Date: 11/20/10 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 10
lol.... and T_T..... great job, ich liebe!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the read and review! Ich liebe!!
Date: 11/20/10 10:19 am Title: Chapter 10
OMG!!! O_O ur house burnt down?!! U poor thing, I am so sorry about that! I hope u and ur family are okay. Dont worry it will all come around in time. Okay now about the chap
Wow u scared me there! I thought lupin would capture her again and be tortured and such. But thank goodness she came out ok, thanx to the help of Josh. I can understand Tom would be a little agry with her, but I melt when the tenderness of his heart caves in. Finding out she is a twin is through the roof, but knowing that it was Josh! That I did not see coming. His letter was so heartfelt and sad, how could u not feel sorry for him enough to forgive.
Take all the time u need honey! Take care of urself xoxo
Author's Response: I was hoping for that affect. I was going to introduce Josh later but it just seemed right as I wrote it out. Yeah I didn't want Tom to just jump at Capri coming back, but I wanted him to melt. Yeah I wanted her having a two=in just pop out at you. I was actually listening to a really sad song when I was writing that xD. The power of music! xoxo To you too. Thank you so much for your support.
Date: 11/20/10 08:10 am Title: Chapter 10
I loved it!!!!!! It was really good and glad you finally updated woot woot. The ending was funny ;)
Keep up the great writing and update soon!
And I'm so sorry for what happened to your home..
Author's Response: I needed it to end at a good note. I will try to keep up the good work >.< personally I didn't think the ending ended well. Thank you for a read/review! I will try and update.
Date: 10/11/10 07:48 am Title: Just the way you are
I absolutely love this story. I can't believe she went back but I understand why she did it. Ugh I so can NOT wait until you update again!! -eep- I want so read more. Keep up the great writing and update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Thank you for the read and review! I means a lot.
Date: 10/10/10 12:56 am Title: Just the way you are
I love that song
Author's Response: I love that song too. It's so amazing! Thank you for the read and review.
Date: 10/09/10 11:06 am Title: Just the way you are
What the hells bells??? Noo she can't go back she just escaped and found freedom and love. Oh dear... Well I u say it is essential then I am just going to have to trust u.
Author's Response: It is essential and trust me it will all be worth it in the end. ^^ Thank you for the read and review.
Date: 10/09/10 10:57 am Title: Confessions
U need to know wats on my mind??...I needs to know what the hell happens next!! This is getting good!!
Author's Response: Thank you for tell me what's on your mind xD and Thank you for the read and review.
Date: 08/28/10 12:24 am Title: Confessions
dammit, cliffhangers are EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon, pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase???????????
Author's Response: Yes they are Evil, but that is what makes people keep reading it right =D. I will try and update soon.
Date: 08/23/10 12:24 am Title: Confessions
." At least let me come in there and keep you company".... seeing how distrat of a moment it is this would be a bad time for me to make a Gustav +Capri +bed =_______ joke huh? ;)
Gustav has been talking to/trying to console Capri for three hours? he's such a sweetie #teamgustav
"Gustav looked at the door wondering why the hell Capri wanted to go to the park of all places, considering what was going on right now. " a sweetie thats still funny as all hell lol
"Gustav saw exactly what he knew he would see. Capri’s face was all red, her eyes were swollen and red, and her face was tear stained. " i know this is a dumb question but i wonder how he felt seeing her like that. Obviously sad but........ i wonder how heart wrenched he was- or if it didnt bother him much because he spent 3 hours prepairing to see it
"giving him her big ‘you can’t say no to this’ puppy dog eyes Bill taught her. " #question: how do you TEACH someone to do puppy eyes? #anser only bill kaulitz can
"It was his weak point and he would give anything, Capri knew that and took advantaged of it,".... bill rubbing off
"Bill was the last to enter, so he shut the door for added effect. " Only Bill would care about more drama at a time like this lol
“Can we go to the park?” Does this have something to do with Tom? -well obviouly- but i mean did he take her there sometime/ Was it like a special thing or something? sorry to say ts been to long ago since i read so i cant remember.......
"The other two looked at Capri as if she had gone nuts." Way to be sensitive to the heart broken girl guys lol
'“Wait, you two! What is going on? Did you two have some sort of twin mind reading moment?” omg people HATE IT when me and my siblings do that lol
"Yeah, yeah, whatever. Let’s just go before my head explodes.” lol gusti -shakes head-
"Georg whined, making both Bill and Capri giggle." funny thing here is i can picture bill gigleing. easily. I cant picture george whineing tho........ you'd think it'd be easy with the cheerleader hair but the audio is blocked by the deep gruf voice. In my head i imagine it must have been high pitched tho which makes Me gigle lol
ok iv damn near written a book i think thats enough lol
Author's Response: xD I think a Gustav/Capri joke would be really funny right now. I was thinking is the whole time I was writing and I so wanted one of the characters to say something, but that would have been not okay xD. Gusti is a sweetie. It seemed like something he would do because he just looks so sweet! He is a sweetie. He did spend three hours preparing to see Capri, but it did brake his heart to see her like that. He just didn't want Capri to see him like that(I forgot to mention that) Yes only Bill Kaulitz can teach someone to do Puppy eyes xD If only. He really does rub off on her a lot because they spend a lot of time together. Yeah Bill didn't want his mom to hear. He is so sweet. Yeah it does have a special something. It was where they were alone for the first time since they met. Like alone alone. xD Guys can't always be sensitve not even the TH boys. i don't really know what its like to read someones mind. xD I couldn't stop laughing after I wrote that. Yeah Georg's voice does get in they way but if you look real close it is there. Thank you for review. I love that you write so much.
