Wow...maybe Jorg had a heart after all? Who knew?!

Yay, Tom and Bill are friends, and Bill has someone in the family (kinda) to trust. Oh his parents are in deep crap for what they did to their only child. I love it, more please!!! and Soon!!

o i know im gonna love this story...cant wait to read more!

...YAY AWESOME CHAPTER RRRRRRR RRRR 8D

can peanut be a boy. let something bad happen to Jorg,and i have a feeling that there's wonna be some tension between tom and bill.

aww i really love this story:) i hope you post chapters regularly so i dont have to wait for more too long lol

Eriiiiiiiin. I looooove itttttt.
Like really truly love it XD
The whole plot and story line and is awesome. And this is rare, because usually mpreg doesn't agree with me. But this story does. Bill definitely is a diva, but it's to be expected from the lifestyle he's leaving and now coming into. Tom shouldn't have blabbed to Ollie. That was kinda not cool, but I'm pretty sure he'll get on Bill's good side somehow :) I'm favoriting this. Add more soon!

Om nom nom. I've found me some good fic. :)

I'm glad I decided to take a look at this. I'm more or less ambivalent toward m-preg and a bit wary of it, but I found I just couldn't scroll past this story. First of all, I'd like to compliment your characterizations; you take the time to flesh out each character rather than just assault the readers with plot, and even give names and descriptions to the secondary characters. Bill is intriguing; he's not too arrogant or stubborn like his elite friends, but isn't totally disillusioned [ie when he admonished Simone for getting his nice coat dirty; his habitual etiquette]. He knows what he wants, but when he does he jumps maybe a bit too quickly, though ultimately it seems to be working for him. And I could not thank you enough for giving the Trümpers a bit of interest; they certainly aren't an average family that just happens upon Bill, falls in love, and the rest is history.

The only major problem I find is that the way in which you covered them so briefly makes it seem as if you invented them solely to be convenient to Bill; since the POV keeps switching to them, I assume they'll be as major characters as Bill, thus you ought to spend as much time and effort fleshing them out [introducing each of the children & workers and giving a bit more backstory before they meet Bill---you lose much of the momentum after their meeting]. Particularly Tom, whom I feel like I don't know enough about yet. Ideally, the entire introduction to the Trümper House would be Tom's POV, and then switch back to Bill's POV once all the characters are introduced and the background established. You also could have omitted the POV switches entirely, so that everything was from Bill's eyes and the reader has to learn about the characters as Bill does, which also lends more realism. Mixing the two, as you did, lessens the emphasis on the Trümper family and thus makes them seem more 'convenient' and less round. The reader should get to know the characters thoroughly, either through the characters themselves or through Bill.

About the story in general, however; I love the little idiosyncrasies and interactions between characters, like when Gustav and Georg are carrying Bill inside and Tom just assumes he's another junkie. It's such a small detail, but it emphasizes the divergent attitudes of all the characters within the Trümper home. Simone is the most concerned and devoted one, while Gordon seems to be is less serious [by the way he was fascinated with Bill rather than worried], and Tom is apathetic [or trying to be]. I want to say that the characters should be a bit older [at least the younger ones---Bill, Tom, and their respective posses] judging by the way in which they act, but I also lived very unfulfilled teenage years so maybe it's just me. :) Still, I feel like Tom harbors a bit too much angst for it to be entirely of the teenage variety, and Bill is just a bit too sharp-minded and independent to be just sixteen. It's not a huge bother, just something to consider.

And, just as a couple random asides; you have some goofed up html tags in the first chapter and Bill calling his baby 'Peanut' is absolutely adorable. :D Please give Billa lots of tummy rubs ♥

This is such a cute story!
And Peanut is such an adorable nickname! lol
I can't wait for the next chapter!!
=)

I really really am enjoying this, and I love your writing style! I can't wait to hear more. :)