Date: 02/16/10 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love this is so dirty and hot i want more... -w-
Date: 01/14/10 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Didn't like the pee-part XDD I'm really not into that, but fuck, this was great! ;D
Date: 12/31/09 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1
i had a hard time imagining them as girls, especially Tom, but i thought the idea was really unique and it was interesting. the whole dildo/strap on thing seemed a bit redundant...considering they're actually boys, lol. But, it was a clever story, and i liked it. Not sure girl/girl is really my thing, but it was a good read.
Date: 12/28/09 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hot. Oh, wow - that was HOT. I thought it was a little dialogue-heavy at first, yeah (but I think that's a personal preference, rather than an actual flaw with the writing), but that quickly ceased, and it was just... unbelievably sexy. Disappointed that it's just a one-shot, haha. =)
Date: 12/28/09 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting. Very hot. To be honest, I had difficulties with seeing them as actual girls and that's not my favorite, but I really like to see them as acting like the opposite gender. Like they are actually men, but in a game they (or either one) pretend to be girl/-s. It is a real turn-on for me.
I really enjoyed your way to describ4e their roles here as a pet and a Mistress. D/s works always :). That power was also showed here very well and that control Tom had over Bill. A great detail in the end, when Bill was actually confused for a while, how to call him.. eh.. her :).
So, I liked very much. Only thing that I prefer them as males, but pretending to be girls or something like that. Not actual sex change. But this was good as this was, don't worry about the sex change. It's after all a matter of taste always.