Date: 02/07/10 05:19 am Title: 16. Fallen
1: don't worry ;) i won't send any warriors! =P hehe xD
2: i hate bushido >.< how can anyone do smg like that?! =0 even if hate sm1... *tries to comfort bill*
3: poor billa!! even afraid to tell his diary.. that really says smg about how afraid he really is *watering eyes* worst thing is: stuff like this really happens in real life... ppl being abused by their parents... ='(
4: the cracking sound... i have this horrible feeling in my guts that those were bill's ribs... Ö_Ö ;_;
Author's Response: 1: thanksrn2: I hate him too XDrn3: It took me 6 months to confess my eating disorder to my own diary because I was so scared about it. That's where I got the inspiration for that part from...rn4:yuppersrnrnthanks for the review!!
Date: 02/07/10 02:31 am Title: 16. Fallen
OMG. The way his mom died is super sad. Anyone could have helped her, but no one did. And of course, Bill feels horrible becuase he thinks it's his fault...
What kind of sick person would trick and manipulate someone with no memory of themselves like that? D: I would hate to get amnesia! I really hope it never happens to me...
I don't blame Bill for being scared of closets...
Panic attacks are horrible. I've had those before. But it's a good thing they haven't been happening ALL the time, but they do come randomly througout the year for me. Usually when I have something big coming up that stresses me out. And it's so embarassing too, because I had one during school and I freaked out all my friends and I felt bad. And one time during a dance practice that I had to do.
As I've said before, I can easily imagine what's going on in the story. Like it's a movie playing in my head.
AND THANKS FOR THE DEDICATION! I saw that and was really surprised. Haha!
Author's Response: I would hate to have amnesia too. There was a day a few years ago when I fell in the shower and lost about 1 day of memories. It was super weird- one minute I was at school and then I was sitting at my kitchen table and my parents were shining a flashlight in my eyes telling me I had a concussion and yea....weird....I've also had panic attacks too, but none at school. Just two at my house and both times I started freaking out.rnrnYou're welcome!!! Thanks for continually reviewing XD xoxo Kristina
Date: 02/06/10 12:26 am Title: 16. Fallen
I just want to kill Jorg, that slut wife, Andreas, and Bushido!!!! Grrrr. I hate them...
Author's Response: Same!! XD
Date: 02/05/10 11:24 pm Title: 16. Fallen
that's quite a long introductory note you got there o_o almost an entire chapter there.. anyway, i love where the story is getting to!! it's so exciting!! :)) cant wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Haha yea, I know =) but I needed to explain what happened to Bill's mom....and thanks for the review!!
Date: 02/05/10 09:54 pm Title: 16. Fallen
i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: =)
Date: 02/05/10 09:45 pm Title: 16. Fallen
awwww *runs to comfort bill....u poor baby
Author's Response: Bill needs a hug =(
Date: 02/05/10 08:11 pm Title: 16. Fallen
Poor Bill, i thought you wrote the scene with Bu really well.
Author's Response: Thanks XD
Date: 02/05/10 01:37 am Title: 15. I Love You, Mom
I think if you used the next chapter to explain it, you would cover all the bases...just being opinionated...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review =)
Date: 02/05/10 01:17 am Title: 14. The Way He Feels
WoW... his dad is such an asshole!!! The kid doesnt remember a thing! Damn dude, have a little compassion!! Why did you even have reproductive sex if you don'yt want the kid? Jackass! You, sir, should have been a blow job!!! Ok, now that im done yelling at the worlds worst dad... time to comment on the chapter its self... nicely written, great form...kudos!
Author's Response: Hmm....why have reproductive sex indeed....I think you just stumbled upon some forshadowing right there XD
Date: 02/05/10 12:59 am Title: 13. The Lovely Bones
wow.. I really like where this story is going... did you like the book or the movie better?? Yes I do think Bill should just kick andi in his balls already....
