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Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/10 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.

Oh lordy, that was such a steamy sex scene *drools* I was gonna leave an awesome review, but my brain is pretty done after reading that, so...

Author's Response: LOL, yay I'm glad I slaved over that. Kinda xD

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/10 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.

oh, what bill said about being a replacement made me so sad. tom is so stupid. wonderful sex with a guy he likes, and he's still hanging on to the straight and engaged one? thanks for the update, can't wait for more!! =)

Author's Response: I know, I know, but he knew what it was when he signed up for it. I think it would've been worse if Tom was KNOWINGLY stringing Bill along, yanno? but anyways, thanks ^_^

Reviewer: LauraPendragonListing Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/10 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.

oooh getting good :D is tom gonna be catching on soon? after what bill said? eee! cant wait to read more :D

Author's Response: lololol, no, bb is slow. LOL. he'll figure it out eventually though xD

Reviewer: LYNgo85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/10 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.

I feel so bad for Bill, acting like all that is going on with Tom doesn't mean a thing, that he is cool with being the replacement.

Author's Response: awwww, he'll be find. kinda. he's a trooper, and he can't complain. he knew what he was getting up to

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/10 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.

It seems interesting and I also feel that Tom really likes Bill even though he is in love with Georg. I wonder what will happen next.

Author's Response: Yay, interesting is good. And...I hope he does, for Bill's sake.

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/22/10 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.

You know, this is getting so way out of hand, on both counts, and I am sitting here knowing that Bill is really just hurting himself even more by getting even deeper into his Tom cocoon. But what happens when that world is over and shatters? What happens when Georg comes back? What if Bill is basically digging his own grave here because Tom was still hanging on to his love for Georg and completely miss he was falling in love with Bill too?

As much as I enjoy all these moments between them, this tiny world of make believe is going to be over eventually and both of them will be left wondering what happened.

All that said--- NGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH THAT WAS SOME HOT SMUT, BB! YEAH TOM, SLAP THAT ASS! XD You know you like that tiny hole squeezing your dick so hard!

Author's Response: I know, I know, BUT I can't help it if my characters are retarded, and I actually know people in RL that are masochistic and would totally end up like this *facepalm) But bah, don't worry too much, it'll get worse...and then better xD

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/10 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.

aaawwww loose XD

Author's Response: hm?

Reviewer: SaigeStarx2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/10 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.

pure awesomeness (and YES it is a word...in my dictionary lol) ;P

Author's Response: yay *flutterclaps* and dude, I use awesomeness in RL, so don't worry about it xD

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/10 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.

So hot ! I really like how this is going, cant wait for the next chap :)

Author's Response: yay, I was going for hot, I really was. Lol. And I'm glad you like where it's going ^_^

Reviewer: soul Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/10 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.

awwww...this story is great but also heart braking you know?...is tom going to feel something for bill someday???...poor thing...ok great story keep going and update.

Author's Response: *nodnod* I get you, this was supposed to be a happygolucky fic, but then angst entered the plot and i had to bow down to its whims lol. it'll get better though, i promise

Reviewer: punk_princess_044 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/10 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.

wow... i hope they dont get hurt too bad

Author's Response: awww, yea.....they probably will. LOL. i'm an angst lover, but I promise it'll get better. WAY WAY WAY better *nods*

Reviewer: TouchoftheWind Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/10 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.

Great-I really can't wait to see what you have in store for us- I really want to see Bill change his hair- and Tom loving it...and also some Bushido would be good- especially if we get some jealousTom...I would also like to see some Gustav soon- maybe a phone call...

I am also wondering how Georg will find out- will Gustav figure it out first or will georg get an eyeful...full on sex or a simple sweet kiss???

Author's Response: Lol, we'll see, we'll see love. everything has to go according to plot lol. thanks for reading and reviewing ^_^

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/10 11:11 am Title: Chapter 4: Best Friends

i love this babe! more please? ~.~

Author's Response: of course love. there's more up now ^_^

Reviewer: punk_princess_044 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/10 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 4: Best Friends

wow.. bill is just hurting himself... i just hope everythimg turns out ok

Author's Response: pretty much. and i'm sure it will.

Reviewer: LauraPendragonListing Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/10 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 4: Best Friends

ahh loved it :D cant wait to read more :D

Author's Response: there's more up now ^_^

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/10 11:40 am Title: Chapter 4: Best Friends

UM. WOW. I loved that sex-kitten line of his, and it's so true. But this is gonna hurt when it all starts to go south! ...in the meantime I'll be looking forward to that entire chapter's worth of sex! *_*

Author's Response: Lol *grins* glad you loved it, cause i think it's true too, and you're right, it's gonna hurt a lot, but I think the angst that will come from this will bring something sweet in the end, so it's worth it. Lol.

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/10 11:32 am Title: Chapter 3: Moving Slowly

Mmmf. You're trying to kill me with all the sex. And I was right; Tom IS dumb. This is going to take a Christmas miracle!

Author's Response: LOL. Yep, I am. LOL. nah, Bill's trying to kill you (and Tom) or something along those lines. xD

and yea you were, generally Tom is dumb in my stories. i can't help it. he's so ~not there~ in real life, at least for me, that it flows into my stories xD

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/10 11:24 am Title: Chapter 2: Mornings After

Ohhhhh man, all the sex. *_* All the avoidance of issues. Oh, boys. Love all of Bill's lies and I can't wait until Tom stops being so dumb as to not see right through him.

Author's Response: Lol, sex is good for the body (even if it's not good for the heart, in this case). And yea, they're slow, and Bill's walking into a trap he set for himself, but things will pick up. Eventually. xD

Reviewer: Aneksi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/10 11:12 am Title: Chapter 4: Best Friends

LOVED it! thanks for updating so soon! and YAYYYYYYYYYYY a whole chapter dedicated to smut! *dies happy*.

 

im such a perv.



Author's Response: lololol. ^_^ i hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/10 11:09 am Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.

Ohhhh Empty Heart, I see what you did thar. Love this manga and I'm really enjoying your take on it so far!

Author's Response: lolol. *grins* there was worry that I was changing it up too much (my own concerns) but I'm glad that you like my take on it. I'm having fun with it.

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