Date: 04/29/10 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 7: Screwing Up.
Whoa. Let me just start by telling that I'm absolutely swooped off my feet with this story; I'm happy I only got on track by ch7 so I had plenty to read when getting started! And obviously, I can't wait for more story goodness to come my way :) The characters, you're totally nailing them! I'm in a helpless crush -phase right now and all their analyzing and second-quessing and moping is so spot on. Personally I don't get how Tom could be so into Georg if he's had Bill in his life for some years now. Though I would've wanted for Bill to get released from his angst (which you write so well and heartbreakingly!) early enough, just kills me to see him so sad, I like how realistically you're building this; Tom only now starting to very subtly maybe developing feelings. In this chapter, I loved the bit of the cursive lines of how he should call Bill Georg, and then him thinking "Bill". And the part where he thought he saw Bill in Georg, and not the other way round. Ah, all in all, this is so good and sexy and sad and just a very, very delighfully addicting story! Thank you so much.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad that there was a lot for you to read then. xD I have fun writing this story, and I'll try to keep a sane and current updating schedule. xD I'm glad you think everything is spot on though! A lot of my knowledge of crushes are from friends and stuff I read. I'm not a crush person. xD I'm too unaware of my surroundings and the people in it to do crushes, but it's ALWAYS amusing to be the person my friends come to for advise. xD
Angst is my forte, so Bill won't be released too soon. I think it's cause he's liked Tom for so long, but it doesn't mean that he won't work to curb some of that angst, or at least ignore it. xD
And well, Tom has always seen Bill as Geo's younger brother, but that's changing now, and it's going to change even more in the future, so I'm HOPING that all will go well. xD
Date: 04/29/10 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 7: Screwing Up.
hi.
You left me with an anxiety episode, what in the name of The Creator was trying to say Bill. George arrival, I think is more than unwelcomed.
Just when I saw some sparks of true 'afection' of Tom towards Bill, everything got complicated ***sigh*** Is George going to notice that something is off with his brother and BF?
Thak you for the updating, it is realy, really one of my favorites stories.
Kisses!!
Author's Response: hi! xD
er, he was trying to admit his feelings, and that he let Tom use him as Geo's replacement because of those feelings. -.- idiot boy. xD and yes, Geo's arrival is MOST unwelcomed. xD
And yea, Tom was learning to know Bill as BILL rather than as Geo's younger brother. and Maybe Geo will notice, but like Tom, he's an idiot. xD
Date: 04/29/10 05:03 am Title: Chapter 7: Screwing Up.
oh yay, i cant wait! this was good, sad, sweet, and leaving me with the urge to make geo leave stat just so Bill can confess to Tom and Tom get with Bill in all ways possible.. love you!
Author's Response: Lol, new one up now. xD I want Geo to leave too, but he's an important part of the story, so he has to be there. xD
Date: 04/28/10 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 7: Screwing Up.
THIS IS SO COOL, I'm wondering if the condom issue has anything to do with mpreg cause I don't remember having reading anything about that in the warnings but that would be like the cherry top on the cake! love it!
Author's Response: YAY, I'm glad you think so ^_^ and nahhhh there's no mpreg in this one (though I wish there was xD). you make it so tempting to write it that way though. xD But anyways, nah, it's just about Bill's personal thoughts on sleeping without a condom
Date: 04/28/10 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 7: Screwing Up.
OH NO!
Author's Response: oh yes! xD
Date: 04/28/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 7: Screwing Up.
I like it, but If I were Bill I´d kilol Tom:S
Author's Response: Lololol, I would've too, trust me xD
Date: 04/28/10 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts
They didn´t use condom the first time neither, huh? Anyway, I liked this chapter, even though I think that it hurts Bill way too much
Author's Response: Lol, they did that time. I just didn't mention it. xD Should've but I didn't xD
Date: 04/28/10 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.
I like the chapter, but I don´t know, Tom is really stupid
Author's Response: LOLOLOL i keep telling everyone, he's slow and blind, but not stupid xD
Date: 04/28/10 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 4: Best Friends
I like it, even though I think that Tom is plain stupid and that Andreas is a mischevous brat that I addore.
Author's Response: Lol, Tom's slow, and Andreas is AMAZING. I love him in this xD
Date: 04/28/10 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 7: Screwing Up.
Georg is back, Bill is mad and Tom is fucked...*snickers* just the way i like it lol
Author's Response: LMFAOOOOO. dude, when I first read this I snickered HARD, cause you put it PERFECTLY. xD
Date: 04/28/10 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 7: Screwing Up.
Omg the timing! Figures, though. Poor Bill. But Tom's getting there. I was so happy to see this updated! :D
Author's Response: Lol, you knew it had to happen! xD No quick happy endings for me. xD And yea, it's getting there. Hopefully. xD I'm glad you were happy to see it updated (I hope today's update can make you just as happy).
