Date: 04/11/10 02:54 pm Title: Remember When
awesome chap! write more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! Will do :)
Date: 04/11/10 10:48 am Title: Long time, no see
Nei .__. Du ahr abre sendt meg den over mail, ante ikke at du hadde lagt den ut :'D Men whatever, UPDATE, jente!
Author's Response: men jeg tror du har review'a før *tantrum smily* XD
Date: 04/11/10 10:38 am Title: Long time, no see
Ficen XD
Author's Response: Eh, men det visste du da? XD du har jo review'a før?
Date: 04/10/10 09:54 pm Title: Remember When
so i realized i read this and didnt review it!!
*gasp*
thats like a sin for me!
haahahah but anyway thanks to you i know read...mpreg!
*GASP* haha
the only other mpreg i read was...Makes Three! but i mean who hasnt read that one! :D ayway!
hm...... idk how i feel about the characters yet i know i love tom!! ha as usual! bill hm....idk i loved him then i was pissed at him and now im in the middle! :D i just... i understand why he didnt tell Tom right away i mean! its kinda crazy to think about but i mean after SIX YEARS!! and he didnt even tell him Tom was just walking around minding his own buisness and its like BAM!!! he has a six year old daughter!!
okay now younger tom bothers me ugh!!! how could he treat bill like that i mean even if bill was acting like a bitch! you FIND OUT WHATS WRONG WITH HIM! not ask another GIRL! too prom! ugh effin ridiculous!
ugh and poor billl! alone pregnant and confused ugh so sad i love him! he is just :D
and bushido....hm idk how i feel about this one i hate stories where i am supposed to like him i am so used to seeing him as the villian but i guess...(well at least in the story) that he isnt such a bad guy! :D
I LOVE ELLA!! she is so much like tom! that is so cute! and she has braids! awww haha i wonder how she is going to react when she finds out that TOM is her dad!! crazy!!
omg i cant belive the drama in this story!! and i love te flashbacks they are juicy so more of thoose please and please update soon!!
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D great job i love it!!
Author's Response: hahahaha, well, I'm glad you read mpreg now xD it's amazing (most of the time). Bill's stupid, yeah. And a coward. Young Tom was pretty stupid as well, but he was a teenage boy and what teenage boy isn't stupid? XD Haha and I'm glad you like Ella ^^ So yeah, thank you!! :D
Date: 04/10/10 03:39 pm Title: Remember When
ooh, how very sad!!! poor bill.
Author's Response: aww :')
Date: 04/10/10 03:31 pm Title: Remember When
Oh, this is really good!
I love Bill/Bushido pairing (and T/B too! ;D
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 04/09/10 08:56 pm Title: Remember When
i just wish Bill still ends up with Tom... but of course Tom still has to suffer a lot first
Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not ^^
Date: 04/09/10 05:18 pm Title: Remember When
STOP FUDGING BUSHIDO AND GET WITH TOM ALREADY, OH MY GOD! THE BILLSHIDO IS MAKING MY SKIN CRAWL (no offense to fans of Billshido, just my opinion)
Aw, that fight was the worst ;__; So sloppy and messy..
I'm riveted, please update soon! I basically forgot this story ever existed, lol.
Author's Response: *snicker* Billshido <3 xD Thanks for reading! I'm glad you read it, even if you had forgot it ._.
Date: 04/09/10 04:11 pm Title: Remember When
I'm totally in love with this story
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 04/09/10 03:44 pm Title: Remember When
Usually I hate Bill/Bushido, but I gotta say that I'm actually liking them together in this story and you write them as a very believable couple. I think that Bill needs to man up and tell Bushido the truth about Tom's dinner plans (after all, it's just a simple dinner and Tom might be around more often if only just to be a part of Ella's life, not necessarily Bill's). For Bushido to stick around and be there for Bill and his daughter, especially when it seems like Bill was a mess when they met, that takes a lot of love. Bill needs to be an adult and realize that even if he still loves Tom, staying with Bu is more realistic.
As for Tom, I presonally think that he should move on with his life and find someone new. He deserves a lot better than Bill. What Bill did to him is unforgiveable in my book. It makes me wonder whether he ever would've told Tom about his daughter if not forced into the situation. I can understand not telling immediately (the whole I'm pregnant and alone freakout is excusable) but to not have told him after 6 years that he has a child...that's just messed up.