Date: 08/22/10 01:37 am Title: Confessions
Snap -deep breath-i read this whole thing and did comments while I was reading but when I went to post it it said 'registered users only' cause it had logged me out. I tried to copy and paste but thats the only part it pasted =/... ill re-read and re comment tomorrow....
Author's Response: Oh Okay I get it now. Thanks for explaining things for me. I can't wait to see what you wrote
Date: 08/16/10 07:13 pm Title: Confessions
“I take it that you made up then.” A voice said from behind the two. Tom and Capri turned to find Bill smiling broadly at them.
Author's Response: o.o Okay I liked that line too...-confused face-
Date: 07/01/10 08:47 pm Title: Better....or worse
OMG! You have to post the other chap. ASAP =D
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! It means a lot. I promise to get it up soon.
Date: 06/30/10 05:34 am Title: Better....or worse
NoOoOoOo! Tom don't be stupid! Just tell her you love her! This will only make her complacent when her father comes for her!
Gah,what a place to stop! More soon please please please?!
XD
Author's Response: I know stupid Tom. xD Thank you for the review and sorry for that cliff hanger I just had to end it there. It just made it all that more wanting xD
Date: 06/29/10 09:52 pm Title: Revealed
That man is her father 0_o i would asay more but it feels like iv been writing /commenting too much
Author's Response: No No No No No comment more more more!! I love that you write so much. I makes me really really happy!!
Date: 06/29/10 09:08 pm Title: Finally
Its good to finally get some insight on the guys side of their relationships with capri.I am concerned How both Tom AND Gustav liking her is going to end tho.
Tom relationship with her is slightly shyocking. It was obvious she was going to be close to him when she refussed to remove herself from his shirt the first night but its still stunning that he thinks he loves her. Here I was thinking it was physicaly impossible for Tom Kaulitz to fall in 'love' for more than 24 hours. you know what i mean ;) loljk
Gustav its cute that he can underrstand her so well. I wonder how he does it. Its probly just cause he pays so much more attention to her body than the other boys ;) lol. I should have figured he would develop something for her by the way they acted after his blow up.but still...
Bill would be the most affectionate. figures lol. Its too cute that they cuddle each other in 'public' I like that he shows her. I just hope HE doesnthave a thing for her too lol
Georg in my opinion makes a good big brother. I would say he can fight away the boys but sinxce so far the only boys that like his baby sister are his bandmates and best friends its a little out of the question huh? lol I wonder what he's going to do when she starts speking regularly... Buy her a pony? lol I wonder how he can tell Tom and Gustav like Capri when Bill cant... Or can Bill tell and its just that know one knows it yet? hmmm....
Author's Response: (Tom) Yeah they just had that instant connection. Yeah I know right him falling in love for more the a day. xDrnrn(Gustav) He really does pay more attention to her then the others do. He is just very observant. xD Him liking her is so cute though!! xDrnrn(Bill) Yes he has to be the most affectionate one of the group. I mean come on he's Bill xD and being him he has to show it right. xD And no worries Bill doesn't have feeling for her. He is just the lovable older cuddling brother =D. Btw Bill knows he just like seeing things play out.rnrn(Georg) I had to make he the Big brother. Speaking of him beating them off he is going to get a little more protective of her very soon because yeah stupid Tom. Maybe I will make him buy her a pony....or a horse...or even a whole farm xD. He can tell because he is observant like Gustav just less and well cause I said xD.
Date: 06/29/10 08:23 pm Title: Existing
aww her name is capri. Dont ask me why but when i herd that i instantly rememberd that ists the noise some cute little animal makes instead of thnking about the pants. I think its cause the animal is a pokemon lol Im happy she finally has a family but if simone is her mother wouldnt that make Bill and Tom her brothers?... Is there an incest warning on this story? lol Gustav has a temper? thats kind of a funny thought. Its cute how it played out tho. Seams like she hasd a special little bond with weveryone. nice =)OH SHIT. Im SOOOO sorry this is so long!
Author's Response: Don't worry about the long review I absolutely love long reviews it makes me really really happy to see it. Oh and the whole incest thing she is just like her mom not really her mom so there is not incest going on here xD. And she really does have a special bond with everyone. Thank you for the read and review!!! =D
Date: 06/29/10 07:48 pm Title: No name
wow. This is amazing. I luv it so far. Im curious how she got to that place, why shes there, why cant remember anything, why the boys ant to help so baqdly, whats going to happen to the guy that bought her ec. but ill keep reading to see if i get any ansers ;) lol
Author's Response: You are just going to have to wait and read. Things get very exciting soon =D. Thank you for that read and review.
Date: 06/23/10 01:37 pm Title: Discoveries
hehe i did like the ending of this chapter i thought romeo was a bit funny ^_^ also i like theplot of the story r u going to continue with it?
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yes I am going to continue I am just having a little trouble getting the next chapter going.
Date: 06/08/10 04:07 pm Title: Discoveries
I really like it! I wanna know what happens next, please update soon:)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I am really glad you liked it. ^^
Date: 06/07/10 08:54 am Title: No name
-aww so sad
Author's Response: Yes very...thank you for the review