Date: 04/30/23 09:13 pm Title: A Dream Come True
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 03/24/12 11:16 am Title: A Dream Come True
poor bill :/ i wanna have a sequel....
Date: 02/17/12 02:07 pm Title: A Dream Come True
Oh boy, this is certainly OOC. Lol. I read the warnings and whatnot, but both the twins personalities are odd- Bill is delusional, and Tom is too cold and harsh. It's not very human, for anyone to act like that. I think that there could have been ways to change your dialogue to make your characters more human like they were at the beginning of this fic, and still fulfill your non-con plot. Nevertheless, I liked reading this. It was different and had a unique plot. I just kept hoping Tom would loosen up and at the end tell Bill it was not ok what he did, but Bill was his little brother, so he would help him get over his sick desires so they could be normal again, or something like that where Tom doesn't cut him out of his life entirely. The ending was disappointing tbh. :( Anywho, this was cool cuz you dared to be different. Well done. :)
Date: 02/01/12 01:27 pm Title: A Dream Come True
Wow.. very well written really! At first I hated on Bill and felt bad for Tom but in the end I felt really sorry for poor Bill haha.. also I have to admit it was sexy hexy x3
Date: 12/24/10 12:20 am Title: A Dream Come True
Oh, umm...no. If I had known that was how it was going to end, I wouldn't have read it. Jesus. OOC. You should adjust your warnings.
Author's Response: Ok, well I'm sorry about that. I'll adjust them a.s.a.p. Sorry.
Date: 08/11/10 05:29 am Title: A Dream Come True
Awww that was sad! Hott but sad.
Date: 07/23/10 04:46 pm Title: A Dream Come True
This was hot but I feel bad for both of them in the end :(
Date: 06/12/10 06:40 pm Title: A Dream Come True
Bill's a psycho but for some reason i enjoyed your story XD
Date: 05/16/10 11:54 am Title: A Dream Come True
ouch!!!!
Date: 05/14/10 09:41 pm Title: A Dream Come True
Oh my God. Though it's a sad and repulsive story, it is SO well written - I almost believed it. Respect.
Date: 04/29/10 11:32 pm Title: A Dream Come True
this was so good. sequel please!
Date: 03/28/10 11:46 am Title: A Dream Come True
Ohhh, this was breathtaking
but i loved it so much
Please, make a sequel n bring tom back to him
they meant to be together
splendid work!!!
Date: 02/02/10 09:54 am Title: A Dream Come True
Aw, poor Bill. Though he could of thought of a better way to tell his brother... XD Great story!
Date: 01/01/10 03:11 am Title: A Dream Come True
Wow!
I'm Speechless o_o
Author's Response: Heehee!! Good speechless or bad speechless? è.è
Date: 12/28/09 06:26 pm Title: A Dream Come True
Aww! Why is it that Bill did that to Tom,but I think Tom is totes an asshole at the end?