Date: 02/27/10 02:15 am Title: 24. Hallo, Bill! We're The Trumpers!
hehehehehehe, I loved this chapter. I felt for Bill. My best friend's mom, the first time she met me, basically had a heart attack and tried to fill my plate with enough food for like ten people. LOL. Thank GOD my friend explained for me later and now her mom understands. :) ANYWAY, back to your chapter, I loved it. Tom seemed like the typical teenager spazzing about the parents meeting the new friend for the first time. It was wonderful. The interjections with his thought processes really adds a lighter tone to this tale. GREAT JOB!!!!
Author's Response: I loved this chapter too :) Doesn't it suck when people do that to you? It happens to me sometimes and I always get freaked out..just like Bill...It sucks :( Thanks for the review!!
Date: 02/24/10 02:39 pm Title: 23. I Like It When I Picture You Smiling
I'm really glad that Tom is starting to pick up on things. I hope that he can start to draw Bill out.
I'm excited for the next chapter. =] I hope all your "personal stuff" works out for the best!
Author's Response: Tom's going to become even more perceptive of Bill's plight. I can't say when or how yet though...^^ You'll just have to wait and see =)
Date: 02/23/10 02:32 pm Title: 23. I Like It When I Picture You Smiling
Aw poor Bill! He doesnt deserve to be mistreated.
Author's Response: Too right he doesn't! Bill really should attack Jorg with a shovel, hide the body, and escape to Tom's house....But I think that might be a bit too OOC lol =)
Date: 02/23/10 02:29 pm Title: 22. I'm Sorry
poor bill!
Author's Response: Bill needs to fight back!!
Date: 02/23/10 04:19 am Title: 23. I Like It When I Picture You Smiling
Love this story it is like uber capturing (is that making sense lol) georg is amazing! cant wait for more omg the concert was amazing wasnt it! i only saw vids! omg Billa bong fell on stage sorry for getting side tracked i am uber random and have add out the wazoo lol! feel better! Muah! ur amazing!
Author's Response: Uber Capturiing? My story?? Thank you so much!! I didn't get to see that video of Bill when he fell, but I must look for it now...=)....I did see some pics of Bill's crazy outfits though, they reminded me a bit of Lady Gaga (especially the light up one with the rib-like shoulder extentions...) and Tom, Georg and Gustav were all looking positively sexi as well ^^
Date: 02/23/10 01:01 am Title: 23. I Like It When I Picture You Smiling
i think you're still at a good pace with this story, Tom has changed so much i really like how you have developed his character. looking forward to Tom's parents meeting Bill
Author's Response: I think the pace is going well too. I'm not sure how long this will be yet because there is still quite a bit that needs to happen...but I'm not going to drag it out or anything. Tom's great and I really think you'll like the scene between Bill and Tomi's parents XD
Date: 02/23/10 12:30 am Title: 22. I'm Sorry
I totally thought I commented on this chapter, but I guess I didn't. Oh well, Im here now. Bahahahahaha!!!
Poor Bill, stupid Jorg. He must enjoy the power of fear.
And your diction is fine..
Author's Response: I like your crazy laugh right there^^ Mwuahhahaha... that's mine XD. Thanks for the review =)
Date: 02/23/10 12:21 am Title: 23. I Like It When I Picture You Smiling
Well, I looovvveee this story!!! It's one of my favorites!!! Fanominal job thus far... Really.
I wonder what Jorgis gonna say when Bill gets te record deal. If he does....
Author's Response: Hmmm....record deal...interesting idea. I'll keep it in mind =)
Date: 02/22/10 11:02 pm Title: 23. I Like It When I Picture You Smiling
Heh, I understand what you mean about not feeling colorful. LOL. ANYWAY, great chapter. I REALLY enjoyed it. Can't wait to read more. Bill's conversation with Tom was wonderful and I love the interaction between Tom and Georg. Great job!
Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter so much!!!