Author's Response: Thanks!! I actually haven't started reading the book yet (my sister did though, and kinda ruined it for me...=( ) but I'm hoping to read it soon. XD I loved the movie though ^^
Date: 02/03/10 12:07 am Title: 15. I Love You, Mom
I was right about his mom.. But I didn't know she was DEAD! D":
1- Bill's diary entry was so innocent and sad, because he seemed so happy.
2- The song was totally a good idea. )':
Ahhh... Need tissue...
3- You should go in depth about how his mom really died... And when the situation with his father got worse and how school went during that time... Even though it will be super sad... D:
Very sad chapter. Listening to the song made it more realistic and saddening. But I loved it.
Author's Response: 1- I love writing Bill's diary entries XD 2- Awwww 3- Thanks for the suggestion and yea I do think it would be really sad too :( ^^
Date: 02/02/10 11:50 pm Title: 14. The Way He Feels
1-Eating disorders are really interesting. I remember watching Intervention once, and it was an episode about an anorexic girl. It seems that most anorexic cases are related to mental disorders because the girl in the show would make a game out of eating food...And I think she only ate to make her family happy, because she would feel guilty if she didn't.It was a very interesting episode...
2-Yeah... Maybe Tom was the one with the sexual thoughts... xD Haha jk
3-I LOVE THAT BOOK SO MUCH! A GREAT AND TERRIBLE BEAUTY! D: I READ THE WHOLE SERIES! I got so sick of Twilight and so I found out that there was a 2nd and 3rd book, and I checked them both out and lived off them. xD
4-IDK about suggestions... LOL I must read the next chapter first! D:
BTW, MetroStation is Kool! :D
Author's Response: 1-I find eating disorders to be both interesting and scary, mainly because I experience it every day. 2- Tom XD 3- Did you hear that there is going to be a movie? Idk when its coming out, but there's pics online and I'm excited. 4- Thanks for the review!!
Date: 02/02/10 11:34 pm Title: 15. I Love You, Mom
I thought she was going to be in a hospital bed or something in the flashback; I don't know why. The tombstone was a surprise. That's so sad. :(
Author's Response: Thanks! Yea, I hoped for it to be a surprise...I feel so bad for Bill =(
Date: 02/02/10 10:53 pm Title: 15. I Love You, Mom
Oh god that was so freaking sad :'( I almost cried! But very very good too. Cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/02/10 09:48 pm Title: 15. I Love You, Mom
i just started to read ths story is it tom who is coming over? if so please let him see bill being beaten by his dad. please please please my heart goes out to bill. really. everytime his hurt or upset my heart hurts and i can feel it in my fingers and toes
Author's Response: Aww My heart goes out to Bill too. And as for whether or not it's Tom who's coming over...you'll just have to wait and see.....
Date: 02/02/10 09:06 pm Title: 15. I Love You, Mom
little paragraph is fine (where's Tom?) as always you are awesome, diary is really good. that is one of my favorite songs so sad
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 02/02/10 07:21 pm Title: 15. I Love You, Mom
POOOOR BILL :'(
Author's Response: Agreed =(
Date: 02/02/10 10:12 am Title: 14. The Way He Feels
There is like no feedback to give, 'cause it's all just so awesome!
Author's Response: Aww thanks XD
Date: 02/02/10 12:04 am Title: 14. The Way He Feels
Great update! Your writing skills are amazing and so very descriptive that I can see the story unfold in font of my eyes. The plot is great and I love all the symbolism you incorporate with your narrative. However, I noticed (I think it was two chapters back) that the POV would almost randomly change from one to the other and was quite confusing at times. An amazing story nontheless and I can wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the Review!! Yea, I usually switch POVs when I want to reveal more plot stuff, (about Billls, let's say....)(But Bill, can't remember whatever I want to reveal so I change to Tom's POV). If what I want to reveal must be included in that chapter, I'll switch the POV (rather than just adding a really short next chapter...) XD
Date: 02/01/10 11:04 pm Title: 14. The Way He Feels
way to go Tom awesome so far
Author's Response: XD