Date: 02/02/08 05:15 am Title: Chapter 7
*gasps* omg !! OMG!"!! more please. fucking god this is good!!
Date: 02/02/08 03:58 am Title: Chapter 7
This chapter proves my theory. People who hurt the others just because they're gay, have problems with their own sexuality. Dereck, babe, you suck. But the Dereck/Tom scene was kind of hot. -.-
I love Bill. I wish I was just like him.
Great chapter and great story.
Date: 02/02/08 03:43 am Title: Chapter 7
O_O
OMFG
MORE MORE MORE
Date: 02/02/08 03:29 am Title: Chapter 7
It's Very good!! :D
MORE soon Please!!
Date: 02/02/08 03:21 am Title: Chapter 7
oooohhh! bill can be such a mystery sometimes!!! O.O amaaaaaazing!
Date: 02/02/08 03:10 am Title: Chapter 7
Ooooh, i did not expect that, hehe
Moree!
Date: 02/02/08 03:06 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh lord!
Ok first, i love Bill's look on life. He's so happy and up beat, it's so adorable.
I'm loving how Tom is slowly starting to express and feel different emotions.
It makes everything seem so real as if it's happening.
That Whole Dereck thing (woah) was not expecting that at all!
I gasped, i was shocked.
Great job love!
Date: 02/02/08 02:58 am Title: Chapter 7
I really like this story ^-^
Update soon
Date: 02/02/08 02:56 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh god, Bill really is precious. And I feel so sorry for Tom D:
What a twist, with Dereck turning out like that. :O
Date: 02/01/08 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
I think I like this story better than any of your others. I'm a sucker for the youngins. ;] The writing style is especially good. Can't wait for more, lovey.
Date: 02/01/08 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 6
this is such a cute story. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. count on me keeping tuned in!
Date: 02/01/08 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
awwwww... it's so cute! good job so far. I can't wait to see what happens with Derek. update soon please. :D
Date: 02/01/08 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love this story. The writing is amazing. The plot is such a wonderful deviation from the usual stuff here. Please keep writing! I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 02/01/08 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
=D that was so well writen! =D
i loved it and can't wait for more!
i love tom's insecurity and how he tries to figure out what it really is he's feeling =)
please write more soon, because this is a really wonderfull fic, even though i now have a slight fright about the end... (i have a feeling like tom's dad is gonna turn out to be bill's dad =S)
but still =D write more soon, because i love this fic =D
wow this was a long review =0
hope u don't mind (A)
Date: 02/01/08 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ok Caity. Let's sit in the grass and enjoy the stillness that permeates us.
Isn't a little love and beauty what we all long for?
Date: 02/01/08 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
ok continue you have to continue pleeeeeaaaaase ! ! ! ! !
and by the way I thought Tom was going to fall in love with Bill not Dereck shit so much for me being the smart girl huh ;)
Date: 02/01/08 10:59 am Title: Chapter 6
awww! That chapter was so cute! I think billy would make a good caterpillar!
Date: 02/01/08 10:03 am Title: Chapter 6
O.O ....T.T .....=_= ... I just LOVED it...so much!!!
you wrote GREAT! X )
GOSH...!!!! this chapther was my favorite. It was simple but...so intense...!!!! the talk between tom and bill melted my heart in 5 seconds. god...amazing. thats all I can say!
Date: 02/01/08 08:37 am Title: Chapter 6
maybe Tom is homo and dereck is simply his first cruch. you know what I mean?
sooner or later he will find what real love is * I hope so*