Date: 02/22/10 10:53 pm Title: 23. I Like It When I Picture You Smiling
awwww..poor bill
Author's Response: Poor Bill is right...^^
Date: 02/22/10 10:17 pm Title: 23. I Like It When I Picture You Smiling
I've been grounded from the computer for a few weeks and all i couldn't think about was how many chapters i was going to miss on this story and i was going crazy! haha i just really love this story and i hope your mood gets brightened so you can bless us all with more chapters from this wonderful story :]
Author's Response: Congrats on being un-grounded!! I'm glad you had this story to look foreward to over those weeks =) And thank you^
Date: 02/22/10 10:16 pm Title: 23. I Like It When I Picture You Smiling
Waited all weekend 4 this post, can't wait 2 c what happens next. Hope things get better 4 u aswell
Author's Response: Thanks for the review =)
Date: 02/20/10 10:05 am Title: 22. I'm Sorry
poor bill is it going to get better anytime soon???
Author's Response: Things will get better... I can't tell you when though ^^ You'll have to keep reading :)
Date: 02/20/10 02:03 am Title: 22. I'm Sorry
I Love this story I can't wait to read more! its like super intense, i am always reacting to different things like when he was going to hide i was so into i was screaming my roomie who knos nothing of TH or fanfics was freaking out too! lol like i said b4 cant wait to get more i feel sorry 4 billa i want him to escape! :(
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! I was really into Bill's hiding scene too! I'm glad you like my story so much!!
Date: 02/19/10 11:40 pm Title: 22. I'm Sorry
I think you did a great job with your diction. So is Bill gonna be raped by his father again? That poor poor kid..
Well, yes, I do find that rather annoying but yours is just fine!
Author's Response: Thank you!! Um...We'll see....^^
Date: 02/19/10 11:35 pm Title: 22. I'm Sorry
Your diction was well done. I liked it. And yeah, I know AP Language. Ugh, I took that Junior Year of high school and then AP lit senior year. Hehe. Anyway, you did a great job! And, I love Superchick's album "Beauty From Pain". "Courage" is an AMAZING song. GREAT JOB!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm in my senior year right now so I'm in AP lit. And Superchick is so awesome!! Did you know that the lead singer of the band had Anorexia for years? She's been trying to recover and I "Courage" is definately my favorite song from them XD
Date: 02/19/10 11:33 pm Title: 22. I'm Sorry
O_O How awful for Bill. His life is a living nightmare, so many battle's.
Hopefully Tom will be his saviour.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: That he is =( I hope Tom will be too XD. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 02/19/10 08:17 pm Title: 22. I'm Sorry
DAMNITTTTTTTTTTTTTTT if u dont tell tomi about the beatings im going to beat u! no i wont but in my mind i will. tell himmmmmmmmmmmmmmm pleaseeeeeeeeeee
Author's Response: O_O*I surrender!!!* Tom will find out about the beatings. I can't say when or how yet, but just be patient....I'll just say that he's going to find out at a very crucial part of the story....
Date: 02/19/10 12:41 pm Title: 21. Now This Is What A Real Family Looks Like
You can't just leave us hanging T.T will Bill ever tell Tom??
Update pleaseee!
Author's Response: I will =)
Date: 02/19/10 12:13 am Title: 21. Now This Is What A Real Family Looks Like
I have a feeling they're going to write a song in English? LOL IDK
Gustav is Tom's pet, then!? xD LMFAO
Tom's family is awesome! You'd think they would be so strict to him since he is a bad boy.
I don't understand the last line! Did something happen to Bill?!?!!?! D:
Author's Response: Lol =) Tom's parents love him even though he gets in trouble a lot. They dislike who he hangs around with and blame his bullying on his friends (i.e. Bushico...) Tom says that he doesn't know the real reason Bill didn't come over (Bill didn't just forget like Tom thought....) Then Tom says that there was no way he could have heard the cry (Bill's cry) from across the city, which implies that yes, something bad happened to Bill. Make sense? I hope so ^^