Date: 03/07/10 11:10 pm Title: 7. The Nightmares Haunt Me When I Sleep
I hope that Bill and Tom become friends. You're doing a great job with this story!
Author's Response: :)
Date: 03/07/10 10:57 pm Title: 6. You Were Doing What?!
1) I like Tom's POV better, just because he knows what happened, even if we don't yet.
2) Yes, I listen to all of the songs you've quoted. My faves are Fix You by Coldplay and Strong Enough by Stacie Orrico, so far.
3) I think the story is going great so far. I'm sure you have things planned out the way you want them. Just keep going!
Author's Response: THanks for the review! Fix You is my favorite Coldplay song and I'm really glad that you enjoy the way my story is going :)
Date: 03/07/10 10:44 pm Title: 5. Missing in Action
Ha ha, I love your little commentaries at the end of the chapters. And why are they all hating on Bill? I love Bill. And I HATE BUSHIDO!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I love writing commentaries XD And I hate Bushido too!!
Date: 03/07/10 08:08 pm Title: 1. First Day
I got that from my grandma.. She always says when I guy is a Dildo, he's a poor excuse for the real thing...
Author's Response: Your grandma is awesome! I wish mine was that cool!! :)
Date: 03/07/10 02:45 pm Title: 26. When Karma Comes Around I Hope It Bites You in the Ass
YAY!!! GEO!!!! tom and bill bonding of course is always a plus...
Author's Response: I love Tomi and Billa bonding moments =)
Date: 03/07/10 12:49 pm Title: 26. When Karma Comes Around I Hope It Bites You in the Ass
Well, I like learning foregin languages.. But some dont. I guess thats their choice, it's not geeky.
Good. I was wondering who oliver was..
Yes, Georg is awsome. Sadly, I kind of figured that's what was going to happen. He'll blame Bill for Georg sticking up for him. Bushido is such a Dildo!
Mabey he was trying to find some dirt on Bill, you know, to try to frame Bill or embarrass him.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I only really like learning English. French (which I learn in school) is okay, but I'm really bad at it. You think Bushido's a dildo? I think he's an asshole... I don't think he can be both lol XD I'm only joking. HM...Maybe....^^
Date: 03/07/10 09:32 am Title: 26. When Karma Comes Around I Hope It Bites You in the Ass
yay bushido suspended!!!! *dance around* but he could do stuff to bill... noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo TT~TT i really enjoy reading this story so pwease post as soon as you can *smiles*
Author's Response: *Dances and throws arms in air* Woot! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 03/07/10 07:55 am Title: 26. When Karma Comes Around I Hope It Bites You in the Ass
omggggggggggg please let tomi find out about bu and his dad hurting him! please please please
Author's Response: Soon :)
Date: 03/06/10 01:48 am Title: 25. All Mothers Should Care This Much
Great job so far! Poor Bill! Hopefully everything will work out in the end. Can't wait for the next chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review XD
Date: 03/05/10 06:16 pm Title: 25. All Mothers Should Care This Much
WoW. Im learning so much about ed's in this story... Thank you..
Author's Response: You're welcome!! Eh..I like to inform :)
Date: 03/04/10 02:28 pm Title: 25. All Mothers Should Care This Much
I'm glad that Simone isn't contacting Bill's parents - that would be disastrous! But I am glad that she's concerned enough to ask Tom about it instead of ignoring it. Things can't get better right away, and I love how accurate you're making everything.. most stories involving an eating disorder are soooo out in left field. I really appreciate how well thought out this all is =]
Author's Response: I agree- that would be quite terrible. I'm glad you like how accurate my story is. I do have an eating disorder, so I would hope that I describe it properly. :) ...Why am I smiling? Eds aren't fun...*frowns in confusion*. I totally agree with the whole "left field" thing. I get really pissed when a fanfic is like this: Bill- "Help, I'm just so Anorexic!" , Tom- "I'll save you Bill. But first lets make-out!" *insert sex scene here* , Bill- "I'm sorry Tom, I'll eat from now on. Your kisses have cured me!!. ....Ahem...I think you get what I mean XD Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/04/10 01:14 pm Title: 25. All Mothers Should Care This Much
I love this chapter... Poor Billa! My heart breaks for him.... :(
Give him a happy ending huh? Can't wait for an update!! :)
Author's Response: Awww :( A happy ending would be nice....but life isn't always nice!! Mwuahaha...Just kidding! I think you'll enjoy the ending when it comes. New update soon XD
Date: 03/04/10 12:42 pm Title: 25. All Mothers Should Care This Much
this story is so good. I wanna break the big fat ugly nose of that pathetic excuse for a jack ass dad though, seriously. AND I totally love Tom's parents, they are so sweet. Can't wait for them to grow some not straight feelings for each other, lol:') update soon!
