Date: 08/16/10 07:06 am Title: 9. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 1.
Bill and his dad don't seem to like each other very much =S
Author's Response: Nope, not at all. :(
Date: 08/16/10 06:55 am Title: 8. Getting to Know Me
Poor Bill =(
Author's Response: D:
Date: 08/15/10 05:16 pm Title: 7. The Nightmares Haunt Me When I Sleep
Andreas is an asshole D=
Author's Response: That he is. :(
Date: 08/15/10 05:11 pm Title: 6. You Were Doing What?!
I really like the quotes before each chapter but I didn't have time to listen to any of them =(
Author's Response: I made the songs into a playlist so that I could listen to it while I wrote. =) If you have time, it would be cool for you to check out te songs. :)
Date: 08/15/10 05:07 pm Title: 5. Missing in Action
OMG what happened ?
Author's Response: Gah cliffhanger!! At least you don't have to wait for an update though :)
Date: 08/15/10 05:03 pm Title: 4. So....He's a Vegetarian?
I think Bill has an eating disorder, unfortunately =(
Author's Response: Unfortunately, I think you're right. :(
Date: 08/15/10 04:56 pm Title: 3. Whispers
Aww poor Bill =( I personnally love what he wears and I would kill to own his Gucci and Louis Vuitton bags ! And the sunglasses too =)
Author's Response: I love what Bill wears too!! Did you see the recent photos of him wearing red plaid? If not, you should search for them. He looks good in anything! And, yes, his sunglasses are always amazing. :)
Date: 08/15/10 04:46 pm Title: 2. Not So Welcome
I'm always happy to see my mother language in a fic =D
Author's Response: French?
Date: 08/15/10 04:40 pm Title: 1. First Day
The plot seems very interesting =D
Author's Response: Good. :) Have fun reading!
Date: 08/11/10 11:51 am Title: 22. I'm Sorry
Wow. O.o
Author's Response: Yes, Wow indeed.
Date: 08/09/10 04:27 pm Title: 20. Cooking With Tom
Ow. Being anorexic and eating all that hurts alot. I always drank a lot of water before. And I still drink a lot more than I eat. I havent put a thought in it before. I don't really think Tom's plan will work. But maby I'm wrong. We'll see ;)
Author's Response: It does. The stomach shrinks after little food consumption, and then it becomes very painful to eat large amounts because the stomach is not used to being stretched to accomodate food. I have a problem with drinking liquids (not just eating foods), and I am often dehydrated. I think that Tom's trying the best way he can to help Bill, but in actuallity, the problem is much bigger than Tom realizes.
Date: 08/09/10 03:58 pm Title: 19. I Am Not Okay
He told. Good. I love these kinda comments you make. Like this last one. "Tomorrow I will make everything better." I think that the song choise was really good. It was their first big hit, after all ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like those comments. Even though they're kind of broad generalizations, I think they get a small message of hope across. Oh, and I'm glad you liked the song choice too. :)
Date: 08/09/10 03:12 pm Title: 18. No One Saw Through My Games
Good. He finaly understands that he needs help. I'm still kinda freaked out that this story is so similar to mine. Minus the rape, abuse, and Tom. I was anorexic/bulimic/I don't know what. After the first times I was forced to eat, and then forced it out again, I understood that I needed help. But I was way to sacred to tell anyone. I really hope Bill will thought.
Author's Response: This story is really similar to mine as well, also minus the rape and physical abuse. I have been emotionally abused at home, but now I'm going away to college so that's something I won't be around much longer. I'm anorexic. I've known since age fourteen when I read a magazing article about Anorexia and I was terrified because I fit all of the symptoms mentally. I'm undiagnosed, but I know that if someone of authority were to examine me, they would clearly see that I have it. I've always been afraid to tell people about it becuase the first time I did, my parents told me that I wasn't anorexic and that Anorexics are stupid (because they don't understand that it is a mental illness). Less than a handful of people know and take it seriously, besides the readers of this fic, obviously. I understand that I need help, but I am terrified of getting it.
Date: 08/09/10 02:51 pm Title: 17. This Doesn't Hurt
Poor Bill. He is really in some deep shit now. But I kinda have a feeling that Tom will fix it. At least a part of it. Again you amaze me with your writing skills. You make it seem so real. Like your looking into Bill's world through a tiny window. Like it has really happend in real life.
Author's Response: That he most certainly is. I have a good feeling about Tom as well. *winks* And, I'm really happy that you like my writing skills. I do try to put a lot of effort into my stories. :)
Date: 08/09/10 08:42 am Title: 16. Fallen
Bushido; go to hell! What did Bill ever do to you?! Ugh. Even thought I hate the fact that Bill was raped, you did the scene really good. You could almoust feel the panic yourself. When Bill ate with Tom you thought that Bill was going to get better. But I think it's good that you made another problem. It makes it more realistic. I really hate it when ppl makes everything to a kind of fairytale. Cause I know that life isn't. Damn, how do you write so well?! ;) PS. I still hate Bushido .DS.
Author's Response: I hate Bushido too. Yesterday, I saw some vandalism on a street corner that said, "Bushido für immer!" and I audibly ewwed. As creepy as it sounds, I really loved writing this scene. It turned out very different from the origional version - origionally, Bushido raped Bill in the school bathroom in front of Tom and a whole bunch of other guys- but I edited that to make it fit into the story better. I hate fairytale fics too, unless of course they're alternate universe or romance fics. But when people try to write fics with serious topics like eds, rape, and abuse, I always prefer realistic scenes to smut. I don't know how I write so well. Maybe it's all of the intense English courses I've taken at school over the past few years. :)
Date: 08/09/10 05:54 am Title: 15. I Love You, Mom
Oh. I was thinking that she was dead or something. That explains Bill's dad's behavior. The second flashback was really beautiful. At the begining you knew something was off, but you couldn't quite understand just what it was. You wanna know a thing that's really creepy? I was just listening to "Slipped away"
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked the flashbacks. When I was writing the second one, I got a little bit choked up and the scene turned out just as sad as I wanted it to. And wow, that is creepy. o_O
Date: 08/09/10 03:21 am Title: 14. The Way He Feels
Ok so now this is starting to really creep me out. Bill's thinking was way to similar to mine. I'm sorry that I can't leave a proper review. But I've really got some thinking to do.
Author's Response: If there's anything you want to talk about, just let me know. I'm always willing to listen. :)
Date: 08/09/10 02:58 am Title: 13. The Lovely Bones
Wow. This chapter really involved alot of fealings. Confusion, anger, pain, hate, hurt, and many more that I don't have any words for. The scenes that caught my attention the moust was the "I hate my self"-scene and the "rape"-scene. You really did thous two grate!
Author's Response: I'm really glad that you could feel the emotions I incorporated into the story. I wanted this to be as realistic as possible. Those scenes were some of my favorites to write. :)
Date: 08/09/10 02:28 am Title: 12. Did I Do That?
Hmm... Yeah, I'm pretty confused. Did Bill try to kill himself? And why didn't Georg just shut up instead of lying? Trying to help Tom in a kind of way? And what did Bill's father do to him?! I'm thinking more of abuse right now...
Author's Response: You'll have to keep reading to find out!!
Date: 08/08/10 05:46 pm Title: 11. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 3.
Oh, that was a way to end it. Good thing that I don't have to wait on the next chapter ;) I can understand the way Georg reacted. He must have felt so damn guilty. Well, I know I would... My mind is full of ideas of what happend in the end. What punishment he got. And ofc my head is full of ideas like rape or abuse. Really exited (and kinda worried) to see what it is :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.