Anyway, I'm really enjoying this story and I can't wait to see where you're taking the plot next. Great characterization (even if it seems like I'm a Bill-hater at the moment) and a very emotional read. Keep up the great writing!
Author's Response: Bill needs to man up, indeed. I can see why Bill seems like an idiot, and he sort of is xD But what excuse can you have for not telling anyone they have a kid? For many the reason is simply that they're cowards, and Bill was/is. He dug his hole too deep and couldn't crawl up. And Tom is just... Tom xD Thank you so much!
Date: 04/09/10 01:24 pm Title: Just like lightening
*sutre* Du har ikke sagt til meg at du la den uuut. Ehehehehe, dette kapittelet ruler :'D "Something was wrong. Very wrong" *skummel musikk*
Author's Response: Ikke sagt at jeg la hva ut? Ficen, kapittelet? XD Takk ^^
Date: 04/09/10 12:42 pm Title: Remember When
OMG This chapter was fantastic! So worth the wait! Though I hope we won't have to go through that again. *puppy eyes*
Author's Response: I'll try not to make the wait as long, promise D: Thanks!
Date: 04/09/10 12:04 pm Title: Remember When
:(((((((
I love your writing but this makes me so sad. :(
Author's Response: awww *hugs*<3
Date: 04/09/10 11:44 am Title: Remember When
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
And yeah for the Billshido scene xD
Author's Response: I hope it wasn't too horrible x''D
Date: 04/09/10 11:11 am Title: Remember When
So this is my first mpreg i've ever read. recently, i've gone over to what my sister calls the dark side, which is slash lol we're both avid het readers but ive been finding that slash has been...calling out to me, you can say, and i actually enjoy it. i have been a little tentative with mpreg, simply because its unnatural, but i really enjoy the way you write it. that its simply a genetic mutation, a gene that's passed down, seems completely andutterly truthful, like it can actually happen. i've also have stayed far FAR away from bushido. so this story has turned it all around for me :) you're a fantastic writer and i've fav'd this story with high hopes that you'll update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad slash has been "calling out to you", it's a much better side tbh *nodnod* XD I'm glad you like my explanation on m-preg, I just had to go with something. Thank you so much again <3
Date: 04/09/10 10:36 am Title: Remember When
WALLAH ALLAH BALLAH, DON'T FUCKINGS SI AT BOLL'S GONNA MAKE BABIES WITH BÆSHIDO? Fucking idiot, Bill doesn't want any of your ugly kidz :L
Buuut anygays! XD I don't know why you were so nervous about posting this? Or, the Billshidoooo smut xD Var vel ikke akkurat noe jeg hadde gleda meg til å lese, men bortsett fra the fact that I dislike Bushido, it was great :D ju arrrr verrri talented :-)))
Ughh, stakkars Boll og Tim :C stupid stupid stupid, that's what they are x_x they should get back together again asap! I mean, they have a kid for gods sake, they should raise her together ;D Right? (aaaand they are soulmates :F and Tom is much hotter than that wallajalla guy)
Jeg tror nok begge to vil ha ENDA en fresh start jeg :) He's still so very in love with Tom, yap. And Tom is, too. (i Bill ja.) *_*
So, what'll happen next huh? SHOW ME WHAT YOU'VE PLANNED! ;D
Author's Response: Ahahahaha x'D Og jeg måtte kutte mye av den første scenen x'D Jeg hadde mer, altså hele acten liksom, men det sugde som sagt hardere enn Bill så jeg kunne ikke poste det x'D Huff. Men ja, takk! XD
Date: 04/09/10 09:15 am Title: Remember When
God, I totally cried while readig the breakup scene! I love this story, please, please update soon!
Author's Response: Awww<3 Glad you like it :)
Date: 04/09/10 09:11 am Title: Remember When
I love the way you write-draw's me in deep and fast, I don't want to stop reading! Great chapter-can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Date: 03/19/10 08:21 am Title: Selfish
aw awwww
i was really getting into it
^^
lol
its really good
i cant wait for the next chap
Author's Response: Thank you! :D So happy you like it!
Date: 03/01/10 12:02 am Title: Selfish
This is an amazing story!! Please continue.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D