Date: 01/04/10 10:22 am Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After
Enjoyed it SOOO much! I'm waiting patiently for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: yayyyyyyyyy! xD glad you did ^_^
Date: 01/04/10 10:15 am Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After
More smut- yay! Im hoping that since Bill and Tom are alone for a while they will happily spend at least every chp having hot sex...or some hotness...here are some ideas:
Shower sex
Sex in a hottub/pool
Sex in the garden
Sex in some public place- like a changing room
Tom is right though- even if Tom has figured it out by then he should go ballistic...show the broherly relationship...maybe have it so that Tom convinces Bill to dye his hair black with steaks...show how their relationship changes- especially with been attracted to Bill without brown hair....
More soon please!
Author's Response: LOL. Well the fic is pretty much planned out (from the already written chapters on) and I have to say, there's not sex in every chapter LOL. there has to be plot development and sex doesn't always help LOLOL. and thanks for the plot ideas, but I think I've got it down pact, lol. I've got a plan for this bb, don't worry xD
Date: 01/04/10 09:11 am Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After
OMG i Love empty heart and this story!! you reminded me of it and i went back and re-read it and now im hooked on manga again :P
your beta isnt allowed to kill you until after you've finished this though!! and if she dies ill take over just as long as this fic gets finished!! sorry a weee bit over excited :D
much love xXx
Author's Response: Aww, YAY. you me and fyredancer share a love for that manga then! And I'm glad you're hooked again ^_^
and I KNOW!!! I keep telling her that, but I keep bogging her down with chapters like the crazy person that I am xD
Date: 01/04/10 09:11 am Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After
OMG i Love empty heart and this story!! you reminded me of it and i went back and re-read it and now im hooked on manga again :P
your beta isnt allowed to kill you until after you've finished this though!! and if she dies ill take over just as long as this fic gets finished!! sorry a weee bit over excited :D
much love xXx
Author's Response: <3333
Date: 01/04/10 07:00 am Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After
Cute!! :)
Author's Response: thanks ^^
Date: 01/04/10 07:00 am Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After
Cute!! :)
Author's Response: <333
Date: 01/04/10 02:44 am Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After
Aw man, poor Bill. Still, at least he's got this for now. I'm really enjoying the story. :)
Author's Response: *nodnod* Poor Bill. Poor the both of 'em, cause they're slow on the uptake LOL. I'm glad your enjoying is though love ^^
Date: 01/04/10 12:24 am Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After
I'm confused trying to figured out what is going threw Tom's head, but still a good chapter. I like how with your smut you don't get all graphic and all that. Really awesome :]
Author's Response: WELL, mosey on over to the next chapter and you'll find out. KINDA. xD and I'm sorry for the confusion. I switch POVs for a reason, so just work with me here xD and thanks for the part about my smut. I kinda just roll through it, I don't try to think too much about what I'm writing or it'll be too overly processed -.- anyways, thanks for reviewing
Date: 01/04/10 12:21 am Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
They're in Buffffffaloooooo and that makes me grin like a freaking mad woman, you have no idea. Wow, how lame am Iiii?
I like this a lot so far, it has a lot of potential, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Lolol, I have family up there, and I know the area well, so I figured I'd set it up there xD
Date: 01/03/10 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After
OMG!!! Bill is in love with Tom. And Tom is in love with Georg I wonder what Tom will think when Bill tells Tom that he loves him great chapter can't wait for more!!!!!
Author's Response: yepppppppp. and yepppppppppppppppppp. So much drama LOL. And Tom will...be slow, as usual xD
Date: 01/03/10 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
Sure! You can just pass it on to me for good if you want. I really don't mind looking over stuff at all. :)
Author's Response: sorry, my reply was uber late. I just posted chapter 6, but from now on, every chapter after that, I'm sending to your email then ^_^
Date: 01/03/10 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
Sorry... I'm so weird... I just wish I could lend you my grammar eyes lol.
Author's Response: Lol, it's okay, and how bout I bounce the next chapter over to you when she's done looking over it, cause she does skip things (she admits it herself) since she's basically working on all 7 of my major fics right now.
Date: 01/03/10 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After
:( I hate to tell you there's still some mistakes that were missed... But other then that hehe nice
Author's Response: *cocks head* My beta and I JUST reread the chapter after you reviewed this, and save for comma stuff (she generally leaves my commas alone since I have weird usage of commas) everything is fine. I wish, well she and I both wish that we could see what you see. But anyways, I'm glad you found it to be nice.
Date: 01/03/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After
dude awesome chapi
Author's Response: Awww, thank you ^_^
Date: 01/03/10 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
blame it all on the alcohol...
Author's Response: LOLOLOL. That always seems to be the best course of action for these boys xD
Date: 01/03/10 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After
Awesome! I can't wait to see what happen's when Georg find's out(I know it will be a while) and if Tom will find out Bill was really a virgin-his reaction should be very interesting!
Really looking forward to the next chapter~~
Author's Response: Aww, glad you think it's awesome! And haha, that's gonna be a BLAST to show you guys. One of the first chapters I wrote for this fic was THAT chapter, cause Georg is hilarious xD And Tom, Tom, Tom. That poor little fool. LOL. Thanks for reviewing bb ^^
Date: 01/03/10 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After
luved it please update soon and thank you for the new chap...
Author's Response: yay! am happy you did ^_^ I'll update soon as beta is finished with the next one ^^
Date: 01/03/10 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After
aww... so tom is physically attracted to bill... r more feelings going to come???
Author's Response: well, Bill IS hot. xD. And he's a willing body. LMFAO. xD but yea, Tom is at least physically attracted to Bill, and.....I can't tell you that LOL. You'll have to read on to find out xD
Date: 01/03/10 02:46 am Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
poor bill though, having to listen to tom call out georg's name. cant have felt good. i like this premise for this story quite a bit, i'm really looking forward to more. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: *nodnod* he'll be fine though. he's a trooper. and he had to expect it after telling Tom to pretend it was Georg. *nodnod*
Date: 01/03/10 01:27 am Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
Oh yeah, I really want more of this. *_*
Author's Response: Well then, I'll give you more as soon as beta gives this chapter back ^_^