Date: 04/28/10 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 3: Moving Slowly
lmao your (invisible) cock, but Hye! I totally get it ;)
I liuke the story so far.
Author's Response: lolol MHMMM it's huge xD
Date: 04/28/10 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 7: Screwing Up.
What was it Bill was going to tell him. I am confused?
Author's Response: That he loves him. That he slept with him because he loves him. That he's not comfortable being Geo's replacement.
Date: 04/28/10 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After
My beta is gonna kill me too someday, but at least yours doesn´t sent you an archive of 22 pages with grammar rules :S I like it, their introspective. And Bill´s mind
Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad that I'm not the only one facing death then. xD And ;___; no. I could probably use the archive, but I'd possibly run to a corner and cry if my beta sent me that. xD
And I'm glad you like both. They're the best part of the story. Other than Andi, but he's coming up soon. xD
Date: 04/28/10 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
:S It was weird, just gonna see how it gets from here :)
Author's Response: Lol, WELL, i wanted to thrust y'all right in. xD I always take forever to build things up, so I wanted to try something different. xD
Date: 04/28/10 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 7: Screwing Up.
HA! i dont think it likes me when i review on your fictions XD. Works on others ^^a. Come on Tom theres a reason why Bill left. He didnt want to see you drool over Georg. Poor Bill. Though it looks like Tom is starting to like Bill and realize that =, hey he might be better. Hell i would take Bill XXDD.
Author's Response: Lololol, it's against me knowing your thoughts! xD And hahah Tom's a bit blind, and every slow. xD
Date: 04/28/10 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 7: Screwing Up.
yay!! I'm so glad for an update and so glad to hear another one is coming soon. Tom is stupid, I hope he figures it out soon. Poor Bill. Keep up the great work and happy belated b-day!
Author's Response: yep, the new one is up now. Tom's slow, not stupid. xD And I'm glad you like it. thanks for the bday wish ^_^
Date: 04/28/10 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
Secrets by Vorabiza? That one is ridiculously long, just like I like them! Or was it a different secrets?
I freaking hated the Harry/Ginny thing. I think it was very poorly thought through on her part and felt way too "I am man, you are woman, we are now in love" to me. Plus she kinda whored her way through his entire dorm room before she got to him. >_<
I might poke through the fandom again this summer sometime, but I really don't want to have to sort through the piles of rubbish trying to find good ones. I really wish I had all my old links :
Author's Response: Yes! That's the one. It was ridiculously long, but totally worth it. It was AMAZING. TOTALLY AMAZING. I was cracking up. Anything Harry/Draco is utterly amazing. xD
And I agree, the Harry/Ginny thing was too random, and I guess she figured that people would want him to have a happy ending, but...I'd prefer him to be gay or alone, than to be shuffled with her. xD even Hermione would've made sense. xD
And you should! My friend Rose and I would be more than happy to give you H/D links, and amazingly there are sites that list all SORTS of H/D fics. Like specifically for that pairing. I'm in heaven every time I visit those sites xD and oh, you should probably email me at parallelheartz@gmail.com so we can talk more, cause I don't want either of us to get in trouble for talking in reviews. xD i've done it before xD
Date: 04/28/10 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 7: Screwing Up.
its my birthday also :))) more plz
Author's Response: awww! happy birthday! and more in two days! i think i'll dedicate that chappie to you then ^_^
Date: 04/28/10 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
Exact opposite of me lol! I got out of the HP fandom because it became too hard to find decent Harry/Draco fics. The fandom attracted so many young kids that it just overloaded with yuck. I felt like I outgrew it. Hmmm let's see if I can remember some of the great ones. Welcome to the Real World is a must read. Tempus Fugit. I remember liking The Golden Snitch but the author died before it could get finished. The Secret's In the Telling is a good one about werewolf Draco. Sadly I lost all my Harry Potter book marks when my old harddrive died, but there's a few to get you going. If I remember any more I'll let you know. XD
They agreed to disagree cause they weren't getting anywhere lol
Author's Response: LOL, you need to come back! There are SO MANY AMAZING Harry/Draco fics. xD I avoid most of the people in the fandom, save for people I already knew before I joined, but the friends that I do have in it have linked me to THOUSANDS of fics, and I literally spend my time either writing for TH or reading for HP, with a couple random fandoms thrown in here and there xD
Hmmm, I'm pretty sure those fics have been listed, but I haven't started them. I need to, if you're reccing them. Omg, I just finished one called Secrets. 52 chapters. I read 47 yesterday and finished the rest this morning, and it was AMAZING. I was like O.o I prefer this to JK Rowling making Harry marry Ginny (idc what anyone says, that pairing was WAY too random for me) xD