Author's Response: I'll help you break Jorg's nose if you want! I'll hold him down and you can give him a strong right hook!! Thanks for the review XD
Date: 03/04/10 01:04 am Title: 25. All Mothers Should Care This Much
Wonderful job on another chapter! LOVED IT!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks :)
Date: 03/03/10 03:23 am Title: 24. Hallo, Bill! We're The Trumpers!
This is awesome! When are you going to next update?
Author's Response: Thanks! New update really soon :)
Date: 02/28/10 10:18 pm Title: 24. Hallo, Bill! We're The Trumpers!
i think i have a pretty good idea what they're going to do for the project ;D
great update!! post more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review XD
Date: 02/28/10 08:50 am Title: 24. Hallo, Bill! We're The Trumpers!
this is amazing, i can't wait for the next update :)
Author's Response: :)
Date: 02/27/10 07:52 pm Title: 24. Hallo, Bill! We're The Trumpers!
Im a bit confused, Bill Called Toms mom 'Kaulitz'... I thought they were Trumpers.... Oh well, we all make mistakes! I really do think their project should be a CD, but your the author. Make it yours! GREAT JOB!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for pointing that out!! I'll have to fix that now XD
Date: 02/27/10 07:37 am Title: 24. Hallo, Bill! We're The Trumpers!
Okay, I'm going to start this by saying that I just read all 24 chapters in one go. It's currently 4:30 in the morning and I'm practically asleep on the keyboard, but I just could not stop reading! Yeah, your fic is just that good. :) I have to say that at the beginning the writing was a little weak, but the plot idea really intrigued me so I kept going...And I'm so glad I did! The writing really started to pick up as the story went on. Maybe those classes where you learned about diction helped a bit haha.
And I wanted to wait until I finished reading all the chapters before I reviewed, because it felt weird replying to some of your chapter notes that were probably weeks old. :
Oh! And I'll bet my first-born child that their English project is going to be a song...or two. ^^ (I wouldn't actually give up my child, just so you know...D:) And I'll bet that this is probably one of the longest reviews you've ever seen in your life, if not the longest, so I'm going to stop now haha.
Oh, and I'm sorry that you're feeling stressed right now. :( Hopefully next week will be much better. :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like my story! I've become obsessed with some stories and have read them until 4 am in one go as well. =) It's amazing that you think my writing is improving as the story progresses. I never imagined that I'd ever be writing stories in English (English is not my mother tongue...I'm German XD) but since I've been living in the US, I have started to enjoy the language more and writing is a good way for me to practice...... And yes this is one of the longest reviews I've ever seen. Way to go XD Thanks for reading and reviewing!! xoxox Kristina ^^
Date: 02/27/10 04:41 am Title: 24. Hallo, Bill! We're The Trumpers!
great chapter ^^ love how it's progressing and can't wait for more =D
just one little thing about ur chapter notes... omfg they're long :O i like that u have allot to tell about ur chapters and stuff... but they're so long that i really can't be bothered to read them :S no offense.... i mean.. i had one of my fics declined because the notes were longer than 2 sentences....
Author's Response: Lol! Yea, I know my notes are chapters in themselves...=) Its okay if you don't read them. I just want to talk to the readers more, stir plot ideas, etc...and so I tend to ramble in my notes. I try to make them as brief as possible though...Thanks for the review :)