Date: 03/17/10 08:27 pm Title: 26. When Karma Comes Around I Hope It Bites You in the Ass
Hi
Cheers for Georg!! That's to be brave! Bushido deserves really nasty things to happento him, as well as painful and humilliating ones!
All this self hatred is too much! I don't mean that this could not happen, because I know it does. What I meant is that Bill has a lot of healing to do before he could achieve some sort of happiness.
Hugs!!
Author's Response: Georg is totally awesome!!! Bushido deserves to be wacked on the head with a wet noodle at this point. And as for the self hatred- despite having Anorexia, I am a suprisingly positive person. There are times when I'm completely happy, but then there are times when I'm completely and utterly depressed as well. I think Bill is a naturally positive person, and since he's had amnesia he's a bit less depressed than he was before... still, Bill does have much healing to do before he could be considered healthy or normal...
Date: 03/17/10 08:01 pm Title: 24. Hallo, Bill! We're The Trumpers!
Oh God! Are they singing in fornt of the class?? That'll be awesome... such a way to leave some people gape at their talent.
Tom dashed in to rescue Bill!! Way to go Tom!
Author's Response: Hm...we'll see... Tom is such a life saver^^
Date: 03/17/10 07:51 pm Title: 23. I Like It When I Picture You Smiling
In this chapter I liked Georg a little more, he's not OCC anymore. All we need is a little leak on the image of the perfect family so Jorg can pay, please make it happen, just a little crack that's all I ask.
See u next chapter
Author's Response: A little crack might just pop up soon....
Date: 03/17/10 07:42 pm Title: 22. I'm Sorry
Wow, I'm at lack of comments, so much abuse and cruelty against someone of your family is nonhuman behavior. I want to know what Tom will do when he sees Bill's injuries this time.
hugs!
Author's Response: *hugs back*
Date: 03/17/10 07:32 pm Title: 21. Now This Is What A Real Family Looks Like
Nooo what happen now that earns Bil a beating? Looking too happy? Being too cute? Opening his mouth?
Grrr I'm going to read the next chapter to find out what happen
bye
Author's Response: If Bill was beaten everytime he was "being too cute" he wouldn't be able to walk. XD. Just kidding. Bill is extremely cute though...^_^
Date: 03/17/10 07:12 pm Title: 20. Cooking With Tom
Hi
Well, Tom's plan is not fools proof but it's a beginning.
My mother tends to use the same reward-like system for every activity we do (my sister and I, it always works.
As Korn said in one of his songs "A lonely life whre noone understands you, but don't give up, because the music do"
Once I found a refuge in playing basketball but a lot of people find it in artistic ways.
See you!
Author's Response: Yea, I think it's a good starting point for Tom to begin helping Bill at. I really like the Korn quote btw!!
Date: 03/17/10 06:59 pm Title: 19. I Am Not Okay
Hi
Monsoon was just perfect! Sometimes I've found myself thinking of this song as the promise of something better that is yet to come.
Great chapter, I haven't told you this before bur I hope Jorg suffers an accident and get castrated! He does deserve it for abusing his poor innocent son.
See u around
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like the song!!! I'll think about what you said (...making Jorg suffer....). I want it to happen too :)
Date: 03/17/10 06:45 pm Title: 18. No One Saw Through My Games
Oh I definetely want a yellow school bus roll over Bushido and Andreas. I hate them both.
So Bill's now confiding in Tom a lil more with his problems? So adorable.
I'm really dying to read the next chapter, so, I'm reviewing short.
Bye
Author's Response: A yellow school bus? That might scare the kids inside...How does a monster truck sound? I love how Bill confides in Tom. He's just too cute when he does this :)
Date: 03/17/10 06:29 pm Title: 16. Fallen
Hi
I hate those who abuse of others because they do a permanent damage to the psyche of a person. I can understand better where all that self loathe comes from.
See u!
Author's Response: I cannot understand how someone could abuse another person. How can they justify their actions? Abuse is definately a problem that needs to be resolved before more people become damaged from it.
Date: 03/17/10 06:15 pm Title: 15. I Love You, Mom
You wrote a heavy feeling loaded chapter. Imagine that poor little thing singing to a tomb.... better not to imagine it, too sad.
I could asume Bill's father blame him for his mother death, right?
See you next chapter
bye
Author's Response: Sadness = this chapter :(
Date: 03/17/10 06:02 pm Title: 14. The Way He Feels
Hi
So now Tom's standing for Bill? Great!!It's quite noble of him to do it so, maybe he's not so rotten as I thought at the beginning.
