Date: 11/22/11 12:28 am Title: [La Mujer de mi Hermano]
Now how come this only has 8 reviews? I don't understand. :O This is a really good one. And I love the way you wrote it in first-person point of view. b29;
Author's Response:
Haha, it's okay, sweets. The number of reviews really doesn't matter to me. I'm just gratful for anyone who takes some time to type what they thought. :P I'm really glad you liked it. And, to tell you the truth, this was king of hard to write, because, despite what everyone thinks, writing in first person is not that easy. Thank you. :)
Date: 06/11/11 04:05 am Title: [La Mujer de mi Hermano]
My heart ached as I read this story. I really like the style and how each word, sentence or paragraph grasped emotions like no stories did. This story is one of my favorites.
Author's Response:
Wow. Thank you so much. You reviewed with just a few words but this is still tremendously meaningful to me. I'm so very glad you liked so much about it. :)
Date: 04/16/11 10:31 pm Title: [La Mujer de mi Hermano]
oh my god!:''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''(AMAZING
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, darling. :) Glad you liked it.
Date: 07/11/10 11:48 pm Title: [La Mujer de mi Hermano]
sounds good so far!
but this sounds pretty much like bill.
its... his view points? i guess...?
anyway, update soon. :)
Author's Response: Awe, honey! :( apparently you didn't see it, but this is a one-shot, so there will be no updates on this one! :/ I hope you enjoyed it anyways, even though you expected some more! And it's whomever you wanted it to be. I think it has a little of both twins so you're free to choose whomever ended up happy and whomever ended up alone x) Let you on a little secret, though? I though of Bill when I re-read it, too! X) Take care, hon, and thanks for reading!
Date: 04/10/10 07:45 pm Title: [La Mujer de mi Hermano]
Ah! I loved this. When I write, I also leave is conspicuous and try and let the reader interpret for themselves who the narrator/ main character is. A lot of my poetry is that way..not only stories.
To me, of course, Bill was the one left alone. He seems to fit the category better than Tom. At the beginning, it did seem Tom-ish, but as the letter progressed it just screamed "Bill" to me. It was touching to hear the pain this caused the narrator. Though the pain of the woman involved wasn't elaborated on, it was still understood. Or, at least, I understood it. So, needless to say, this was just the angst I needed. Merci!
Author's Response:
x) hehe, my leaning towards Bill when it's twins we're talking about backfired. I really tried hard to make it as equal as possible, seeing as I didn't have a particular twin in my mind while writing this :P But you're right. Somehow, Bill seems to always fit the category of being the one being hurt...
I'm glad that this got to fulfill your needs for angst ^^
Date: 02/21/10 06:50 pm Title: [La Mujer de mi Hermano]
Aww...that was good...
Author's Response: Thanks :) Glad you think so!
Date: 02/05/10 04:23 am Title: [La Mujer de mi Hermano]
I'm flabbergasted that this story only received 2 reviews!! O.o well 3 now ;) For some strange reason i kept thinking about 'braveheart' when i read this, you know how they have to keep sneaking around and then get torn apart in the end?<-- that's a good comparing, don't worry, hehe :] anyways, starting my review...
OH MY GOD!! That was enthrallingly beautiful!!!!! :D I'm crying now as i'm reviewing, lol, but that was written so amazingly! It was so captivating and i feet for who ever (which twin) wrote it.
I love the way you didn't pick a particualr twin and left it open for the reader to interpret. Personally, i'm more of a Tom admirer, but to me, that was so Bill :]
It's so sad, and the fact that i was listening to a random song, which by the way was 'Dreaming With A Broken Heart', by 'John Mayer' While i was reading this, didn't help suppress the tears, lol. But this is such a fantstic story!!!
My favourite line, where i started crying x(, was "and that obviously led to, finally, staying awake the whole night slowly and passionately loving each-other... " in fact i rarely 'cry-cry' during stories, so congrats, HEHE :]
I agree how cheating is awful, and it's no acception and i'm not trying to make excuses or anyhting, but this wasn't really the bad kind of cheating, if that makes sense... I mean like, it's not just fucking, it was more love, actual genuine, love... it's sad they couldn't be together; and i feel for the woman, too. Lucky their secret was never exposed, if i was her, it would have killed me to choose when you love 2 men differently but genuinly:
Well, now i'm blabbering, lol, but i think i've expressed how much i actually love this story :D So favouirng it!!
Author's Response:
Oh, my gosh! :') You just made my entire week, hon :) Thank you, so much!
I personally wasn't thinking about any twin in particular when I wrote this. I tried to put a little of both just so you could pick whichever you wanted the main character to be ;) But seeing that I'm totally opposite from you (I'm stuck with Bill when it's about picking a favorite twin, and anyone in the band, for that matter x)), :P I think it showed, maybe? I dunno... :) I just liked the idea of involving the reader in the story, so anyone feels free of putting face to the main guy :P
No matter how few reviews I get for my works, yours is, really, the kind of reviews I post for :)
I loved hearing, or in this case, reading how much you liked it, and how affected you were by it (even if I am sorry I made you cry x)) and I really loved reading your thoughts about it (even if at some point you thought it was blabbering :) It was not! It was just plain nice all around)!
Thanks A LOT for the fave, love, and I hope you keep enjoying my stories just as much! ;)
Date: 12/27/09 12:45 am Title: [La Mujer de mi Hermano]
I'm confused....as to why hasn't anyone else commented this story...
Where should i start?..I LOVED everything about this story, the plot,also the way we get to decide who the characters are and more importantly the way you let us see what true love still means to some people and also the effects cheating has on both, the adulterous and the cheated upon, even though we didn't get the husband's side of the story.
The letter format was just the cherry on top.
I liked it so so much and i'm still dumbstruck, you pulled that off very well=D *You rock!*XD
Anyway all i wanted to tell you is that this a an amazing one-shot and is definitely going into my favorites*hugs*
Author's Response:
Haha, I'm so glad you liked this enough to make such a lovely comment... Thank you :) And I'm really glad, too, that you were able to understand what I meant to put into the story.. :)
Thank you, again, for those kind words... You've left me quite flaterred! And also, thanks a lot for the fave! ^^
& You rock too, hun! ^^ *huggles~*
Date: 12/26/09 08:29 pm Title: [La Mujer de mi Hermano]
Dear BillsMK,
I guess I'll be the first one to send you a quick little comment about this story (As a late xmas gift :)! I actually really enjoyed it. The anonymity of the characters really plays into the intrigue of what is occurring. Furthermore, it allows the audience to choose who they believe to be the adulterous wife and which brother she chose to cheat upon.
I also really enjoyed the fact that it was written in a letter format. It truly allowed for the reader to feel as if they had stumbled onto the letter itself, and thus, stumble on to a secret that they may have not been supposed to know. Having stumbled on to a similar situation once in my life, it really reminded me of the dirty little secrets that we all have and how many of our past experiences in life may contribute to guilt that lies in our subconscious.
Anyways, all that to say that it was a wonderful tale and I congratulate you on your story.
Merry late Christmas!
Ryze
Author's Response:
Dear Ryze,
I believe this is one of the loveliest reviews I've ever recieved! Thank you, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it enough to tell me about it! I'm also glad that you really understood what I was trying to transmit to the readers with the story, which makes me believe I didn't do such a bad job at writting x)
I was actually not sure about the letter format in the beguining... Thank you, again for dissipating my doubt!
Merry late Christmas to you, too! :)
xx, BillsMK