Date: 02/05/08 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aw God, Tom.
Bill is sucha sweetie in this fic, he doesn't even think about liking Tom while he's just trying to make Tom happy.
I love this so much, i can't wait for the next chapeter which i'm about to read...
Great work!
Date: 02/05/08 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 6
This story gets me so fxcking excited.
I can't put it into words.
-100.000.000.000 stars Shibuyainn.
Date: 02/05/08 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 8
this is the first time ever I've cried over a caterpillar... and what worse is: a fictional caterpillar... how could Tom...
Author's Response: don't feel bad...it's not any caterpillar, its BILL'S caterpillar ;)
Date: 02/05/08 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh God, you're good! I can't believe I'm getting worked up over a caterpillar ^^
Date: 02/05/08 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
no!not the caterpillar! why do they have to be so mean?
update soon please!
Date: 02/05/08 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 8
ahhhh i knew it had to deal with the caterpillar.. that would just break bill's heart. =*(
Tom, Tom, Tom, Tom, Tom.... *shakes head in disappointment* And to think I had faith in him, faith that he would change. Well. Not quite yet.
I just hope he does by the end of this story.
Awesome chapter as always, I love it. ^_^
Date: 02/05/08 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 8
What? What happnes next?! I need to know! This is really AWESOME! Love it!
Date: 02/05/08 09:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Yeah..Bill is Luna and Stargirl and his sweet, heartwrenching self at the same time.
Date: 02/05/08 09:29 am Title: Chapter 8
aaahhh... bad tommi :o
you cannot do thát!! tss...
hope you'll update soon ;)
Date: 02/05/08 09:17 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh my god!
Tom is so mean can't he see how much Bill cared for him!!
i hope he see's it before it's too late!
update soon
Date: 02/05/08 08:04 am Title: Chapter 8
Heh, you should read it. It's a really moving story. Takes place in a school too.
Anyway, I really hope Tom gets a grip on what's right and what's wrong before he regrets whatever he's going to do next. The description of Bill at the end was so heart-wrenching that I'm having second thoughts about Tom's softer personality. He gets swayed too easily. Argh. Update soon!
Author's Response: lol I finally read it and the first thought that came to mind was "DAMN HE RIPPED OFF MY IDEA" ...and then I realized I wrote this story after XD. It was really cute and touching. And holycrap... My Bill is a Stargirl.
Date: 02/05/08 07:56 am Title: Chapter 8
OH NO! what have they done? =(
Tom, please don't be so mean!
Date: 02/05/08 06:25 am Title: Chapter 8
I'm so scared for Bill, and for Tom. He's so reckless, he doesn't even see it.
Date: 02/05/08 06:08 am Title: Chapter 8
OMG!! that is soo sad, im actually tearing, poor, poor, bill!
Date: 02/05/08 05:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Awwww poor Billy! :S
PLS POST MORE SOON!!
Date: 02/05/08 05:08 am Title: Chapter 8
This was an amazing chapter... Absolutely adored it. Poor Tom, so confused and hurt, I feel sorry for him. And Bill... I can't articulate how much I adore your Bill in this... He's just... Something unique and special, so wise in an almost, innocent way.
I hope he gets his caterpillar was back... I have faith in Tom that he'll do the right thing in the end :D
Date: 02/05/08 04:36 am Title: Chapter 8
OMG NO THEY DIDNT!!!! omg what jerks!!!! they took Bill's caterpillar!!!! omg i cant believe they did that!!! update soon please!!!
Date: 02/05/08 03:31 am Title: Chapter 8
This is really the best fic on the site at the moment. My heart is in my throat reading this. And tears are pressing against my eyelids. I just hate to see Bill attacked. I hate to see Tom so sad. And his utter collapse under peer pressure. It's so heart wrenching. And, the way you write it makes it so clear. All the characterisations and motivations are perfect.
By the way, I don't know if it's intended, but Bill kind of reminds me of Luna Lovegood from Harry Potter. Hehehe.
I can't wait for more. I'm utterly terrified being left on a cliffhanger like this. Poor Bill. :( He's going to be so hurt.