Date: 04/13/10 06:22 pm Title: 33. Where He Lies Broken Inside
Great chapter! I wonder if Bill's perception of Tom will change due to regaining his memory. I'm dying for Tom to find out about Jorg. D:
Author's Response: Hmm... interesting thoughs^^
Date: 04/11/10 04:03 pm Title: 33. Where He Lies Broken Inside
yay!! he's in the hospital with ppl actually making sure he eats!! and i hope the doctors are gonna talk to him about how they think he might be victim of abuse and how they wanna help him!! *full of positive thoughts that might be crushed*
just one thing though, that i keep reacting to... why is this fic categorized as gen with no pairings? =S it's slash with bill/jörg, bill/bushido, bill/andreas and quite possibly bill/tom at some point as well...
Author's Response: Hopefully some of your positive thoughts stay strong. *wink wink*. As for the gen category, I always thought that bill/bushido, bill/andreas, etc. meant consensual relationships. Because those relationships aren't consensual, I didn't consider them to be pairings. I think I'm just confused. Should I change the pairings then?
Date: 04/10/10 04:13 pm Title: 33. Where He Lies Broken Inside
Hi so cool can't wait for the next update :) I like your story really much can't wait :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/07/10 06:17 pm Title: 33. Where He Lies Broken Inside
Hi
Holy s*** I reread the chapter today and just got it, Bill's memory is back! Mother! And now, what has happened with the memories in between? Will he forget about 'his' Tom? Surely he will remember the bully Tom, but the caring one? nonono, I'm freaking right now...
See you next chap, anyway.
Kisses
Author's Response: Hmmm... Will Bill forget his Tomi? You'll have to wait and see! Meanwhile, keep freaking out =D
Date: 04/07/10 03:06 am Title: 33. Where He Lies Broken Inside
I think I would have to say that this is my favourite chapter. We finally get to know what really happened the night of Bill's accident, and some questions are starting to be answered. This chapter also sets up some important events later on in the story. (I think.)
But yeah, I'm sososo glad that Bill has his memory back! And I'm probably more excited for the next chapter than I've been for any other chapter in this story. =D
Author's Response: This chapter definately sets up for some major upcoming events. I can't say what events yet... but trust me when I say they'll be good. I'm excited that you're excited for the next chapter, but unfortunately it won't come out until late next week. So you'll just have to wait :)
Date: 04/07/10 12:55 am Title: 33. Where He Lies Broken Inside
Hello beautiful!!
Thank you so much for the chapter, it was awesome! It's the first time I hear about grades of concussions... Poor Bill, If I got it correct Bill got amnesia again? OMG This got a peak today. I'll be waiting to read the next chapter!!
I feel happy to know that not only did I not upset you but also that something I said was useful to you.
If you ever need to talk, or anything, you know that I'm available, right?
Take care please.
Hugs and Kisses.
Velia
Author's Response: I added the grades of concussion part because I am the queen of concussions. Well, not really. I had gotten one from slipping on a bar of soap in the shower once... I can't remember 2 days of my life thanks to that. It was really strange...rnrnAnd I really appreciate your message! It made me smile to think that others care and understand how serious the topic of eating disorders can be. So thanks, and feel free to contact me whenever you want to as well. :)
Date: 04/06/10 10:48 pm Title: 33. Where He Lies Broken Inside
First off... love the song choices you pick... This story is sooo good, I can't choose a favorite.... I was gonna say the chapter when he tells tom. But now that he has his memory back, I don't think he's gonna.... Damn...
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the songs!! Sometimes I debate over a couple songs before I can narrow it down to the perfect one to fit the chapter. More good songs (and plot...) to come!!! XD
Date: 04/06/10 07:44 pm Title: 1. First Day
god i hope so
Author's Response: I'm telling the truth. Anything I promised will happen- will. XD
Date: 04/06/10 07:34 pm Title: 1. First Day
ok, but does he remember anything from he and tom being friends?
