Date: 11/22/09 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hehe the catapillar bit made me ROFL xDDD
Date: 11/22/09 10:07 am Title: Chapter 11
SQUEE!!!!! OMG I LOVED IT i never considered reading Twincest-non related before but this was amazing
Date: 11/11/09 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
bill is really really really fucked in the head!
Date: 11/11/09 12:27 am Title: Chapter 1
man shibuyainn, bill is really fucked up...
Date: 10/29/09 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 11
Completely amazing
Date: 10/24/09 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
OMG this was so good, i mean this is one of those stories that make you think and let you thinking i cant get it out of my mind! its just completeley amazing!
Second review lol.
Date: 10/24/09 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awww I know a lot of people had said this but, I loved it! I thought the last fight was going to be longer and painful lol, but it was perfect like this. It took me an hour to finish the last chapter cause I didnt want it to end haha. So thank you so much for this. Excelent! :D
Date: 09/29/09 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hi!
I just loved it. It was really touching and so beautifully written.
I absolutely enjoyed it and also became very fond of the characters.
Great work.
Date: 09/28/09 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
“Dude, it looks like cat shit. Seriously, and with those little legs? Mutated fucking cat shit with legs. It’s disgusting, and it’s ugly.”
rofl!
When you became uncertain about being uncertain, then you knew there was a problem.
^^ *nods head* So true.
Date: 09/28/09 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
His good mood plummeted, hitting the hard stone he was currently walking on, descending probably deep enough to give Hades a “what’s up”
^^ lmao. nice description.
He was seriously starting to think this guy was retarded. Not retarded, but like, seriously retarded. He peered closer at Bill’s facial figures, trying to figure out what the signs were of mental disabilities.
^^Rofl!! seriously, you give like, the best descriptions. lmaoo.
Date: 09/22/09 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 11
I just read all of this tonight and it was gorgeous. Really uplifting message at the heart of it. I really enjoyed it; huge thumbs up and my apologies I can't manage a more adequate review!
Date: 09/17/09 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 11
;-; This was so sweet. Really. I love how you made Bill so...I don't want to say weird, but that's what it is, I guess. Unique. Whatever. Whichever way you put it, you know what I mean. It was also beautifully written and even though there were only eleven chapters you somehow got an entire book in there. It reminded me of the book "Stargirl" and that made me happy because I really adore that book x]
Okay, now for some parts I especially loved.
You have definitely earned brownie points with me because you used the word 'brouhaha' in ch. 7 and that was just epic xD I never see that word anywhere and it made me laugh when I saw that you used it.
And then there was the part with the crane. I got tears in my eyes at that. It was so sweet. I love how everything Bill did had a purpose and you showed it.
You perfectly captured their personalities and really I couldn't suggest anything to this fic to make it better. I've seen this on the featured fic page but I never really got interested in it until I saw that my friend Ry (Twelve) had commented it, and she's a super-good author so I figured this was probably good, too.
And I was right :] I really loved this. I finished it all in an hour x]
So yeah. Das Ende :P
Date: 09/05/09 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 11
XXxxXX its sooo romantic!!!!!!
Date: 08/27/09 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 11
awe the ending was truly brilliant! i love it when i read a good story, && it hits me!
i just knew all along that tom had a little good in him, i'm glad you chose this ending (:
Date: 08/27/09 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg, that's horrible!
how could bill love someone who treats him so badly!? ):
Date: 08/18/09 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wow. That may be the sweetest story I have ever heard. I just about CRIED. So glad I clicked on it right now... It's beautiful!
Date: 08/13/09 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
ITSSSS BEAUTIFULLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuud so gud
Date: 08/03/09 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 11
naw i almost cry now!
Date: 07/25/09 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
I stayed up all last night to read this story. I'm really glad that I caught it at it's end because it was just... heartwrenching to read it all the way through like that (in a good way).
I cried the from chapter seven on, it was that touching. It's really one of the best fanfics I have ever read! It was so well-rounded. It closed off so well and everything just tied together perfectly. I loved it!