I don't have a problem with the way you describe Bill, I think each author has the right to imagine and describe things the way they consider it better.
bye
Author's Response: Tomi is very noble if I do say so myself. He's just awesome, isn't he? XD
Date: 03/17/10 05:29 pm Title: 13. The Lovely Bones
Hi
My comment about your Q#5 is that while they're at Tom's maybe they'll get closer (not in a romantic way)
I'm going to read next chapter
Hugs!
Author's Response: Good guess :)
Date: 03/17/10 04:49 pm Title: 12. Did I Do That?
Hi
The accident was just as I expected.
The idea of a flashback within another one is not that strage, matter of fact is funny to read.
My favorite phrase so far is "The one who hurts me, is the one who should love me the most." I think this only proves that loving someone gives him the most absolute power to destroy you.
See you next chap
Bye
Author's Response: XD See you next chap!! I'm enjoying reading your reviews^^
Date: 03/17/10 02:20 pm Title: 11. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 3.
Hi!
1. Yes, the entry fits Bill's age.
2. Will you hate me if I agree with you sister? Georg was a little OCC
3. I think his father will cross his body with a belt
Hugs!
Author's Response: Nah, I won't hate you :) I had to rewrite this scene so many times because Georg was origionally even more OOC...I rushed it too much, I think...^^
Date: 03/17/10 01:48 pm Title: 10. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 2.
Hello, well you were right when you say that maybe the whole "I'll show them" might be confusing. I can't even remember the last time I use the no eating thing as a sign of rebeldy, must have been more than 15 years ago. However, I can understand that someone tries to hurt himself to provoke a reaction on others.
See you
Author's Response: I wrote this scene from personal experience. I have an eating disorder (Anorexia nervosa) and to prove I'm "in control" I don't eat. "I'll show them" is one of the strange reasonings behind my actions. It's not intentional, I don't want to hurt myself for attention, it's just something I have to do. It sounds really weird, I know...rn
Date: 03/17/10 01:34 pm Title: 9. Families Aren't Always Fairytales Part 1.
Hello.
Well, if you ask me why Bill calls his father sir, I coul guess it's becasuse he's a very strict person... maybe some mind abusing with his son? hopefully not
Tom's being nice out of remorse and self convenience.
See you next chap!
Author's Response: Yupp, there's definately mind abuse going on there. Stupid over controlling Jorg!
Date: 03/17/10 01:20 pm Title: 8. Getting to Know Me
Hi, well more of the old Bill is disclosed here. Eating disorders are really something delicate, hopefully he will stop hurting himself soon or else he'll scare the hell out of his teachers by passing out... or are they already accostum to it?
Nice chap, i'm going to read the next right away.
Bye
Author's Response: Bill's teachers are pretty unaware of his eating disorder. Bill has been suffering for years and no one has said anything. Frau Mauer only realizes that Bill isn't very healthy because the nurses at the hospital told her. Everyone is simply accustomed to seeing him very skinny in appearance and because he's basically the social outcast, no one really cares.
Date: 03/17/10 01:12 pm Title: 7. The Nightmares Haunt Me When I Sleep
Hi
Please no real romance with Kara, platonic sounds nice though.
Andreas kissing Bill on the forehead? Isn't it a bit strange, I mean if one just wants Bill to be his vacuum -so to speak- why would he have such manifestation of care? I'm confused.
See you next chapter!
Author's Response: I think Andreas kissed Bill on the forehead because let's face it- he's creepy. Plus when he kisses Bill like that, he's reassuring Bill (in a subtle way) that he and Bill really have done that before. Andreas is lying though...
Date: 03/17/10 12:59 pm Title: 6. You Were Doing What?!
Hi
The chapter left a lot of questions to be answer. THough I think the rythim is fine so far. Andreas, Tom, Gustav, Georg... isn't ir enough with just one enemy? I think that Bill must take care from his 'friend' (aka Tom) if he doen't want to end up worst.
And as for the questions:
1. Somehow, I prefer Tom's POV, it's a little more complicated than Bill's but just because Bill's in a state of permanent confusion right now.
2. Strong Enough, Stacie Orrico.
3. Suggestions? no, only a lot of cheers for you.
Hugs!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!! And yea, Bill does have a lot of enemies...awww...it'll get better for him though :)
Date: 03/16/10 07:55 pm Title: 3. Whispers
Ugh! I suffer with Bill, I just suffer once from a bullie, and it was horrible. Bushido does look like one of those mean guys you don't want to cross paths with.
See you around
Author's Response: Aww that sucks. I have a feeling Bushido will be crossing Bill's path a lot more though...^^