Date: 02/28/10 07:20 pm Title: The Trümper
I really loved this chapter. Just a little thing I would tell you because I hate when people don't tell me I did it. You spelled Simone wrong once and I just thought you would like to know. You have fabulous writing skills, don't take this the wrong way. I love the way this is developing too, very nice. anyway, here's the place Simone is spelled wrong."Brandi was a junkie, Tom, and a liar. She'd been lying so long that it came naturally. She didn't care who she hurt or why," Simon said sadly. "You'll get your case, honey. You'll find your one."
Date: 02/28/10 06:26 pm Title: Emo, Grindy, Happy, Emo...
Nice chapter! I liked how Tom backed BIll to the corner! So, um, to the banner. You haven't told me if you liked the banner, or thanked me or even given me credit for it in the summary or in the story notes, and that's basically how it works. So if you could like, add a simple "banner by Lazurline" under the banner on in the story notes, that would be nice. Thanks.
Date: 02/28/10 12:55 pm Title: Emo, Grindy, Happy, Emo...
oh shit more more!
Date: 02/28/10 12:27 pm Title: Peanut
This is shocking so far, definitely good though. I like how its coming along and I think I will really love it all.
Date: 02/28/10 10:06 am Title: Emo, Grindy, Happy, Emo...
*new reader alert*
squeeeeee!!! x)
omfg! =0 soooo totally awsome! =0
i LOVE the way u write =D paints really nice (ok, not always nice, but good =P) pictures in my mind ^^
can't wait for more!! =D
Date: 02/28/10 08:00 am Title: Emo, Grindy, Happy, Emo...
i keep reading but noooo update.. please please update
Date: 02/28/10 07:22 am Title: Emo, Grindy, Happy, Emo...
Oh you are so good with the drama...*bites nails*
Date: 02/28/10 07:19 am Title: Emo, Grindy, Happy, Emo...
:( poor tom, poor bill.
Date: 02/28/10 06:19 am Title: Emo, Grindy, Happy, Emo...
*_________________________* zomg
Date: 02/28/10 03:20 am Title: The AlienSquirrelly Thing
Oh God, I can never resist tummy rubs. *rub rub rub*
I loved the ultrasound scene. Quite realistic. The science geek in me wants to know 'HOW???', but I shut her up ^_^
Date: 02/28/10 02:56 am Title: The Trümper
Finding this fic has turned out to be such a pleasant surprise. It's different from the other mpregs I've read before and I love how you're developing the characters. I already love Peanut and it's a little sad that when he/she comes out, he/she will probably have a different name ^_^
Date: 02/28/10 02:18 am Title: Emo, Grindy, Happy, Emo...
Wow. That was so unexpected. Gah. I can't believe Tom did that! Poor Bill... Anywaaays, thanks for the update! ♥ Can't wait for the next one. :D
Date: 02/28/10 01:28 am Title: Emo, Grindy, Happy, Emo...
dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuun!!!! more soon please!!! i will lend you my Billa and Tomi blow up dolls!!! d:)
Date: 02/28/10 01:21 am Title: Royally Fucked
hahahaha. i love this. d:)
Date: 02/28/10 01:13 am Title: The Abyss
poor little billa!
Date: 02/28/10 12:11 am Title: The Job Hunt
what did tomi do?!
Date: 02/27/10 11:55 pm Title: The AlienSquirrelly Thing
is it so they could track him when he got the money out?
Date: 02/27/10 11:55 pm Title: Emo, Grindy, Happy, Emo...
Awww! I love this story so much!! It's so original! *favorites*
Date: 02/27/10 09:58 pm Title: Emo, Grindy, Happy, Emo...
Oh hell no---you did not leave us hanging like that!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
Good lord i'll be on the edge of my seat waiting for an update!
Date: 02/27/10 09:34 pm Title: Emo, Grindy, Happy, Emo...
OMG Poor bill! Please write more soon!