Date: 03/16/10 07:42 pm Title: 2. Not So Welcome
Oh Poor Bill! He's at the hands of a jerk who befriends other jerks (Tom, Andreas...)
Hopefully our innocent raven-haired will survive them!
Author's Response: I hope he survives them too :)
Date: 03/16/10 07:06 pm Title: 1. First Day
Hi
I jsut started to read your story today, it promises to be really interesting. See you around!
Author's Response: Have fun reading!!
Date: 03/15/10 10:17 pm Title: 28. Skinny Boys and Heineken Don't Mix Well Part 2.
Mmmkay, chapter is read. Need to read more. Need to read more soon *twitches*
Author's Response: New chapter soon :)
Date: 03/14/10 07:11 pm Title: 10. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 2.
" He raised a fist and smacked me in the face. The tears were now falling at full force.
“No sir.”
“Good. Now get your faggot ass up to bed.”
--While I was reading that I was listening to the chorus of Hilf Mir Fliegen and I cried. Bill sings the chorus as soon as he hits him and I actually started crying.
Author's Response: Awww :) *Hands over tissue* I think your the first person to admit that you cried while reading my story.
Date: 03/14/10 07:08 pm Title: 28. Skinny Boys and Heineken Don't Mix Well Part 2.
Tom sadly finds out the truth of Bill's home and his nightmares and sadness. Bushido and Andreas get their A** and balls kicked and punched senseless. Tom can give gets a good punch landed on Bushido. :) Because. "Revenge is a dish best served cold." And the G' can murder Andreas and walk away whistling. ;) You're doing really great. I want more...!
Author's Response: Your review is hularious! I would be glad to make all of these things happpen, but sadly I must stick to my script. Too bad. I would have enjoyed an Andreas murder scene..."rEvenge is a dish best served cold."...:) You crack me up!!
Date: 03/14/10 03:40 pm Title: 4. So....He's a Vegetarian?
Poor Bill. All the guys were mean to him and he doesn't know.
Author's Response: Aww... Bill's pretty clueless. Poor Bill. :(
Date: 03/14/10 06:25 am Title: 28. Skinny Boys and Heineken Don't Mix Well Part 2.
GRR!! MAKE MORE PLEASE , !!!!!!!!
Like today PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, i cant wait love this so much xd :(
Author's Response: Thanks for the review =)
Date: 03/14/10 04:24 am Title: 28. Skinny Boys and Heineken Don't Mix Well Part 2.
I love how you explain everything. It's really helpful. Lol. I like drunk Bill but I think bu and andi put something in his drink. Update soon!
Author's Response: I absolutely love drunk Bill. Hmm...interesting thought....^^
Date: 03/14/10 01:35 am Title: 28. Skinny Boys and Heineken Don't Mix Well Part 2.
ohhhhhhhhh updae againnnnnnnnn
Author's Response: I will XD
Date: 03/14/10 01:31 am Title: 28. Skinny Boys and Heineken Don't Mix Well Part 2.
Yet again this is a super good, exciting chapter! I'm so looking forward to the next one as usual :)
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 03/14/10 01:22 am Title: 28. Skinny Boys and Heineken Don't Mix Well Part 2.
poor billa *pats head*
Author's Response: Bill needs a hug. ;)
Date: 03/14/10 12:55 am Title: 28. Skinny Boys and Heineken Don't Mix Well Part 2.
That last sentence is working exactly how you wanted it to--driving me nut's---i'm dying to know what's next!!!!
Thank's for updating
Author's Response: I LOVE THIS REVIEW!
Date: 03/14/10 12:47 am Title: 28. Skinny Boys and Heineken Don't Mix Well Part 2.
I have a bad feeling that he is going to get the crap beat out of him for getting drunk...
I like to dance when I'm buzzed too.. Was it only beer he was drinking, or did Andreas & Bushido really have something to do with it..
I think I know why he got so drunk so fast. He doesn't eat much and his body is lacking neutrients it needs.
Author's Response: Hmm...I have a similar bad feeling. You'll find out why Bill got drunk so fast in the next chapter!! :)
Date: 03/14/10 12:40 am Title: 28. Skinny Boys and Heineken Don't Mix Well Part 2.
OMG! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. I've been mad busy and haven't been reading fics. ANYWAY< amazing job! Bill's character is definitely being developed in a wonderful way and I can't wait to see what else happens.
Author's Response: Awww thanks XD
Date: 03/12/10 01:41 am Title: 27. Skinny Boys And Heineken Don't Mix Well Part 1.
