Date: 03/06/08 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
whao0_o this is something else I like it^^
Date: 03/02/08 06:53 am Title: Chapter 11
naawww so beautiful! i'm fucking speechless... i'm just... argh... i don't know what to say, but it was seriously the best story i've read ;)
Date: 02/23/08 09:36 am Title: Chapter 11
Aww thats was just the sweetest thing ever. Loved this story!
Date: 02/23/08 07:13 am Title: Chapter 11
Awwww! That's so cute! Me liiike :D
Date: 02/23/08 03:40 am Title: Chapter 11
That was so sweet:-) i loved it
Date: 02/21/08 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 11
I love this story. It's so beautiful, the way you wrote Bill was spectacular. I'm sad it's over. Great work!
Date: 02/21/08 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 11
this is the best fanfic ever!!!
so sweet and i love the ending!
im kinda sad its over though((
but glad it ended well
Date: 02/21/08 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awww that was so sweet and a lot of the situations and things Bill said... made me think about my life and school experiences. (No i am not a bully and im not bullied)
Date: 02/21/08 01:43 am Title: Chapter 11
YAY! FINALLY THE END! Great job. I love this last chapter.
“You’ll always be my caterpillar,” Tom whispered
that's just awesomness and cuteness rolled into one. I love it! great job and now I'm going to go read it again!
Date: 02/20/08 06:52 am Title: Chapter 11
amazing :]]
so cute and beautiful... good job!
Date: 02/19/08 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 11
Omg It over!
It was so sweet, so amazingly written!
You put your sentences together so beautifully, your discriptions are perfect.
The ending was happy and explained everything!
Poor Dereck loosing his sister!
I'm so happy Bill and Tom are together!
There isn't a rating high enough for this fic =D
Date: 02/19/08 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
So amazing. So simply, frickin brilllinat at capturing what life it. One thing i noticed about this fic, which differs it form many others, is that there wasn't even a Tom/Bill pairing until halfway through the very last chapter, and even that, it was still so amazing. It wasn't lacking slash, it was just simpy perfect through the whole way. Whilst waiting for new chaters, i would imagine what might happen, but you bascially bet everything. AMAZING. SPEECHLESS. FRICKiN DESERVES ALL THE APPRECIATION IT RECIEVED!
Author's Response: I'm happy someone noticed ^^ I realized I was crap at writing sex scenes and stuff, so I thought I'd try something new...
Date: 02/19/08 10:13 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh, i LOVE it, it couldn´t been better!
Date: 02/19/08 08:24 am Title: Chapter 11
Wow. That was an amazing story. I really enjoyed reading it! And the way you cleverly positioned the doll and crane in the story was a stroke of genius! haha. once again I must say that was AMAZING! :) x
Date: 02/18/08 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
Fuck'n fuck'n fuk'n beautiful. Seriously, i'm bloody speechless!
I have to go out now so i cant say what i really want but i will log on later so i can review this chapter properly. SEriously, this was beautiful Shibuyainn, you are an AMAZING writer! Honestly, you are my favourtie writer now. Your stories capture everything life is and it is portrayed through Bill in this story, you just gotta have a little faith! (:
Date: 02/18/08 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 11
What a happy ending ^_^
So cute :D
Date: 02/18/08 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 11
omg! =0
this was SO good! =0
yes, it was pretty long, but who the fuck cares?!
i sure as hell don't =P
i hope more stories like this one can be expected (A)
readlly well written if u ask me, and i can be pretty picky...
the reason i loved this fic, is because of how it was so different from anything else i've ever read.
i like things that r out of the ordinary, because they sort of make u think, don't they? =P
it also had so mamy well discribed emotions and minor plots that i just don't know how to explane how mutch i loved them! =0
*hugs as tight u as humanly possible*
and u better not complane about the length of my review, because in my oppinion, long chapters deserve long reviews, espesially if they're last chapters! =0 (A)
Author's Response: dude, long reviews are the best, you wont find any complaining here
Date: 02/18/08 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 11
You made me cry T_T I just don't even know what to say about this story, it's so wonderful and amazing and I've been DYING for the end because the cliffhangers were killing me. But now that it's here, I don't want it to be over! Write more T_T
Date: 02/18/08 10:56 am Title: Chapter 11
Aaww, I loved it! All the story is just amazing! I'll miss the "caterpillars" so much because I learned so many things with this story.
Hope you write a new story soon! ^^