Date: 01/02/10 09:23 am Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
Oh this is not good, Bill is going to get totally hurt by Tom in the end. I really like this fic and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: *pats your head* he'll be fine. Bibi is a trooper xD. And I'm glad you really like it. I can't wait to post more <333
Date: 01/02/10 04:04 am Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
lol
Author's Response: ^_^
Date: 01/02/10 03:35 am Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
XD you know it XD lol but yay :]
Author's Response: lololol <3333
Date: 01/01/10 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
dude 0.0 something bad is going to happen to those two >.> post soon :]
Author's Response: LOLOL you're a fortune teller! xD And I shall ^_^
Date: 01/01/10 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
please do continue. (:
Author's Response: don't worry, I shall ^_^
Date: 01/01/10 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
please do continue. (:
Author's Response: <3333
Date: 01/01/10 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
Oh, I really like this! :D Especially Tom being in love with Georg.. Shame it's a twincest x'D I never say that, wth. Oh well.
Aww, Bill with Georg's hair color is making me giggle, but the mental image IS pretty cute I have to admit.
Yeah, I like this! Update soon ^^
Author's Response: Awww YAY. xD Well, idk, My dynamics work better with the twins, (or the twins with Bushido), and I didn't want to fuck up one of my favorite manga by making the entire thing Torg, cause Torg is still REALLY new to me. xD
and yes! I love the image of that. Hell, Bill would look fierce with any hair color xD
Date: 01/01/10 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
interesting :D
Author's Response: yay ^_^
Date: 01/01/10 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
poor bill i know he said imagine that he was georg but it still has to hurt when someone calls out another guy's name in bed espeically if its a relative... :/
Author's Response: *nods and pats Bill on the head* poor Bibi is a little screwed up, and Tom just made it worse. It'll get better though xD
Date: 01/01/10 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
Great start- I think that Bill will realise that this is what he wants before Tom...and that Georg will attempt to kill Tom when he finds out he had sex with his brother...a well written chapter which holds promise- more please! Will we get to see Gustav?
Author's Response: *flutterclaps* yay. I knew smut would be a good start LOLOLOL. And Bill....is already there sweetie. xD Bill's...Bill. that's all I can say. LOL. and yes, Geo will....attempt murder LOL. And Gustav comes in after New Years! It's all going according to my plans xD
Date: 01/01/10 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
Ok-so does Bill has a secret thing for Tom-or did he just take advantage of the situation? Other than sex-what was the reason for Bill to get Tom drunk enough to F him???
Ready for the next chapter~~~
Author's Response: You'll find out in the next chapter xD I won't spoil it for others xDDD
Date: 01/01/10 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
as hard as it is to believe that you started yet another story, i like! even if you hate tom's poor forehead.
Author's Response: twas that sarcasm? O.O LOL. And *pouts* it's not like it's a NEW one. I've been working on this for a while. Am tryna post everything I've got written, so I won't be as laden, when school and work picks up. but besides that, I'm glad you like, and dude, it's massive. I feel like it's gonna take over the world. LMFAO xD
Date: 01/01/10 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
NGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Good grief, that was hot! Yeah, it was soon but damn if it doesn't FIT anyway! I feel bad for Tom cause he's so obviously gone for George and the boy doesn't even know Tom exists like THAT, but Bill harbors some feelings for Tom too now, doesn't he?
Yeah, second chapter now thanks!
Author's Response: LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL xD
I'm glad you thought it was hot, and yea, it had to happen that way LOL. Bill will explain why he wanted it to happen that day (when Tom was his weakest) And *pats Tom on the head* he'll be fine. Georg is just dense. And Bill. Bill is amazingly perceptive xD.
and er, no. xD wait like a good little girl before I spank you xD
Date: 01/01/10 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
I liked it. Its a different start to the new year great job. Happy New Year my dear hope it brings you some good this year.
Author's Response: awww, thank you ^_^ it's definitely a different start for me. i usually try to keep the sex away as long as I can LMFAO. Happy New Year to you too love ^_^
Date: 01/01/10 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
Love! I'll be watching for the next chapter!
Author's Response: YAY! and aww the watch won't be long. promise ^^
Date: 01/01/10 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
It's my mom's fault. HER version of bangs has always been the floofy kind, and everytime I've had bangs they've been floofy, and now everytime I think of bangs...FLOOFY! xD
Author's Response: fail. just fail.
Date: 01/01/10 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
o.o I'm still getting past the hair and bangs. It's funny how everytime I hear/see the word 'bangs', I instantly imagine some 80s bangs. The curly ones. Hence, I was seriously LMAO for most of this chapter.
That being said, when Tom wakes up, he's gonna flip xD
Author's Response: your train of thought confuses me and weirds me out. -.- i don't know of anyone else that comes to that conclusion. it's 17yr old Bill. his hair is just brown.
And next chapter is Bill's POV, so we'll see.
Date: 01/01/10 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
I really like it so far. Post more soon okay.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it ^_^ and I shall. thanks for reviewing bb ^^
Date: 01/01/10 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
Hm. *nods seriously* Me likie. XD
I think this is a really fun sort of concept, because Tom's all pining after Georg, and follows him around like a lost puppy, I'm sure :) It's super cute
However, I think it'd have been a LOT more fun if Bill was OLDER, which would (hopefully) lead to botTOM.
Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you like it ^_^
Er, as I said in the story notes, this is based off a manga called Empty Heart, so I kinda just took my own interpretation of the main characters there (it was fun), but in the manga, the age difference was WAY different, so I lessened it some, but I actually like the fact that Bill is younger. It explains a lot of what's happening. Plus, Topping doesn't have to do with age. Whether Bill tops of not is up to the story itself, not the characters' ages. but anyways, thanks for reviewing ^_^ It's nice to see this getting interest.