I don’t normally read mpreg but this caught my eye and I wanted to see where it was going. Looking forward to an update!

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you've converted! XD

Hmmmm what? Okay I'm so lost its not even funny. First bill's dad beats the shit out of him and he goes to live on the street then some time pass he is at some clinic then back at school and then off to some club and when he takes off from the club he goes "home"? But then you have him back on the street again?? With a fucked up arm that he got after his dad beat him?? Did he not feel it when we went to the clinic or school?? Dude it feels like your jumping around a lot and have him doing so many things all at once but is he on the street or at home? But don't get me wrong I really like it so far (from what I could understand) but you may need to add more details. Like how he is getting to school or is he eating right. Its the little things that help a lot.

Author's Response: You're getting confused because the parts that you're talking about, you know, the clinic, the club, the parts with his 'friends' are all flashbacks. If you reread it now, knowing that, it'll make much more sense. :)

omg, I feel so bad for Bill. I love this story already, more more more please!!

Author's Response: Well... If you insist. :D