Date: 02/12/11 02:17 pm Title: With The Hand Of God He's Gripping Tighter
D: these poor babies! You depict their feelings SO well it's painful to read. Your way with words is extremely powerful and man, I hope the twins can mend any kind of relationship they may have together in the future. This is brilliant but so sad ;___:
Author's Response: There's a saying I heard somewhere... 'the audience feels it, if the writer feels it' or something along those lines. Every bruise, every scar, every tear the boys felt, I felt. I cried with them and by the end, I will laugh with them and I am so glad that you, along with a handful of others, are along for the ride. Thank you again, for all of your sweet reviews!
Date: 02/11/11 06:05 pm Title: Nightmares
Oh my God that was just awful! I mean, gorgeous in so many ways but so painful. And that a part of Bill blames Tom is just beyond tragic. I'm really intrigued about how their relationship is going to develop in this fic. I mean, it's already so broken and I don't think I've ever read a fic where their relationship is like that. King of Kingz comes the closest I think but no, this is really something different and it's absolutely amazing! I'm catching up quick though, damn WHY do I read so much on this site so fast!? his fic is so amazing *___*
Author's Response: ;__; They really are quite broken, but they are working hard to get their pieces back in place. It will take awhile, but it'll be worth the struggle.
Date: 02/11/11 05:22 pm Title: Secrets
I love how you depict such raw emotions throughout this. I can feel all three of them, their emotions all running so so high. This is such a gorgeous piece of writing and I'm really amazed by it. So much so I'm gonn press on despite warnings of not-so-nice things to come .-. But I've read a lot and experienced a lot so I'm thinking it'll all be okay :3
Author's Response: :} your compliments are so dazzling! Thank you oh so much. Truly, I am deeply grateful you're taking the time to review each chapter and say such nice things!
Date: 02/11/11 05:04 pm Title: I'm Sorry
Ooh man, I don't think anyone took that very well. God I feel so awful for all three of them. The weight of the guilt on Simone's shoulders must be enormous. And god I'm all teary for the boys. How can they mend themselves after what they've been through? But yeah, like you said it's going to get worse before it gets better. I'm almost dreading reading on but wow this is really really good o__O
Author's Response: Aww the beginning of this story I think holds more emotion, or ..more upset, than later. I'm simultaneously working on 10, 18 and the final chapter O_X And the emotions there seem easier to accept than these...if .. that makes sense lol The dread is warranted. However, I promise a very happy and fulfilling ending. <3
Date: 02/11/11 04:54 pm Title: The First Of Many
I started reading this such a long time ago and I'm so sorry I never finished it! I don't think I got beyond the first one or two chapters. Not because I didn't like it, your writing is really, really amazing, I don't think I even have a reason, I just stopped and then forgot. Anyway, I was sifting through my (way too many) tracked stories and came across this and definitely wanted to read it again and catch up with what I never did ^_^ So anyway, I'm back to read this!
Like I said, you write so fantastically, it's really engaging and I'm definitely wanting to read on. I'm kinda apprehensive about what I'll uncover about the boys' past but yeah, I've read the warnings so I know what I'm getting myself into .-.
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I appreciate the compliments greatly *stores them in a jar for bad days* I'm glad you're back to reading it!
Date: 01/23/11 08:06 pm Title: Sex
i agree with tom, i don't like andi.... but anyway.... DUDE, POOR TWINS!!!!! *huggles twins* and i thought MY characters' lives were bad..... good job, though, the emotions are very clear and the reader can feel them perfectly...
Author's Response: Aww I think this story twisted my characters lives into a giant mess. :-/ I can't wait til the end :D It's gonna be awesome lol THanks for the review! <3
Date: 01/22/11 10:17 pm Title: Sex
So glad you updated!!.....Andi fucking sucks in this. Twincest all the way
Author's Response: Aww I don't want anyone to dislike Andi :-/ ... but yeah, he's not that great lol I have really been trying to stay on top of the updating! Thanks for the review :D
Date: 01/22/11 09:36 pm Title: Sex
Oh man, I really feel for these boys. ;_; The daydream...it definitely seemed too easy! So lovely and sexy and natural, then Tom woke up from it and felt so disgusted. ;_;
I'm still hanging on for these poor boys.
