Date: 04/22/10 06:07 pm Title: The First Of Many
hehe:D
Loove the way you torture them:">
:D
so how i said :">
cant wait ttttt 4 chap 7 :)
Author's Response: <3 thank you for the review :) I am working so hard to get it posted ;__; I fail at life right now lol
Date: 03/22/10 05:13 pm Title: Memory
i was wrong it didnt get better! im still holding out for it though
this is well written though btw
Author's Response: Aww hun <3 It will totally get better! And the ending will be effing breath-taking *cough* if I can get the imagery conveyed O_o LOL But yeah, working on next chap right now. Posting tonight :)
Date: 03/22/10 04:40 pm Title: Nightmares
im sry i havent reviewed yet but i had to pause for this one. the only way i can describe this is heart wrenching. now im going to continue to see if it gets better
Author's Response: :x It WILL get better. I'm just torturing them ;__; Thank you for reviewing!! <3
Date: 03/09/10 03:49 pm Title: Memory
good !i liked your story(can't wait 4 next chapter) !i felt like crying,but tears just dont appear.u made this soo real!!aaa..pour boys!
Author's Response: *cough* I totally didn't see this D: I am so sorry for not responding sooner!! Thank you for the review! The next chapter IS complete, I just.. have to edit it ..and .. I haven't. Because I fail. At life. ;___; Thank you again for the review!! <3
Date: 02/08/10 10:10 pm Title: Memory
Yay, another great chapter :)
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much <3
Date: 02/06/10 10:59 pm Title: Memory
eek, this was a really good visual, but not in a good way. i mean.... you did great at discribing things, but i dont wanna know what their father 's penis smells like and looks like. but it was good - in a totally wrong way. do you get what im saying? overall, it was good (:(:
Author's Response: lol I got you I got you. I didn't either, then it just kinda ...showed up on my screen and I went D: *gag*
Date: 02/06/10 06:29 pm Title: Memory
As fucked up and twisted as this story gets, I can't stop reading&coming back for more.
It's very well written, and as heavy as the themes are, it keeps the readers wanting more.
:D
Author's Response: Aw thank you. It is quite twisted :( It's bothersome to me, but I'm aiming for the happy lol It's there .. just... not yet. haha
Date: 02/03/10 11:55 pm Title: Memory
AAAHHH!!!!
This is so great! I love it! It's well-written and I can't get over how well you're portraying Bill and Tom, how they are reacting toward such a traumatic past. PLEASE update soon!
Author's Response: omg thank you so much! <3 I'm trying to get the next chapter out quickly!! :)
Date: 02/03/10 08:24 pm Title: Memory
as usual another extremely well written chapter. painful memories but a great story. i can't wait for more. keep up the wonderful work!
Author's Response: Thank you so so much for the compliments! I'm working hard on the next chapter!! :) Hope to post asap!
Date: 02/02/10 11:18 pm Title: Memory
O__O that was really good!..I love it despite all the things that the father done to Tom and Bill.. this is just amazing.
I especially like this chapter cause here you explain a little bit more the abuse that Tom also went through, I mean it wasn't Bill all the time...
Very well writen, congrats! I will waiting for more :D
Author's Response: <3 I'm so glad you like it! Thank you so much!
Date: 02/02/10 11:09 pm Title: Memory
that asshole *grabs gun and hunts down their father
Author's Response: He's a frickin bastard >.<
Date: 02/02/10 09:50 pm Title: The First Of Many
Another amazing chapter.
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much! <3
Date: 02/02/10 09:17 pm Title: Memory
Poor boys. ;_;
Author's Response: I kinda just want to skip ahead to the happy that I know is coming ;__;
Date: 02/01/10 05:58 am Title: With The Hand Of God He's Gripping Tighter
Ah-HA! I knew from the beginning that it was their dad- I knew it!
When I first started reading this I was interested in the idea of Simone finding out about hers sons in a sexual relationship, which I think makes for a kick-ass plot. I wasnt really expecting this even tho I had seen the warnings, and as traumatic as this story is, I think it's very well written and I can't wait for more. You've created a really captivating mystery and I can't wait to fing out how their dad died- did the twins kill him?! Is he really dead? Who is the one sending those tapes?
Yeah, you've got me hooked and I can't wait for more!!! :)
Author's Response: Aww! This review made my morning!! <3
Ya, this story is ...definitely challenging my writing ability D: and my stomach's ability to refrain from throwing up while writing. ICK. Thank you so much for the positive words!!
Date: 01/29/10 04:00 pm Title: With The Hand Of God He's Gripping Tighter
i knew it! it was their FATHER! (:
Author's Response: lol ^_^ I tried to give just the right amount of hints. <3
Date: 01/29/10 12:36 pm Title: With The Hand Of God He's Gripping Tighter
This is such an amazing, descriptive story!!! xxx
Author's Response: Aww thanks luv! <3
Date: 01/28/10 01:34 pm Title: With The Hand Of God He's Gripping Tighter
i knew it, but stilli dont think that it was his father....donno...have to think about it more..
okkkkkk...i LOVEEEEEEEEEEE zis story!!! tyvm for writting it and PLEASE WRITE MORE OFTEN XDDDD
Author's Response: Aww this review is love <3 thank you so much!! More will be revealed in the next chapter. It's halfway through the re-write :D
Date: 01/27/10 07:30 pm Title: With The Hand Of God He's Gripping Tighter
another very very well written chapter. i was afraid it was their dad. thanks for the update, keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Aww ty so so much!! <3
Date: 01/26/10 10:49 pm Title: With The Hand Of God He's Gripping Tighter
Gross.
Author's Response: ikr?
Date: 01/26/10 10:13 pm Title: With The Hand Of God He's Gripping Tighter
I'd been wondering if it was the twins' father and now I'm really, really suspicious. D: Those poor boys, if it WAS him, no wonder they weren't able to escape!
I hope Tom can help Bill heal. ;_;
Author's Response: I hope he can help Bill heal too :( .... *sniff*