Reading this was like watching an awesome movie. I got so involved and couldn't stop reading until I got to the last word. Thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us and thank you for writing this. :)

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/13 02:46 am Title: A Pair Together

very romantic tale!

Reviewer: Kristine93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/11 05:03 am Title: A Pair Together

Lovely, lovely! It's based on a fairy tale, isn't it? It rang a bell around this chapter when the shedding of 7 layers of clothing was mentioned. :) Outstanding idea, I don't know what else to say. Touching, sweet and beautiful story. Still, amazing writing style. You have my complete respect and admiration!

Reviewer: Tiger_Lilly17536 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 01:16 am Title: A Pair Together

OMG! amazing! It was perfection.

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/11 03:19 pm Title: A Pair Together

That was amazing! :DD

I'm going around the site reading some of the older but still great stories. I'm happy I saw this one :D

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/10 09:51 am Title: One of Two

Hi there!
I come from a country where people of all ages are totally obsessed with fairy tales ( I still remember the impact "Girl with matches" had on me when I read it for the first time when I was just 7). We have a very long fairy telling tradition so I was naturally drawn to your fan fiction having soon figured out your trade mark.
Strangely though, I started reading with "Making love" and first after that I encountered "King's right" and "Laying claim". I was utterly enchanted. I continued with "Change of sea" (my absolute favorite one), and then I just read systematically all the rest. Your ability to re-tell old folk stories and fairy tales is incredible. You make them so magical but also very current and engaging.

I hope you don't take it the wrong way but I have noticed after reading virtually everything you wrote so far (except unfinished WIPs), that your "modern time non-fantasy fics" and your fantasy/fairy tales category almost seem to be written by two different people. I don't know, when you embark on fairy telling, charm and beauty of your writing rises stratospherically compared to the former. Structure and composition of your sentences, dialogues, pacing, use of language, it all is so sublime and just perfect, so perfect. Be it Tom as a serpent, or Bill as an automaton or seal or dragon...it is always surprisingly realistic and beautiful and hot.
You have my admiration.

But to comment on this specific story. My favorite most chillingly beautiful moments must have been...babies' birth, their early on clinging to each other, Bill's "Hungry" scenes, their first encounter, the wedding, Bill's dressing up, MILK BATH ( God, that was something).....basically almost all of it. Great work lady!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/10 02:44 am Title: A Pair Together

This story is even better than what I remembered... I don't think I reviewed it the first time so here it is! This is such a powerful story, the universe you created is amazing and I enjoy reading each words very much. So well done, one of the most intriguing, interesting and weird story in the best way possible!

Reviewer: tommikaulitzgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 08:41 pm Title: A Pair Together

:D awwww! that was an amazing fic. I adored every single second of it!!

Reviewer: mcpofife Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 05:34 pm Title: One of Two

This is a really awesome fic. Dark and twisted in the best of ways. Thanks for posting.

Reviewer: anders1972 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/10 06:00 pm Title: A Pair Together

A very well thought trough plot and a nicely executed writing style. I like that they get each other at the end and that there are no way Jorg can contest that. And the hot sex of course...;)

I honestly thought you were going to make Wyrm!Tom have sex with Bill for the magic to work (that would have been hot by its own merits) but human!Tom is so much more romantic, and I'm a sucker for romance...

Truly many thanks for the sweet, angsty, romantic, funny and hot story of two people, separated by norms of society, coming together in marriage.
(It is fitting I should stumble upon and read this story, today of all days, the wedding day of our Crown princess.)

Thank You!
Anders

Reviewer: easyglow Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/10 03:43 am Title: A Pair Together

This was unbelievably amazing. Your story writing skills are awesome!! This story was so captivating not only in the beautiful (as always) twinnsie love, but also the extremely well written plot. You are so talented at writing fairytales! I will definitely add this story to my favorites.

Just as a side note >:] I have a really weird 'thing' For snakes...so you know, I think that Tom was super HOT either way ;a289;

Reviewer: jeanisfunny Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/10 10:17 pm Title: A Pair Together

I've yet to read anything of yours that I don't adore. Lovely work. :)

Reviewer: rainbowcolored7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/10 04:24 pm Title: A Pair Together

Oh wow, this has left me breathless. So beautiful kish.

Reviewer: eiri Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/10 05:11 am Title: A Pair Together

Oh man, that was awesome!They already studied everything to assure the Holding's future anyway,their knowledge about laws and the rest is better than their parents,so there's no better spouses to run it after Jorg and Simone :)
I guess Jörg will be pleased in the end. His son is no longer half wyrm and the rumors will always stay rumors. Both his sons are married, and his holding is safe lol. I love happy endings so I prefer to imagine the good things after Tom and Bill are done making love haha!
Thank you, that was awesome. Your imagination is leaving me speechless, because each world in every fic you ever created is perefect, it has its own rules and languages, is logical and everything's explained, not randomly put there to suit the plot and leaving the poor readers frustrated about the hows and whys.
Thank you :)

Reviewer: Random324 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/10 09:59 pm Title: A Pair Together

AWWW'!!! I really love this. Awesome!! :)

Reviewer: fantasieland Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/10 06:50 am Title: A Pair Together

Great story with a lovely fairy-tale feeling without going overboard with it

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