Date: 01/03/10 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 2 - A Little Bonding With Tom and Berlin
does tom still love bill
Author's Response: Somewhere, in the back of his mind.
Date: 01/03/10 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Play With Fire
Well I liked the chapter you posted before this one a little bit better, it was longer xD
But the ending of this one is more real like. But animals and a kid dont go together at all.
Anyway loved it
Author's Response: Thank you. But my cat gets along perfectly with Jordan.
Date: 01/03/10 10:34 am Title: Chapter 2 - A Little Bonding With Tom and Berlin
Not bad except for the animal thing.
It's dangerous to ahve a cat near a baby beacuse the fur can choke them to death.
Can't wait for the follow up.
xxx
Hapyy new year
Author's Response: My cat is perfectly fine around my baby. He just pulls the cat's tail and then scoots away.
Date: 01/03/10 09:36 am Title: Chapter 2 - A Little Bonding With Tom and Berlin
I just want to start off saying that the pets' names are so cute! I especially liked Pimp McFuzz... ; )
I really enjoyedreadibg this from Tom's perspective, though there's this air of melancholy because he and Bill aren't together. Lovely chapter!
Author's Response: Thankies! One of my dear friends call me "Pimp McFuzz" and I figured it was perfect.
Date: 12/30/09 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Play With Fire
*blushes* aww...that's sweet. Stop in and say "hi" sometime, then! No, seriously, that DOES make me blush...I'm glad ppl like the borderline crack that I write. LOL... No, really. That was the sweetest thing I think anyone could say. :D Thank you...and really. Stop by and say "hi" sometime!
Author's Response: Hehe, I shall.
Date: 12/30/09 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Play With Fire
OK...LOVING this story, but you need much longer chapters. I was just getting into it and its over! Next update please!
Author's Response: I'll try to aim for two-thousand words, next time. Just for you. ^^
Date: 12/30/09 10:16 am Title: Chapter 1 - Play With Fire
luv it please update soon ....*smiles* happy new year...
Author's Response: I hope I can update by tomorrow. <3
Date: 12/30/09 09:36 am Title: Chapter 1 - Play With Fire
I must read more!! This was so engaging and I can tell it'll have some lovely angst and sweetness. Plus Bill and Tom with a baby!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!!!<3
Date: 12/30/09 06:38 am Title: Chapter 1 - Play With Fire
Oooo TOm you jerk!
Loveed the memory parts.
More? xD
Author's Response: Ohoho, thank you so much<3 Updating soon, hopefully. Sadly, it can't be today. (Huge family thing - blegh)
Date: 12/30/09 05:19 am Title: Chapter 1 - Play With Fire
I love it. I can't wait to see what will happen between these two. And I got to say, the way you described Tom's look when Bill arrived at his place... wow I am not going to lie... I drooled a bit lol
Bill looked at Tom's musclar back, and when Tom turned around, his abs and lipring.
"I still love you," Bill whispered.
"What was that?" Tom asked, looking up.
Bill looked around. "...Nothing," he said, and kissed his baby's forehead. "I love you," he said, and walked outside.- that part I thought it was sad because apparently Tom doesn't feel the same way (hope he has a change of heart)but at the same time I found it funny because I pictured Bill just looking at Tom's abs and lip-ring and whispering the I love you not realizing he said it out loud or something. His reaction to when Tom said "What was that?" was funny.
Well anyways, this definitely left me wanting to read more of this so I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much!
Date: 12/30/09 04:45 am Title: Chapter 1 - Play With Fire
Aww *sniffles* Tom is such a DICK!!! He needs to get his head out of his arse and off his high horse before he loses Bill to another great man for good. I can't wait to read more.
P.S. Bill is and awesome mommy :D Berlin Dream, such a unique name, I like it.
Author's Response: Ha, I laughed out loud at the dick part. Oh you just wait, he'll be eating his words!
Date: 12/30/09 02:48 am Title: Chapter 1 - Play With Fire
can you ake the next chapter Tom's POV
Author's Response: You know, that's actually a good idea. (:
Date: 12/30/09 02:28 am Title: Chapter 1 - Play With Fire
AWW! Poor Fic!Bill...
anywho...
can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I absolutely ADORE your work, and to have you say that is a huge accomplishment for me! <3
Date: 12/30/09 02:18 am Title: Chapter 1 - Play With Fire
Awe! I feel for Bill! I really like this! More soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to have the next chapter up soon! Maybe by tomorrow!