Date: 01/02/10 11:12 am Title: I'm Sorry
ok...-sighs-phew! as long as there's a happy eniding, I'll keep going!
Author's Response: There will be a good happy ending to this. It's just going to ...take some time to get there :-/ Thanks for the review! <3
Date: 01/02/10 10:37 am Title: I'm Sorry
That was so sad...and amazing chapter though xxx
Author's Response: Aww thank you <3
Date: 01/02/10 08:15 am Title: I'm Sorry
Getting very interesting :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 01/02/10 07:25 am Title: I'm Sorry
As a mother, I can honestly tell you that I would feel exactly the same way. However, I think even with all my guilt, I would not rest until I get to the bottom of the story, to know what really happened and who this person is/was.
But I also feel for the twins here, because whatever happened to them is out in the open like this and their mother has seen it before they could even THINK about telling her of it, if they ever would have.
Tough spot to be in for sure, both parties. :(
Author's Response: I'm a mother too, and I think I'd feel the same way. She's not going to rest, she's going to dig deeper and figure things out. She's pissed inside, she just doesn't realise it yet. I don't think the twins were ever planning on mentioning it to their mother :( They are both so ashamed ;_;
Date: 01/02/10 05:44 am Title: I'm Sorry
Powerful- I love how Simone doesn't care that her twins were with one another but at the guy who made them do that...poor Simone...she needs to show the boys she is not upset with them...
Author's Response: She's trying :-/ She just doesn't know how.
Date: 01/02/10 05:40 am Title: I'm Sorry
I love this story give me more now!!!
Author's Response: Awww ... workin on it! ;)
Date: 01/02/10 04:44 am Title: I'm Sorry
The writing itself seems kinda rushed and not fully explained
But the pictures I'm getting in my head are great.
The scenes you chose remind me of some dark movie...they're simple
But very well chosen and meaningful I think.
I can really see the camera moving in my mind and I get the whole pervy vibe.
No idea if that made sense...
I'm looking forward to more, though.
Author's Response: I appreciate the concrit, for reals :) Everything should be explained in the future chapters, which is why it's not in these two. The chapters get longer as the story goes on haha Thank you for the review!! <3
Date: 01/02/10 03:42 am Title: I'm Sorry
I can't wait for the next chapter. I feel so sorry for all of them. Poor boys they think it's their fault.
Author's Response: <3 I know :( Next chap soon!
Date: 01/02/10 12:16 am Title: I'm Sorry
glad u updated...
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 01/02/10 12:10 am Title: I'm Sorry
but you know, happy ending don't have to happen all the time! haha, but I'm an angst lover freak so ignore that...
I loved it, please please update soon!
Author's Response: lol For this story....the boys DESERVE a happy ending D: I'll be updating soon. This time I'm trying to wait an entire week damnit LOL
Date: 01/01/10 11:24 pm Title: I'm Sorry
oh wow.. im speechless!
Author's Response: *meep* Thanks <3
Date: 01/01/10 11:17 pm Title: The First Of Many
I loved it, i can't wait until more chapters are posted.
(:
Author's Response: Totally workin on it! :)
Date: 01/01/10 11:09 pm Title: I'm Sorry
Wow, lovely! ~ Tom and Gabriele S. (newly wed)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 01/01/10 11:09 pm Title: I'm Sorry
Oh, the poor boys...for them to apologize like that; no wonder Simone couldn't handle that! I feel so bad for them, thinking Simone is angry with them when she's mad at herself. ;__; Now I've got all sorts of suspicions about who was behind the camera.
Author's Response: Agreed :( It's such a sad situation for everyone. And...you might be surprised at who it is. Maybe. haha
Date: 12/30/09 02:31 pm Title: The First Of Many
omg, ahhhhhhh :D
Author's Response: <3
Date: 12/30/09 06:52 am Title: The First Of Many
omg omg omg.... cant wait to find out what happens next))
Author's Response: Awww <3
Date: 12/29/09 09:32 pm Title: The First Of Many
Then I'm with you TO THE END. :D ...And shiftily enjoying the voyeurism. For now. I reserve the right to sob later.
Author's Response: There is no doubt in my mind that you may sob later *hands you hankercheif* You may need it. :-/ but YaY! I'm glad you'll stick it out to the end :D
Date: 12/29/09 05:29 pm Title: The First Of Many
I...I want to read this, I'm already fascinated, but...I kind of want to know what kind of ending you intend for this before I let myself get hooked. ;_;
Author's Response: A happy one, of course ;) ... I can't destroy them this badly just to have it end just as bad ;__; I promise loads of happy with them at the end.
Date: 12/29/09 05:11 pm Title: The First Of Many
ooh this was goooood xxx
Author's Response: <3 Thank you so much!
Date: 12/29/09 05:09 pm Title: The First Of Many
OH my goodness, this is really good. I really want to know who was recording the twins and is sending the videos now.
I feel sorry for Simone.
Author's Response: I feel so sorry for her too :( Thanks! <3