Date: 02/07/10 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts
loved it...amzing chapter...hurts me to know that Tom still loves georg..
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it. ^_^ and well, yea. a few weeks of fucking wouldn't change his feelings. not a lot anyways.
Date: 02/07/10 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.
Just catching up--that was sexy hot! And Bill, come on-what did he expect, he know's how Tom feel's about Geo, but I almost what to feel sorry for Bill because of how he feel's about Tom, but he went ino this with his eye's open...
Author's Response: Lol, am glad you think so. xD And well yea, Bill's a bit...slow in here (aren't they always). xD I think most people are on the fence about feeling sorry for him, because even IF Bill did know, it still hurts to see him hurting xD
Date: 02/07/10 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts
LE SIGH.
Bill.
Bill, Bill, Bill, Bill.
I don't know really. I GET where you're coming from, I do, but angel, why are you setting yourself for this very hurtful fall? And look here now. Look at what just happened between you. Something that should have been so loving and it was in a way, but you were drunk and Tom is not fucking YOU.
I know what you tried to do, but I know you're going to fall apart come tomorrow and I want to be there to hug you and comfort you when your talk with Tom proves to be more hurtful than you thought it would be.
When the one you love's in love with someone else, I don't think anything can hurt quite like that. I'm you right now and there's not a fucking thing I can do about it because that person will never see me as more than what we currently are, but that's neither here nor there, nor is this about me.
*hugs*
I'm sorry, Bill. I'm sorry Tom only agreed to this because he's completely missing what's already in front of him, so willingly and so very much open and sincere. I'm sorry he's in love with someone that will most likely not love him back the way HE wants and yet, when his own heart breaks, will you be there to pick up his?
How much will this all complicate things between you two?
So many questions, but I honestly just want to hug the both of you right now.
Author's Response: *huggles* Because he's human and a stupid human at that. He thinks it's the best thing, the only thing he can do, other than sit there and pine away. Boys. they're stupid.
Date: 02/07/10 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts
poor bill...it's pretty sad to see him struggling and hiding his feelings from tom...and only hurting himself in the process..
i was thinking that mayyybe tom was finally starting to see what's right in front of him...but no...he has to go and scream geo's name...
Author's Response: Mhm, but he walked into it. He knew what he was getting into. xD
and it's all about sex for Tom. somewhat. He started with Bill because of his love with Georg, so it'll take a while for him to NOT scream out Geo's name.
Date: 02/07/10 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts
God, they were doing so well, I honestly thought that Bill was going to slip and say "I love you" when he was having sex with Tom. Instead, Tom said "Georg" and I actually caught my breath, because it made me just hurt for Bill. I'm glad he's going to tell Tom tomorrow because Tom using Bill just isn't right, even if Bill said it was. :(
Author's Response: They were! But happy endings take a while for me. xD And I thought he would've slipped too, but apparently Bill can keep himself together (somewhat) when he's drunk.
I'm sorry you felt hurt for Bill, but it had to happen, cause well, Bill needs to seduce Tom as BILL, not as Georg. xD
Date: 02/07/10 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts
oooooo poor Bill....*pets Bill* He loves Tom....*sniffs*
This is good.
Author's Response: *hugs you* yea. He does. but he's stupid thinking this is the right way to get them. xD
I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 02/07/10 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts
OMFG I DID BUT WHY GORG>>>DAMN PLZ bill and tom must be 2gether. i needdd moreee plz plzplzpzlplz
Author's Response: Lol, cause Tom loves Georg? xD
Date: 02/07/10 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts
I fall more and more in love with this story with every chapter that I read. I feel so bad for Bill, who's allowing himself to be used just because he'd rather have Tom and suffer rather than not have Tom adt all. And I can't help but feel frustrated with Tom for not seeing that Bill's been lying through his teeth. I can't help but feel like he's falling for Bill a little, though; I remember in the last chapter, when they had sex, he said Bill's name instead of Georg's, and that gives me hope for some reason. XD
But anyway, I can't wait to read more! I was gonna start nagging soon if you didn't update, so I'm glad that you did. XD
Author's Response: awww *grins* you know how happy I am hearing that. xD
As for Bill and Tom...they're slow. and human. so they see what they want to see, and do what they want to do, thinking it's the right thing. And they're both a bit slow on the uptake on what's REALLY going on. xD and keep hold to your hope. things will work out. xD
and you nagging helped xD a new chapter is up now xD
Date: 02/07/10 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts
poor bill this is self-torture...
