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Reviewer: Janeyyy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

STUPID TOM! I want to hit him for being so STUPID! D:

I love this story btw, update asap :D

Author's Response: Lol, he's not stupid. he's slow xD

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

I think he really should tell him. It's pretty damn important at this point.

Author's Response: I think so too. but....boys will be boys. xD

Reviewer: Sweden89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 11:28 am Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.

i dont think i'm the only one who wants to see Tom jealous of Andreas ;)

Author's Response: hahah probably not xD

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.

XD lol

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 09:47 am Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

I loved it!!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^

Author's Response: *grins* Thanks love <333

Reviewer: bacettina Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 04:52 am Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

liked it 100%!! That was hot. But tom is such a cold-hearted man, oh gott... Why is he still thinking about georg when he's got bill?!? and he must be quite in denial if he's in love with georg but f*cks his brother... very faithful.. Anyway..Keep up the good job!!

Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you liked it. It was HARD trying to make it hot, cause i wasn't in a smut mood, I don't think. xD

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 04:04 am Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

I did like! i want Bill to dye his hair though.He should not still be trying to look like georg. thanks so much for the update, i can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you do. ^_^

Reviewer: gryffin_draco Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 01:36 am Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

eeek! Bill's gonna wake up with a head full of pain and regret. I can't wait to see what happens! Thank you for updating!

Author's Response: bah, your penname makes me wonder if you're a Harry Potter fan like me. xD but anyways, onto your review. xD Yea, he probably will. he's a bit slow on the uptake xD

Reviewer: Felicia08 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 01:11 am Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

The last part was kind of something i son't want to read again! Poor Bill! I want to hug him and hit Tom! Give me more love the fics!

Author's Response: Awww, sorry. I'll try not to repeat it then. xD

Reviewer: Velia Mineantea Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 12:40 am Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

Yes, i agree, it's going to hit them both hard. Somehow Tom's gonna blame himself and Bill will try to persuade him that it was his own...
So Bill has decided to tell Tom everything? Well, we all are anticipating a heart broken. (hopefully we'll be wrong)

See you next chapter.

Author's Response: Mhmm, it will, because they're both idiots and seem to have fun making life harder

Reviewer: freedom-reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/10 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

What's so wrong that they didn't use a condom?????? I love it as always and I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Um, well to me (and Bill in this), not wearing a condom is another level of trust and intimacy. you're letting someone inside of you unprotected.

Reviewer: lovemykaila Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/10 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

GAH ! i want bill to confess to tom :( update soon, ja ?

Author's Response: Awww ^^

Reviewer: rinigurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/10 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

that was a good chap sad but good....i luved it please update soon...and again thanks for the new chaps

Author's Response: sad is my forte, really. xD

Reviewer: Ascuba Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/10 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.

Oh alright haha I don't mind

Reviewer: k483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/10 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

This chapter was so good/sad I feel bad for bills poor heart he really needs to re-dye his hair black. And why is it so bad that they didn't use a condom?*is oblivious*

Author's Response: I usually wait to respond to most reviews, but I didn't want you wondering about this until my next update. um, sex without a condom is...trusting a person beyond belief, at least IMO (and in this story, it's Bill's). He always made sure they wore a condom, but now, they haven't, he's given himself 100% to Tom, and Tom....called out Geo's name. albiet drunkenly.

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/10 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

UH OH what's going to happen next!!! Update SOON!!!!

Author's Response: Lol, you'll see! and the next chapter is up now. xD

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/10 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

Oh, baby. ;__; Poor Bill, poor bb.

Aw, that's a real change from Minase-sensei's, where he only said his crush's name the first time. ._. It makes me really feel for Bill, here.

Tomorrow comes the reckoning. *worried*

Author's Response: Aww *hugs* He'll be fine. I think.

And *squeaks* I hope the change isn't bad. I LOVE Empty Heart, like to death, but I wanted to make this more in depth, and a bit longer than the manga (lol) so it worked out this way. I really hope it doesn't turn you off.

And I like to think that Tom's momentary lapse of judgement is that he was drunk, rather than the previous chapter, when he was sober, he called out Bill's name. xD

And don't be too worried. It's not THAT bad xD

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/10 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

omg... my heart just broke along with Bill's when Tom called the wrong name ! Poor Bill :(
I adore this story, thanks for this new chap, can't wait for more !

Author's Response: Awwww *hugs* yea, well he should've expected it, somewhat.

Reviewer: Aneksi Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/10 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

 

oooh! i wonder whats gonna happen when they realise no condom was used O_O

and im shocked! it suprised me when i read tom saying georg's name instead of bills! i swear, i felt heart broken as if i was bill O_O wieeeeeeeeerd

 

SOOOOOOOOO looking forward to the next update! x



Author's Response: LOL. xD

Er, Tom won't care and Bill will freak out? xD And awww, yea, Bill feels like utter shite, but it was expected.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/10 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts

I was right--I was thiking when they got it on, "oh no-no condom"!. I'm still pulled between feeling sorry for Bill and being mad at Bill for setting himself up and expecting more.
Really can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Lol, someone didn't understand the condom thing, but to me (and Bill) it's something serious letting someone inside of you without protection. And haha I'm a bit of both, cause Bill is just making it HARD to hate him. xD

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