Date: 01/27/10 03:17 am Title: 11. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 3.
i LOVED it:D and i think that Bill and Georg being friends was good. it shows that Georg has a human side and isnt just an asshole. and the diary entry was good too i wanna read more though! ohh and i really really wanna know what happens when he disobeyed his daddy!! i think i just wanna know everything hahahaha which is good because i really love this fic and cant wait for more! i usually don't write such long reviews, but i'm finding myself super attached to this fiction:) good job and i hope to read more very soon!
Author's Response: I'm pretty much loving Georg right now and Bill's diary entries are really fun to write. (I've already written several future entries ^.^)...so plenty more of those to look foreward to..XD Thanks for the review!!
Date: 01/27/10 02:44 am Title: 11. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 3.
hey i just started reading this it's really good, i love it, i can't wait until you update next.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!
Date: 01/27/10 02:16 am Title: 11. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 3.
Okay. I just started reading this an hour ago and I had to get to the latest chapter! I love the way you write! It's just so relateable and forward. It's like I can actually see the events happening and it's so cool. I loved the song by LaFee that you used and the song 'Strong Enough'. I think your story might even bring me to tears, and that RARELY happens. )': lol
1-Bill's first diary entry was really innocent to me. Of course, he was 13 and the bullying obviuosly has gotten worse. And his parents are divorced, I'm guessing? Because it seems that he also much happier with wearing make up.
2-The thing with Georg wasn't so unrealistic. He hadn't seen Bill break down before, so I think his reaction was normal.
3-I'm guessing just major beating and torture?
4-Yeah,wtf? No Tomi?! LMFAO jk jk
AHHH I LOVE YOUR STORYYYYYY!!!!!!!!
LOL! Can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response: Yay, someone is actually commenting on the songs!! All the songs I use are from my list of favorites, so I'm glad you like them XD. Lafee is my favorite female singer and I stumbled upon the song 'Strong Enough' while I was writing that chapter and was like "OMG I must use this!" lol. O_O It's interesting to hear what you think about Bill's parents...im not gonna comment on that just yet, you'll just have to wait XP
Date: 01/27/10 02:14 am Title: 11. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 3.
wow, diary yay i knew it would be good, i loved Georg's reaction to Bill not unrealistic at all, seeing Bill like that made him real to Georg (i imagine). Dad - possible sexual abuse/ bad beating so sad for Bill. This chap was really good, long and lots of story it keeps getting better.
Author's Response: I love Bill's diary; it reveals all the things we want to know about Bill but that he doesn't remember himself, and I think it's a really good plot device. And Georg's totally great, isn't he? =)...and I'm glad you like the chapter length too...!
Date: 01/27/10 01:56 am Title: 11. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 3.
I want oto know what really happened with Tom and the car...
I'sd guess what went on that night but Its like almost 1 am.. Ive gotta go to bed... MORE PLEASE!!!
Author's Response: The real car story is going to be told soon XD
Date: 01/27/10 01:44 am Title: 10. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 2.
LOVE the room!!!
Is Bill really gay?
What's with the whole, "Respect my wife.." thing?
Is she not Bill's mother?
Author's Response: In order: Thank's, I love the room too XD....You'll find out....You're the first person to comment on Jorg's words...I think you've got the right hunch there...^^
Date: 01/27/10 01:30 am Title: 9. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 1.
IS Bill Bulimic? Cause that's what it sounds like...
Author's Response: You're close, but not quite...
Date: 01/27/10 01:21 am Title: 8. Getting to Know Me
Umm...ok? that's a bit wierd.
But it's a good story..
Author's Response: =)
Date: 01/27/10 01:13 am Title: 7. The Nightmares Haunt Me When I Sleep
Well, they could become friends.
What the hell was that for And?!
What did Bill ever do to deserve that?
BASTARD!!!! Gr... (I'm a mean, fiesty, Doberman, off my chain and running amuck!) Grrr.... Ru
Author's Response: I don't think Bill did anything to deserve that. I just think that Andreas was just taking control of Bill because of his weak position Remember that Andreas and the others are convinced that Bill is completely gay and be probably sees Bill as a slut. Andreas wouldn't feel bad about taking advantage of Bill because he figures that Bill likes cock anyway. And If Andreas told Bill they had been sexually active together before, and Bill discovered that he knew tricks for giving head, then he'd have no choice but to accept the idea that his old self was a disgusting slut. I must say, that's a sad situation for Bill =(
Date: 01/27/10 01:02 am Title: 6. You Were Doing What?!
I actually know all but one song so far, but I think my fav is Red Jumpsuite Appratus...
Author's Response: I love that song too XD
Date: 01/27/10 12:56 am Title: 5. Missing in Action
DiD Andreas rape Bill or something?!
Damn this is good!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 01/27/10 12:53 am Title: 4. So....He's a Vegetarian?
WoW... Intresting, very interesting.....
I wonder, made Tom beat the crap out of Bill with animal blood. IDK, iswa it on a movie once...
Author's Response: Nope sorry, no animals (besides Bill) were harmed during this fanfic XD
Date: 01/27/10 12:43 am Title: 3. Whispers
Well, I don't particularly care for the loon either...
Good chapter...
Author's Response: danke XD
Date: 01/27/10 12:37 am Title: 2. Not So Welcome
WoW.. BAD GEORG! Bad! WHat's with Tom? It's his own damn fault...
Author's Response: Yea, Georg just cant keep his words to himself lol. A boy who said that in my class got a whole week of detention haha ^.^
Date: 01/27/10 12:34 am Title: 11. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 3.
1. wow
2. awww i like that Georg and Bill r friends
3. *hids* id want to kno
4. :(
Author's Response: thanks for the review!
Date: 01/27/10 12:31 am Title: 1. First Day
Well, tis is a nice start... And if you still need a Beta, I'll do it...
Author's Response: Thank you. and it's okay, my sister is beta-ing for me because she's got nothing better to do lol. XD
Date: 01/27/10 12:26 am Title: 11. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 3.
I'm pretty sure that I've been a lurkie loo on this fic, the whole time...and for that, I'm sorry, I just hate leaving reviews, cause I always sound so random, and I ramble...
Point is: I love this fic.
Author's Response: I love that you used the phrase "lurkie loo", it was a saying I've never heard before and it made me laugh XD! And I find that my reviews can be pretty random and rambing as well....but I still leave them anyway haha ^^ thanks!!rn
Date: 01/25/10 08:33 pm Title: 10. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 2.
good use of vivid descriptive words
Author's Response: thanks for the compliment XD
Date: 01/25/10 07:30 pm Title: 10. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 2.
Oh! That just breaks my heart! I lived through a friend being abused and nearly killed by his father. Thi spart brings back such bad memories for me.
Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear about that. I should have probably added another abuse warning at the top of this chapter...which I'll now do...and I cant imagine what you have witnessed, but I hope that you will heal with time. =) Sorry if that sounds lame, but I'm being completely sincere.
Date: 01/25/10 12:41 pm Title: 10. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 2.
like the room and fucking hell his dad=asshole
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the room =) its my dream to have that room some day XDrn