Author's Response: yep. pretty much.
Date: 02/07/10 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 6: Clear Thoughts
So good! I love how this progressed...and having Andi try and help about Tom not wanting Bill to get hurt was brilliant. And drunken Bill sounds fun...I would have used the party as an excuse for Bill to maybe get some action from someone else...maybe make out with Bushido and get a love bite which would make Tom jealous...the sex scene was amazingly hot as always but I want to cry for Bill when Tom said Georg. I really think that Bill should do his hair soon- if only to try and distance himself (black with blond in...or dreads)from Tom but Tom finds his hair attractive anyway and still wants him...
I am also eager to see what Georg does when he comes back...would love to see some brotherly interaction and maybe some sneaking around for Tom and Bill who are still sleeping together...I could imagine them sneaking out to the car or in the garden so they would be further away...maybe have them sneak into a neighbours swimming pool and have sex...tha would be hot...wet boys...-drools-
Anywho! More please- I love this story!
Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you do! xD I'm having fun with Andi. I don't normally get to write him so thoroughly. xD I like drunken Bill. Like, no matter where I write him. xD
as for using the party as an excuse, I could've, but I have a set vision for this story, and I'm waiting to use the jealousy til later. xD
Date: 01/25/10 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.
dude i feel so freaking bad for bill!
Author's Response: awww, don't. he sets himself up for these things xD
Date: 01/24/10 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.
I love this!!!! Ö :D I hope you continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: YAY! *flutterclaps* I'm glad you do, and I have ^_^
Date: 01/24/10 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.
I really really like this story, update soon please? ^.^
Author's Response: I'm really really glad you do ^_^ and I have ^_^
Date: 01/24/10 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jumping Right In.
O.O Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu, Dont say Georg's name you NIMWIT!!
Author's Response: Lol, he's slow xD
Date: 01/24/10 10:00 am Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.
MORE!
Author's Response: There's already more!
Date: 01/23/10 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.
omfg plz more :)
Author's Response: It's up ^_^
Date: 01/23/10 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.
can't wait to know the rest of your story :-)
Author's Response: Lol, it's coming. Trying to write this, as well as finish up a couple of my unfinished fics is killing me though xD
Date: 01/23/10 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.
I love this story so much but hte angst is killing me! This is not a healthy relationship.
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you like it, and eh, I like angst, but it's actually not NEARLY as angsty as some of my other fics. No really. xD And they're in a sex relationship. Save for their inner turmoil...it's not horrible xD
Date: 01/23/10 01:49 am Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.
I loved it! That was so... freaking... hot!
And is it just me, or did Tom actually cry out Bill's name this time when they had sex? ;) Am I sensing a bit of a break through?
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it! and honestly, The smut for this story is like the HARDEST stuff I've had to write, and Idek why...maybe cause it's smut in like almost every chapter LOL.
And errrrrr....we'll see? xD things are getting 'somewhere' xD
Date: 01/22/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 5: Erasing Mistakes.
i loved it but i was wondering if Tom was going to fall out of love with geo and into love with Bill. that would be so great! like, Tom starts saying Bill's name during sex or calls geo Bill~ sexy dreams about the younger brother would rock my world too!!!
Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you loved it, and honestly, eventhough I've plotted that point, I think it'd be fruitless for me to just tell the reader in a review, rather than let them read the chapters as they come up, yanno? anyways, the story is pretty much plotted out, and y'all will get updates soon as I have chapters completed ^_^