Author's Response: You would have found out in the next chapter, but NO. Don't freak out though!! Everything will be resolved in the end. ^^
Date: 04/06/10 07:24 pm Title: 33. Where He Lies Broken Inside
I'm so lost
Author's Response: Sorry for the confusion. Bill got his memory back at the very end of the last chapter. This chapter begins with a flashback of the last day Bill can remember before he got amnesia, during which he was concussed, Tom found his letter to Frau Mauer (chapter 12) and he was beaten up/in a car accident. This chapter ends with the present- Bill is in the hospital after his episode at Bushido's house in the last chapter.
Date: 04/05/10 09:33 pm Title: 32. It Ends Tonight
The sleeper has awakened.
Author's Response: Your review is chillingly good!! Great analogy!!
Date: 04/05/10 04:50 am Title: 32. It Ends Tonight
O_O What the fuh...? Holy crap. That was seriously intense. I know what it's like to not be able to get enough air, and it's some scary shiz. This is one of the most well-written chapters so far, so all your hard work definitely paid off. A+ for you! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I thought this was one of hte best chapters as well. :) I've been there with the whole "not getting enough air" thing too. It's scary as anything! The story- I fell from 12ft in the air from a cheerleading stunt. (I was the top). And I got the wind knocked out of me and couldn't breathe for about a minute and a half. I felt the need to share :]
Date: 04/04/10 12:02 pm Title: 32. It Ends Tonight
Bill remembered everything, hu?
Author's Response: Yuppers :(
Date: 04/03/10 12:30 pm Title: 32. It Ends Tonight
This is so great..
Author's Response: XD
Date: 04/03/10 12:22 pm Title: 32. It Ends Tonight
O_O!!!!!! WHOA!!!!!!...man that is SURE SOME ANGST RIGHT THERE!!!!! and i freakin loved it ^_^...kekeke....man...Bill going CRAZY and freakin Andi is figuring it out...will you help Bill or not...and his STUPID parents are probably do nothing...Dumb Bill parents...man when is someone gonna find out what happen to Bill....next chapter ^_~..hehehe...awww man...i so want to know what is gonna happen in the next chapter...T__T
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! XD
Date: 04/03/10 01:59 am Title: 32. It Ends Tonight
O__O
I still love you! = ]
Author's Response: =)
Date: 04/02/10 11:17 pm Title: 32. It Ends Tonight
What the hell is this?!! Why do you leave us hanging, begging for more?? Curse cliffhangers and the person that came up with them!!!
Ok. Done with my rant.. I really can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. Is Andi finally gonna be friends with Tom and not Bushido?? Will Bill's dad be pissed off because the cops were called?? Grr.. So many unanswered questions....UNTIL NEXT TIME!!!
Author's Response: So many questions!! All will be answered soon though. XD rnrnAnd I agree with you- curse the inventor of cliffhangers!!!
Date: 04/02/10 10:55 pm Title: 32. It Ends Tonight
Ooooh you bad girl you, you know how to keep us hooked.. You're delaying the moment we're all begging for.. Naughty! Too much anticipation, you're killing me!
Author's Response: More soon!! XD
Date: 04/02/10 10:54 pm Title: 31. Nervous Breakdowns Break Me
Well, Ai ndanu Bushido are the ones to blame for the druggung.. But the rape was all daddy-o.. How could someone rape their own child?? DISCUSTING!!
Author's Response: Some people rape their own children because they were abused when they were young as well... the cycle of abuse continues. Others are sick fucks, pedophiles, or just plain creeps. I think that all children who are abused should seek help or counseling, and we need to break the cycle of abuse in domestic cases. I'm not too informed on the subject, but that's all I do know. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/02/10 05:00 pm Title: 32. It Ends Tonight
*gets out battle weaponry* ATTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCKKK!!!!!! *charges*
Author's Response: *Ahhhh! runs and hides* I was expecting someone to attack.