Author's Response: I wish it was so simple for them!! They are so confused. :( They will be happy in no time! ...well, not if I keep adding chapters like I have been lol
Date: 01/05/11 02:37 am Title: Spilt Milk
Such an overwhelming story.
I'm intrigued by the plot and I like Bill and Tom's characters very much.
Thanks for sharing this. It must be harsh to write.
P.S. I loved the final lines of the chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry I didn't respond to this sooner! I'm glad you liked the final lines :3 I debated on keeping them. I'm happy I did now! :) <3
Date: 12/12/10 03:17 am Title: Spilt Milk
thanks for updating this again. poor bill, poor both boys really, they are so tortured. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: <33 thank you! I hope to get the next chapter posted soon. 3000 words in on it already. :)
Date: 12/09/10 05:32 pm Title: Spilt Milk
ill stay with you, i totally will. and i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee the story, you should write more stuff like this :D
Author's Response: Aww omg thank you!! :3 rnrnI'm not sure I have it in me to write anything other than this one haha Maybe if another lyric strikes a nerve XD I'm steadily working on the next chapter, I am proud to say! :D
Date: 12/09/10 03:08 pm Title: Nightmares
AWW Jesus Christ I swear I nearly cried for Bill at the end!!
This is really graphic so I skip over them but the story is actually fabilous!
Author's Response: I understand about the skipping parts :) I would if I were reading it lol rnrnThank you for the compliments. I promise it gets better for Bill. Promise promise. <3
Date: 12/08/10 07:12 am Title: Spilt Milk
Can't wait for the next chappie!!
Author's Response: The next chapter is well on the way! ....and full of angst apparently... It's gonna be good, though!
Date: 12/07/10 02:35 am Title: Nightmares
Thats so sad Y_Y
I;m literally crying right now! There is no words to described what pain I feel for the twins. My heart just feel broken for Bill.
Author's Response: Awww *pet* don't cry! It'll get better....after awhile.... <3 Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/06/10 08:38 pm Title: Spilt Milk
Oh man, these poor boys, is all that can go through my head. It's so tortuously, all too realistically written.
Author's Response: Oh, it is realistically written?? I was afraid I was becoming kind of flat and unbelievable with this one! I'm glad to hear I'm over-criticizing <3
Date: 12/06/10 08:03 pm Title: Spilt Milk
Can't even tell you how excited I was to see you had updated :)
Author's Response: Aww thank you <3 You don't know how much that means to me!
Date: 10/19/10 06:52 pm Title: The First Of Many
Wow, this story has really grasped me. It's different to anything I have ever read before... disturbing, shocking and upsetting. However you wrote it so well that I'd like to know where it goes! Please continue with this story, you're an amazing writer :)
Author's Response: Awww thank you soo much! rnrnI'm obviously a crap replier ;__; and poster since it's been so long since updating this. I'm nearly done with chapter 8, though. Honestly, my life has been a mess since I posted the last update and I haven't written a word until just a week ago where I wrote 3000 words. Anyway, I'm rambling.rnrnUpdate soon I swear on my life or else I'm just posting what I effing have lol
Date: 06/15/10 06:36 pm Title: Friendship
please finish the next chapter as fast as you can. I really like it. :)
Author's Response: Chapter 8 is nearly done. I wish I could have finished it sooner. I feel SOOO bad that it's been so long since updating this story :( My life has been a mess since 24 May, and it's slowly back okay. I can write again, that is. Posting ~soon
Date: 06/14/10 06:53 pm Title: Friendship
I hope you'll update soon and I hope there will be a happy ending =)
Author's Response: There's definitely a happy ending. I'm nearly finished with the new update. My life has been in shambles since 24 May, which is hardly an excuse, but it's the truth. ;__;
Date: 06/14/10 06:39 pm Title: Memory
Poor twins =(
Author's Response: *snuffles them*