Way to go Tom for supporting Bill when faced with the Nacho dilemma. I do have a question about Bill's eating disorder. It doesnt seem to be calorie related, only food intake related correct? Just as a way of controlling SOMETHING in his life? Please keep writing, I'm awaiting your next chapter, gotta get my fix!
Author's Response: Yes, Bill's eating disorder is not focused on calorie consumption. There are several different factors that can lead to an eating disorder. When an eating disorder develops because someone feels overweight, is told they are fat, wants to be popular, etc. or people who are influenced by the media/friends to look a certain way tend to obsess about the caloric content of food. When an eating disorder develops from abuse, low self-esteem, perfectionism, rape, feeling not good enough, the sufferer is usually trying to control what's happening to them (because their life seems out of control) or they wants do disappear, be less of a problem... Eating disorders are tricky things however, and there are no rules for the disease. Anyone in from any ethnic background at any age can have an eating disorder that may differ from others in their same position. rnrnIn this story, Bill's eating disorder stems from his desire to control his life, his hate of his family (he doesn't want to spend time with them...like at meals...), his fear of being unable to fit underneath the bed where he hides as he gets older, his own self loathing (he would rather show he hates his ugly body than his actual self), his depression, and the want he has to get out of his house (whether that be going to a hospital or dying...). My ed is this complicated too. It sucks. :)rnrnThanks for the review!!
Date: 03/12/10 01:37 am Title: 26. When Karma Comes Around I Hope It Bites You in the Ass
Hi, I havent reviewed before but I've been avidly checking for new chapters in your story. I love it! I think Bill and Tom's english project should be a song, with maybe Tom doing a bit of rap! As for Bushido and Andreas, someone needs to run over them with a Mack Truck!
Author's Response: Yay! I like avid readers and I like your plan for Bushido and Andreas!! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 03/11/10 10:11 am Title: 27. Skinny Boys And Heineken Don't Mix Well Part 1.
OH . MY . GOD.
I watied SOOOOOO long to comment this story........
IF YOU DONT MAKE MORE SOON... OH HELP ME GOD I AM GONNA GO CRAZYYYYYY !!!!!!!!!
MAKE MOREEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!1
Author's Response: Wow. I'm impressed by your enthusiasm for my story!!! :)
Date: 03/10/10 10:53 pm Title: 27. Skinny Boys And Heineken Don't Mix Well Part 1.
I really dont like Bushido and Andreas... But then again, in this story who does?
Yes, Bill is seriously depressed. It's not funny, and it's so hard to take on alone. Just like you said. I would know, I'm still fighting it, or battling it.. I have to take medication everyday. Normally I get pissed off when people write about Depression, because they always glamorize it. It's nothing to joke about. But not you, you seem to know your stuff. I know I've said this before; but it's true, you are real in your discriptions.
Yea I kinda figured he'd cut in.
I really don't wanna know whats gonna happen. Alchol and clubs. I have a feeling there's going to be a double rape involved too... Not by Tom of coarse.
Author's Response: Excellent Review!! I'm sorry to hear that you're depressed. I haven't had that much experience with depression (except the kind that comes with Anorexia) and to hear that I'm portraying it well is very reassuring. I know what you mean about getting pissed off when people write about depression- I'm the same way when it comes to eating disorder fics- they have to be accurate or I get so annoyed. :)
Date: 03/10/10 02:37 pm Title: 27. Skinny Boys And Heineken Don't Mix Well Part 1.
Oh. Goodness. Bill is going to get tipsy on the first sip, forget about what the whole bottle will do! I think I can see where this is heading though.. I think that Tom is going to go off to bang that chick, then Bill's going to be plastered and Bushido and Andreas are going to come into the club and try to hurt him. Either they'll succeed or Tom will come and save him at the last minute confirming what he thought about Bushido - except it'll be to a whole different level that will leave Tom with maaannnyyyy questions.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! It's great to see what you think will happen :) ...A plastered Bill would be interesting...*winks*
Date: 03/10/10 10:30 am Title: 27. Skinny Boys And Heineken Don't Mix Well Part 1.
make tom walk in on bu and andi hurting Bill.. please please please. u never do as i ask and make tomi find out.
Author's Response: Aww..Don't think I'm not taking what you say into consideration. I just know what's going to happen, and when, and I can guarantee that in the end you'll be screaming "OMG FUCK YES!!" ....Hang in there :)