwww! Poor Bill! He just wants Tom to notice him but Tom's acting like a playa! That's not cool!
Date: 01/31/08 07:03 am Title: Chapter 5
And congratulations for being featured ^_____________^
Author's Response: OMGOMGOMGOMG THANK YOUUUUUUUU!!!!!
Date: 01/31/08 04:27 am Title: Chapter 5
Awwwww, poor Bill, and poor Tom i suppose
Please keep this going, i sooo want to know what happens :D
Date: 01/30/08 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 5
omg ! This is great *_* I really really love it!
Date: 01/30/08 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG THIS IS AWESOME! WHOO!
Date: 01/30/08 11:24 am Title: Chapter 5
heheheh =P
isn't bil just the sweetest in this fic? =) (in a kind of demented way ^o))
kinda sweet how tom cares when he's trying so hard not to though=)
i hope u'll write more soon, 'cause i loved it =D
Date: 01/30/08 08:52 am Title: Chapter 5
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
I CANT SEE THIS ANYMORE!!! (cover my eyes)
ITS CRUEL! (cries)
I HATE TOM! (cries harder)
BILL IS FUCKING STUPID! (cries hysterically)
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*sobs*
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I want Dereck dead.... *_*
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Tom's gonna miss bill for sure...that jerk..beating bill...again! that cruel..evil, heartless rap-lover!
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my metal health is almost gone...gosh...an amazing story but fuck!!! its creeping me out! =_= (ytahs good xD)
Date: 01/30/08 04:54 am Title: Chapter 5
God, this story is so good. Definitely one of the best I'm following right. I think the character development is so very well done. The insights into Tom and his motivations, and Bill too. Just really compelling. I want Tom to so deserately stand up for himself, reject Dereck, do what's right, but it's so easy to understand the peer pressure he's is straining under.
And, Bill, so much in love. Absolutely fantastic. Can't wait for more!
Date: 01/30/08 02:54 am Title: Chapter 5
Jeeeeesus, Bill, you are COMPLETELY mental. But I love you. *Squshes him*
Date: 01/30/08 12:50 am Title: Chapter 5
aaaa *grinns widely* Bill is sooooo cute :D
And Tom being so stupid and weak, but I still love him in this fic though
You made this one of my favourites and it's totally rocking my world !!!
Date: 01/30/08 12:05 am Title: Chapter 5
jesus sometimes that Bill seems like reaaaaalllly pshyco!